The Twilight Saga


This story is in the middle of eclipse. Bella and Edward are getting married and Victoria is still after Bella, everything from Twilight to the fight in Eclipse is the same as S.M wrote it. It will start in the middle of the big fight between Edward, Victoria, Seth, and Riley.




Fire red hair came my way and I told myself that this was the end, as my eyes closed and I got ready for the pain the red of her hair was gone. She was being ripped, he looked up and I looked into his blood-filled eyes. They were perfect…




Whole Story In Bella’s Point Of View





Chapter One


Victoria. She was here and trying to kill me. She had someone with her as she came up through the trees but now she’s fighting with the man I love; Edward Cullen. Whoever she had with her was fighting Seth, I’m scared. What if one of my people gets hurt? Edward, Seth, Jacob, Alice, the pack, the Cullen’s. It would be my fault if they got hurt, their all fighting for me. They shouldn’t be but they are all because I’m here. If I would have never moved to Forks that day, this would not be happening. Victoria moved, trying to get to me but Edward moved faster. Because of his mind reading he knows what she’s going to do before she does it. I’m up against a rock with nowhere to go, nothing to do. I have to help. Seth just got pushed into a tree. I can’t let this happen! I can’t let them get hurt; it’s not them Victoria is after. “Victoria!” I yelled out, everyone stopped and looked at me. Victoria smiled her evil smile “Yes Bella, is there something you need to say?” she asked. I stood there, not knowing what to do or say, I never thought they would really stop. Edward looked at me, his face telling me he was confused and worried. He was watching both mine and Victoria’s every move. I tried to talk but couldn’t find my voice; I couldn’t get anything to come out. “You can’t do this” I said as my voice came back, the words cracked and it sounded as if I were chocking. “Why of course I can silly, I am aren’t I?” she raised her eyebrows at me and took a step closer, I took a step back into the huge rock that was behind me. “They didn’t do anything, you want me right?” I asked, my voice coming out better than last time and louder. Victoria nodded, Edward looked worried, Seth looked scared, and they other boy look confused. “Then come get me. I’m here Victoria and to tell you the truth, I don’t even care anymore so…Come get me!” I told her, she smiled. “NO!” Edward yelled as fire red hair came my way and I told myself that this was the end. As my eyes closed and I got ready for the pain the red of her hair was gone. She was being ripped apart and about to be burned, he looked up and I looked into his blood-filled eyes. They were perfect, I don’t even know his name but I know he’s perfect. No one moved, Seth and Edward looked with big eyes at the boy and Victoria started putting herself together. The boy kept looking at me as I looked at him, unmoving. In what seemed like no time Victoria was in one piece again and ran away, she was gone. The boys red eyes looked scared; he looked at Edward then back at me. “I’m sorry” he whispered “I never really wanted to, once I saw…You did nothing” I stood still, not able to move. It looked as if no one could move; we all just stood in place. Edward came to my side and rapped his arms around me; Seth followed Edward and sat next to me. The boy looked at us all then put his head down, he looked so upset. What did she do to him? “Hey” I said, the boy looked up. “Thank you and, it’s gonna be ok” I told him. “I have nowhere to go and…” he started but stopped. I looked up at Edward who was already looking at me, I started to worm my way away from him. Once I got away from Edward’s hold I slowly moved towards the boy, “Bella?” Edward asked “Trust Edward” I whispered. I was about two feet from the vampire’s face, “What’s your name?” I asked. He looked at Edward “Riley” he answered without looking from Edward. “I’m Bella” Riley looked back at me, “Nice to meet you” he said, he still looked scared. Edward moved forward, next to me and put his arm around my waist. Seth stood next to Edward, out of nowhere Edward’s head jerked up. Something happened. “What?” I asked, he didn’t answer. He picked me up and put me on Seth’s back “Run Seth, run down to the clearing!” he yelled and Seth took off like a bullet before I could say anything. This was my fist time riding on wolves back and I wasn’t sure what to do, I crabbed two handfuls of fur and lay on my belly with my eyes closed. Seth was fast, I’m not good with fast. As we ran I heard loud howling, it sounded as if someone was in major pain. A wolf, one of the wolves got hurt but who? Before I could really think Seth stopped and I was being lifted, I opened my eyes to see Jasper. “Jasper what happened?” I asked, he didn’t answer and I could tell he was holding his breath. He carried me to Emmett then put me down on the ground, the three of us sat there with Alice and Rosalie. No one is telling me what’s happening and I need to know! “Alice! What happened?” I asked, she looked at me. Her eyes looked pained, like they were pained for me and not really for whoever got hurt. Jacob, it had to have been Jacob. I broke down in tears and cried into my hands, I felt big cold arms around me that were most likely Emmett’s but I didn’t care. My best friend was hurt.










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Please Tell Me What You Think Of The Summary And Preface!
i think u should write it it sounds good
post more... i'm excited !!... Update me please??
Please write more really soon! And keep me updated!! Can't wait :-)
write it but are you creating something or just reusing what SM wrote?
I'm intreeged... You may have to "personally" remind me to keep reading, cuz I'm really forgetful.
Don't be offended btw. I've read fanfictions that are amayzing and forgotten to read the updates XD
can't wait for the first chapter!
omg i love it!!!!
plz write soon and keep me updated
I LOVED IT although i think the preface is leaning toward the end of the fight or was that suppost to happen because now that I've read it i want more!
You have me intrigued. I can't wait to see where you go with it!


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