Broken Hopes: Sam Meets His Daughter(Pg13)

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Permalink Reply by Alexandrea Elizabeth Cullen on August 22, 2012 at 9:57am

Ugh!  I knew you would throw some kind of cliffhanger in, but didnt think you'd have her kidnapped!

Can't wait to see who realizes she is gone first.

Permalink Reply by ♥vamplvr27♥ on August 22, 2012 at 11:25am

omg!! I can't wait for Darren's reaction... he better be ready to go kick some butt!

Permalink Reply by Eponine <3 on August 23, 2012 at 7:40am

Darren you have to help her!!! Loved it Emily's part was quite interesting.

Permalink Reply by Seugnet du Toit on August 23, 2012 at 5:08pm

I just found your story and I love it!  I am glad Leah could find a little happiness, if not complete happiness, towards the end of her life, but it is so sad that she had to be taken away before Adriana would meet her father. Adriana and Darren are such a great couple!  I do hope he (or Sam) comes to her rescue, and that Alex, like Emily, will realize his mistake.  They were both really jealous of Ade and couldn't understand why Sam suddenly focused all his attention on his (and Leah's) daughter.  Sam made a mistake choosing between Ade and his other family, but of course he had to listen to his imprint. Luckily she realized what she was doing to him and he realised what he was doing to them and now they could try to sort things out with the children.  I thought it was Ross who was looking for her when Alex was so drunk.  Now I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen to Adriana and hoping they will find her in time.  Maybe this time Sam, Seth and Darren will have to settle their differences and work together to rescue her.  Maybe Alex might also surprise us when he realises what he had done!  I hope this time Darren finds her like he always seems to do!  Please keep me updated.  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Permalink Reply by Amanda --> on August 23, 2012 at 7:55pm

Love it!!!! I'm super excited to see what you post next.

I used to hate Emily in this story but I totally forgive her now...haha. :)

Update soon! <3

Permalink Reply by Rebekah on October 13, 2012 at 2:45am

Update?

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on August 23, 2012 at 1:34pm

(new reader ) I love this story :) I felt so bad for Leah and I cried when she died. For Ade :(. I hated Alex from the first moment he ingored Ade and when he looked at her I thought he might have Imprinted or something but lol he didn't. I can see where Alex gets his anger from (Emily) I can't believe she made Sam chose between her and his own daughter, that is such so wrong. I always liked her in the saga books/films but here is just an old witch lol. I think Darren is really sweet and I like him. I wonder what will happen now that she has been kidnapped. Please keep me updated

Permalink Reply by ♥Rachel♥ [ PainfullyShy ] on August 30, 2012 at 1:10pm

Oh no Ade!!

I hope they will notice that she's gone and maybe Darren, Alex and Sam will put aside their differences to find her.

I kinda like Emily again...never liked Sam and Alex though.

Why is Sam still phasing?

Permalink Reply by Kelley Brady on August 23, 2012 at 10:10pm

great update!  can't wait to read your next one!

Permalink Reply by Nik-Edward.Is.My.Love♥ ♥ ♥ on October 24, 2012 at 4:31am

Firstly-sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry…sorry a million times! I have been so frikking busy people! Just got time to start with the writing yesterday! Phew! I never realised that college would be this hectic. I’m falling back in my subjects, and that sucks you know? It’s impossible to write with that mindset.

Anyway, please do try to understand.

Thanks for everyone who reviewed for the previous chapter.

 

 

Firstly-sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry…sorry a million times! I have been so frikking busy people! Just got time to start with the writing yesterday! Phew! I never realised that college would be this hectic. I’m falling back in my subjects, and that sucks you know? It’s impossible to write with that mindset.

Anyway, please do try to understand.

Thanks for everyone who reviewed for the previous chapter. 

*praying that I have readers left*

Here’s the chapter…don’t hate me.

 

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Chapter 25: Fear

 

Adriana’s POV:

 

I opened my eyes slowly, my head ached a lot and my neck felt sore. I realised I couldn’t move my arms or legs. I moved and tried to jerk my body free but I couldn’t loosen up even a little. I realised I was tied up.

 

How had I ended up here? My memory was vague but things started to fall in pieces. I had been out to shop for some grocery and then taken the wrong way back home. I had met Ross there…oh my god! Ross! I turned around or rather tried to turn around searching for my kidnapper. The least I could move was my head, though it wasn’t much helpful, it told me that I was alone.

 

I looked around; I was in what seemed a small cabin. Toward my right was just an empty wall without a window, and left a couple of chairs and a desk. And toward my feet was a tiny door, heart beating faster than ever I began to panic. All I could do was simply stare at the patched ceiling from which hung a low voltage bulb.

 

“What do I do?” I said to myself repeatedly. My body felt numb and my breath was hitched; the only thing I continued to do was try to release my bonds. Every time I failed, the panic just increased.

 

Fear and failure seemed to catch up with me as I realised that there was no possible way I would be able to set myself free.

 

What was he going to do to me? Obviously hand over to the people with whom he had spoken a long while back? And what would they do to me? I had a vague idea of exactly the kind of people he was associated with but I tried not to think about that. That would just scare me more. I had to be calm and practical now.

 

“Darren!” I gasped. Tears formed in my eyes and I started crying. Would he guess what had happened? Or would he just think that I had run away? Maybe no one would realise…or even if they did, it would be too late.

 

I stiffened as I heard the door creak; my heart felt like it would jump out of my chest.

 

Maybe it was someone who had come to check; maybe I could ask them for help. I was about to talk when I realised who it actually was.

 

Ross.

 

His eyes shifted to my face as soon as he locked the door. Even in the dim light he could tell I was awake. He switched on the light right above me, I was almost blinded by it brightness.

 

“Hello there,” he snorted. “I didn’t think you would be awake so soon.”

 

I didn’t bother reply, just grinded my teeth.

 

“Angry much?” he chuckled.

 

“You will never get away with this!” I threatened him; my voice had more confidence than I felt. Thank god that it didn’t tremble.

 

“Really?” he turned to me with a sarcastic smile.

 

I simply stared back.

 

“And who is going to stop me?” he laughed.

 

I pursed my lips and turned away from him.

 

“Your boy friend?” he continued.

 

My head turned to him in surprise, “Ooh, I know all about him,” he winked.

 

“How?” a whisper escaped my lips.

 

“You have been bad haven’t? Living alone with a guy already? Some may commend that as offence!” he laughed maniacally.

 

“That’s none of your business!” I spat, I had no idea why I was feeling so confident and arguing with him.

 

“Touché! I had to make it my business honey, I did a lot of spying…had to,” he said in a normal tone.

 

Both of us remained quiet for few moments.

 

“Let me go please?” I said softly. I wasn’t even sure of how much time had passed since he had kidnapped me. Had anyone realized? I hoped to think it was a yes, but I wasn’t too sure.

 

“Giving in so easily? No more threatening!” he spoke genially.

 

“Please Ross,” I pleaded, my eyes watering.

 

“My name’s not Ross,” he smirked.

 

“Please,” I continued to plead.

 

“I m not going to leave you,” he spoke darkly.

 

He came closer, I blinked away the tears and realised what was in his hand, a syringe.

 

“What are you doing?” I asked frantically.

 

“Shush relax,” he whispered and sat down on the side of the lumpy.

 

“No...” I struggled.

 

“I said relax!” he ordered, one of his hands encircling my arm.

 

“No!” I screamed. Oh my god! I had been such an idiot! All this while I could have been screaming! Someone would have heard me!

 

“Help!” I screamed repeatedly.

 

“Shut up! No one is going to hear you! No one is around.” He said menacingly. And that last word of his sent shivers down my spine.

 

Darren…I need you. At the thought of Darren’s warm protective self, I started crying again.

 

I felt the sharp pinch as he inserted the needle in my view. “What’s it going to do?” I cried, feeling feeble already.

 

“Just going to make you a bit drugged, you are going to be too tired to try anything and that applies even speaking. I will be the one who will be doing everything,” he said silently.

 

My eyes widened…what was he going to do? I could already feel tired but my mind felt alert.

 

“I don’t usually do this…but you have given me so much trouble,” he bent down and whispered in my ear.

 

First he untied my wrists and feet, it was an amazing opportunity but I could hardly move. I just lay there like a corpse.

 

“Hope your boyfriend doesn’t mind…I will try and be gentle.”

 

Tears started rolling down by eyes, I knew what he would be doing but I didn’t know how far he would go. I wanted to scream, wanted to run away from him…far away! But I could do nothing but watch him get closer.

