The Twilight Saga

This is my fanfiction Changed.
It is all from Nessies point of view. I will rarely do someone else's.
This is set 5 years after breaking dawn.
I have already written about 15 pages so there will be regular updates on this fanfiction.
Please tell me what you think; if you like it; what I could improve on.
Thank youu :)

Chapter 1

I was listening carefully to my parents downstairs, there voices were only a whisper but because of my half vampire genes I could hear every single word they were saying. I had just woke up and they hadn’t realized I was listening, well not yet anyway.
“How do you think she’s going to get on? Its only her first day” I heard my mom say. It was obvious they were talking about me.
“Wait. Her thoughts are conscious now.” Dad interrupted “Renesmee,” He called slightly louder, knowing that I would hear “Come down now. You wouldn’t want to be late for your first day at high school would you?”
I groaned. Perfect I thought, everyone at the school is going to hate me. 
“No they won’t” Dad called up the stairs.
How do you know. I thought to him silently.
“Because I do. Now get yourself down here.”
I got up out of bed and begrudgingly. I walked down the stairs slow as I could. I had been looking forward to this day for a while, but now it was here I wasn’t sure I wanted to go. I mean, I only have the mental age of a six year old, although I do have the body of a fifteen year old. I was starting Prichard high school this month as a sophomore, it was November which just made it so much worse, luckily I wasn’t going alone. My whole family, well very near to it, were coming with me. Me and Jake were going to enroll as sophomores. My Dad, Mom and my aunt Alice were coming as juniors. Rosalie, Emmet and Jasper were seniors, they couldn’t pass as juniors, well not without suspicion. That was the last thing we wanted. Maybe it wouldn’t be so bad, not with all my family there. I started to cheer up immediately at the thought.

I turned the corner into the kitchen and my brain took in the scene in front of me. Jake was sat at the breakfast table hungrily eating the huge breakfast Esme had prepared for us two, even though it was enough food for five. My Mom and Dad were stood by the table, she was in his arms and they were gazing lovingly into each others eyes. Ugh. Always the same lovey-dovey attitude with them. Sometimes it was just plain annoying. My dad turned his head slightly to me then and raised his eyebrow at me. My mom then looked at me, obviously curious to what I had been thinking. Sometimes it was such a pain having a mindreader as a dad. Esme was in the cooking area, could she possibly be cooking more food?!?

Other than that no one was in the room, they all must be somewhere else in the house. I sat down at the breakfast table. I wasn’t really keen on human food, but some of it was bearable. I picked up some toasted bread and took a bite out of it. 
“So Jake, looking forward to your first day of school?” I asked knowing that he wasn’t.
He groaned, he was hating the idea of going to school.
“I don’t really see the point. Why are we bothering to go?”
“Because I want too,” I smiled cheekily at him “Please Jake please will you go with me?”
I looked at him with the pleading eyes I knew he couldn’t resist. He would do anything for me, his best friend. 
“Fine” He agreed reluctantly. 
“Come on, they will love you.”
“Yeah what ever.” He mumbled.
I ignored him, I had just once again become excited again, and he was bringing my mood down.
“Thanks for the food Esme, Its wonderful, as usual” I told her thankfully.
“Your welcome darling. Anytime.” She smiled sweetly at me, It was very hard not to love my grandma, she was very compassionate. I got off my seat, and walked out the room and upstairs to go change. After a few minutes of looking in my closet in despair, I gave in. I knew the person I needed, and although I usually hated her dressing me up, I needed serious help.

“Alice?” I called. 
“Yes?” she replied, dancing into my room. She pressed her lips when she saw the sight in front of her, trying not to burst out laughing I assumed. I was sat in the middle of the floor of my bedroom. My closet doors were wide open, clothes were strewn out all over the floor, so much so that the carpet had become a collage of multiple fabrics and colors. Then there was me sat there with the most helpless look in the world.
“Help?” I said simply knowing she would know I needed her fashion sense.
“What you mean you actually willingly are going to let me pick out your outfit?” Her face full of shock.
“Yes.” I replied bitterly, I hated it when Alice played dress up with me but this time I really needed her help.
She began searching through my clothes at an inhumane speed. Only seconds later she had an outfit for me. i changed into it hesitantly then looked in the mirror. I was wearing a tight fitted pair of dark blue jeans and beautiful creme button up blouse. 
“Thank you so much Alice!” Even I had to admit, it was the perfect first day of high school outfit.
She sighed at me, unsatisfied. “Well, I suppose it will do”
I rolled my eyes at her. She was never fully satisfied with her work. I reached my hand up and touched her cheek. Showing her memories of all the beautiful outfits she had dressed me up in ever since the day was born. Alice looked at me happily.
“Thanks Ness” She murmured with gratitude. “But we still need accessories” Her cold hands grabbed my arm and dragged me across the room. Near the desk she stopped and reached into my precious jewelry box where I kept my favorite things. She daintily picked up the gold locket I had got for my first christmas from my mom, she draped it around my neck and fastened it. Then she picked up my charm bracelet and placed it on my wrist. Alice truly was a genius when it came to this sort of thing.

“Come on Nessie, Alice. Were going now.” my dad called us down. We walked down the stairs, she was talking non-stop about my outfit and the designers it had came from. I wasn’t listening at all. When we reached the bottom of the stairs my dad was there. 
“You ready?” He asked us, but I knew he was talking to me specifically. I took a deep breath, “Yes. Let’s go.” 

Rosalie, Emmet, Alice and Jasper were taking the jeep. It was kind of obvious and I couldn’t help but feel a little bit annoyed, as if we wouldn’t draw enough attention to ourselves, then they had to go and ride in that monster jeep! Jake, mom and dad went in the volvo, much more subtle, which I was glad for. The ride to school was a silent one. I was so nervous that no one would like me. I was obviously different to the full humans in the school. They would notice something. I went over the cover we had for our family. There was Rosalie and Jasper Hale twins adopted by Carlisle. Me, Alice, Edward and Emmet were the Cullens adopted by Carlisle and Esme as well. Then it was Jacob Black a cousin who had came with us to Prichard after his parents had gone to Africa to help with charity work. Bella was just a friend, she couldn’t bear to be separated from Edward so she had come as well. It was so confusing. I hoped I wouldn’t forget it or screw it up when I was telling it. