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Broken Dreams...Sad story. What if Bella had cancer, would Edward change her?

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Hi everyone! So, I have this idea for a story on top of the other one that I am now writing and I wanted an opinion on whether or not anyone would be interested in it? It may not be a very long story as I have it in my head to possibly go to at least ten or fifteen chapters for it. I do have to strongly imply that this will be a very, very, very sad short story. At times it will be difficult to read. This is for a friend of mine that sadly did not survive her fight with the same thing.


In Memory of,


                                                                Diana Harris






Preface:



“I'm so sorry Isabella...”

“It's...Bella...just Bella.”

“You should probably have your father here with you. I should have waited to tell you this until you brought your father into this...”

“No...I...won't...hurt him...this...way.” I couldn't think at the moment. That one word was constant inside my head, haunting my every thought. Leukemia. Acute Leukemia.

“I'm sorry Bella, but as your doctor I have to call your father in. You are only seventeen and right now, it appears that you're in shock and cannot make the best decisions. In regards to your father Bella, there is no reason he shouldn't know about this.”

“This will...devastate him. I can't...tell him. I wouldn't even know how.” How do you tell your own parent that you will die before them? I couldn't do it and I knew it. I knew the doctor was right about my shock. I couldn't even form the onset of tears. I couldn't move a muscle and they began to ache from the stiffness. I was very sure that I couldn't blink. How long did I have? How much time did I have to say goodbye to everyone that I held dear to me? How was I supposed to tell them all? How was I supposed to tell...Edward?


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Okay so just a small portion, but I thought that might be enough to get an idea if anyone would like to read any further. Please leave a comment and let me know if you would like to otherwise I may go ahead and not go any further. Thanks



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Hey Jesse,

 

If I say one way or the other, than no one will want to finish the rest because they know how it ends, so I just don't want to say, lol. It will be okay Jesse, don't be sad.

 

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still really awesome keep updating PLZ PLZ

Hi Bella loves Edward,

 

thank you for the compliment. Thanks for reading.

 

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amazing as always. This is the best chapter yet, I'm anticipating more!!!

Hi Jesse,

 

Thanks :) Oh you think so? I'm so happy to hear that. As always thanks for reading.

 

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Please update soon! I can't handle the suspense anymore...

Charlie is really brave and Edward seems so lost and afraid! He wants to stick to his principles, but he really doesn't know how to handle this situation. Bella doesn't have the strength to handle a fight, but she is the only one who would really be able to persuade him. Very well written!

Hi Seuqnet!

 

I will try and update soon, I promise. When it comes to your child, you can't imagine how brave you would become in order to save them so Charlie what Charlie is doing is quite normal. He's a good daddy.

 

In Edward's eyes, the panic overwhelmed him when he found out. He never thought that something like this was possible with his Beloved Bella, so really he is still trying to cope with it. I wonder how this will end, hehe. Thanks for reading as always.

 

OMG!!!! I just caught up on the story!!! I almost cried when Bella told Charlie!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!! I hope Edward changes Bella!!! Please update soon!!!!

Hi Rachel,

 

I know, the way I had it planned with her talk with Charlie would have truly made everyone cry, but you wouldn't have liked the outcome so I went this way instead. It was still hard this way, but at least no one hates me, lol if I were to do it the other way.

 

We will see what Edward does or doesn't do soon enough. I will update soon. 

 

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Uh-maze-ing Delilah!! I am literally at edge here. Decisions, decisions! Edward should at least. . . Try. Try, or else our little Bella will soon be a gonner. And that will be sad! Charlies visit went a bit like I had imagined, which is awesome, because I got to read it in your point of view while thinking about mine :)
You writing in 3rd person is great b.t.w! No need to be nervous at all! :)
I can't wait for an update!! This just keeps getting better! <3
B.t.w: Have you read my story A TWIST OF LIFE? It's now completed and I would love to get your opinion on it! Links up on my page:) If you wanna read it ;)
~Lauren
omg!! edward just change her! im getting really mad at him!!! cant wait to see wut hes gonna say to charlie though!! post more soon!!!
Yeah, but her heart might not be strong enough to change! What if it doesn't work! ah! I think I'm losing it. I want Frank back.

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