 

“Looks like I will have to keep few rules…” he smirked.

 

In no moment his lips were against mine, I continued to cry, my thoughts on Darren. I understood what he meant when he said that he had rules as he didn’t try to strip me off my clothes or anything such that. All he did was kiss my lips, my neck, my shoulders and my arms. But still that was enough to make me feel disgusted. Make me want to die. When he would hand me over to his bosses this was how my life would probably be! Being touched…always being touched.

 

As Ross continued throwing himself on me my mind cringed away from the pain. Darren was on my mind…I was no longer sure if Darren would continue to love me.

 

That is if he would ever find me.

 

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Darren’s POV:

 

It had gotten quite late; I had been made to stay longer since I had missed a couple of previous shifts at my day job. Right now, I was here with a senior as he taught me how to arrange a set of slides.

 

“What’s wrong Darren? You have been very restless,” he asked.

 

“I m sorry…I was just thinking something,” I hid my irritation very poorly.

 

“You seemed to be thinking that a lot,” he sounded cross.

 

“I m really sorry, I had plans this evening,” I apologised. The whole time I had been here, I hadn’t been able to stop myself from thinking of Adriana. I had this weird tugging in my heart that made me wish I was with her; it probably was due to the fact that I hadn’t been away from her this long.

 

“Plans with girlfriend?” he chuckled.

 

“Er…yeah,” I said blushing a bit.

 

“I didn’t know you had one,” he grinned.

 

“Just got official recently,” I shrugged.

 

“Alright, let’s pack up!” he winked.

 

“Thanks Josh,” I beamed at him.

 

“Sure kid, I get it.” He smiled.

 

We switched off the computers and arranged the rest of the things in order.  

 

“Your first huh?” he asked.

 

“Eh…yes,” I agreed.

 

“Good for you,” he replied. “You know what? I will get the rest of the things, why don’t you leave?”

 

“Sure?” I asked excitedly.

 

“Yes, go now!” he waved.

 

“Thanks Josh! You’re the best! Bye!” I smiled and ran out.

 

I got to my car quickly and started it, it was already 6.30. Maybe I should get pizza or something. Or should I take her out? But I vaguely remembered about Seth saying he would be out for the rest of the day, yeah…I would take pizza. I stopped at the closest corner and ordered 4 medium pizzas. 3 for me and 1 for Adriana not that she was going to eat the whole but still!

 

Driving almost like a maniac I reached La Push. I kicked on the accelerator harder. I should have gone to my parents place and freshened up, but coming to Seth’s place which had been mine for quite a long time had made it a habit.  

 

I was surprised when I saw that the house was dark, none of the lights were on, and it didn’t seem like anyone was inside. I immediately got out of the car and walked to the door.

 

I knocked twice but didn’t get any response. Maybe she went with the Clearwaters’? But I didn’t really think so.

 

I shouldn’t be doing this, but I needed to check. I walked to the backyard and looked around; Adriana’s window was wide open. Hoping that she was laying sleep and nothing had happened to her, I used the tree for a little help and jumped into her room. Adriana’s scent hit me as soon as I entered but it wasn’t fresh. It looked like she hadn’t been here for hours.

 

“Ade?” I called just to check.

 

As I walked I switched on the lights not that my eyes needed it but it was just a formality.

 

“Adriana?” I called in a louder voice.

 

No answer.

 

Okay, I was starting to feel a little worried now. It was okay, I didn’t have to panic just because she wasn’t here. Taking out my cell, I dialled Seth’s number. He picked it up at the third ring.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Um hey Seth,” I greeted nervously.

 

“What’s up?” he asked distractedly, I could hear baseball commentary from the background.

 

“Nothing much, I was just wondering if Adriana is with you guys.”

 

“Ade? No she isn’t. Isn’t she at home?” I had got his attention now.

 

“Well no, so I thought she was with you.” I explained.

 

“Actually, we went to the hospital first, then thought of visiting Forks, are you sure she isn’t at home?”

 

Of course I was sure; I had broken into their home and checked every room.

 

“Yeah, she isn’t,” I said, trying to not sound guilty.

 

“Why don’t you try Derek? She wanted to meet him…she’s probably at the beach,” he suggested.

 

“Oh! Right, I’ll do that.”

 

“Okay, and hey Darren?”

 

“Yeah?”

 

“Call me back after you find out okay?”

 

“Okay,” I agreed and hung up.

 

Jumping out of the window again, I ran to my car and started driving toward the beach. I knew how much Adriana loved being at the beach.

 

“Please let her be there,” I prayed as I drove. Grabbing my cell for the second time, I hit call at Derek’s name.

 

“Hey Derek!” I immediately said before he could say anything.

 

“What’s up?” he asked.

 

“Is Adriana with you?” I asked breathlessly.

 

“No? Should she be?” he asked.

 

“I don’t know,” I mumbled.

 

“Try calling up the girls?”

 

“Alright,” I said and hung up.

 

I had reached the beach; I started walking around hurriedly looking for her. I reached her favourite spot but she wasn’t there either. Again I got a whiff of her scent, but it wasn’t fresh too. As far as my wolf senses went, I was sure that Adriana hadn’t ventured here today.

 

What do I do? I didn’t know where else to look! The girls…I should call them.

 

The phone seemed to ring forever until finally a giggling Robin picked up the phone, “Hello?” she said.

 

“Robin, its me Darren, is Adriana with you?” I asked.

 

“Adriana?” she asked confused.

 

“Yeah!” I exclaimed in despair.

 

“Sorry no,” she was giggling still.

 

“Oh,” I sighed.  

 

“Darren? Are you fine?” she asked, sounding serious.

 

“Uh…I don’t know…”

 

“Darren?”

 

“I can’t find her…I can’t find Adriana!” I told her, my chest constricted, all I wanted to do was cry.

 

“What do you mean?”

 

“She’s not around…I don’t know where she is,” I explained. I was about to hang up on her when she asked, “Didn’t she come back after she got the grocery?”

 

“What?” I asked, paying attention.

 

“She came to the store where I work, to get few supplies, and then she left,” she explained.

 

“I don’t know, I was at work,” I felt exasperated.

 

“Did you check the beach?” she asked.

 

“Yeah…she isn’t here,” I sighed again.

 

“Oh no…I will calls others and find out and you check out near the store okay?” she suggested.

 

“Okay, I will do that,” I nodded and hung up.

 

I drove as fast as possible and reached the store where Robin worked. It was closed and surrounded by darkness. I got down and sniffed around. There were many scents mixed here but I found the one that was most familiar to me. Very soon I found that her scent singled out on the path out of the town. Why was she going there? I followed the trail by walk for a while and it came to a stop as I reach to a place which was more than a mile away.

 

The woods started at a little distance, there was an unused yard. I walked forward but I couldn’t pick up her scent again. But I could smell another human with her scent…it was unknown to me.

 

I felt my cell phone vibrate, “Hey, any news?”  I asked.

 

“No…no one saw her but me,” Robin replied.

 

“Oh…” I didn’t know what else to say. Here I was completely at a dead end.

 

“Cane wants to talk,” she said and handed him the phone.

 

“Darren, where are you?” he asked.

 

“A mile away from the store,” I answered automatically.

 

“Okay…we asked the group, nobody has seen her, I spread a word for them to check for her…Derek even phased. I think you should come back…we’ll regroup and start,”

 

“I have to look for her,” I mumbled.

 

“Look, we don’t know what has happened to her and we need to talk it out first, come to Sam’s place,” he said determinedly.

 

“Fine…” I agreed and hung up.

 

I looked around again, just around the side near small rocks, a couple of bags lay covered in dust. Adriana had probably been carrying them. I picked them up, they had her distinct smell.

 

I froze. All this while I had been rejecting the thought that something bad had happened to my imprint. But when I noticed how the bags had been trashed I just got a mental picture of Adriana lying on the floor hurt.

 

 No…no matter what I was going to save her!

 

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A/N: How did you guys like it? I’m hoping it wasn’t rushed and made sense.

Please do review!

 

PS: I’m working on a plan to update regularly, if it works…my updates will be once in three weeks. I don’t want to abandon this story and definitely plan on finishing it. Another five-six chapters, or even less than that, its going to get over. 

Permalink Reply by Seugnet du Toit on October 24, 2012 at 9:57am

Now you've got me on the edge of my seat!  I do hope Darren finds her in time!  Please update as soon as you can!

Permalink Reply by Alexandrea Elizabeth Cullen on October 24, 2012 at 10:37pm

Hopefully he finds her soon!

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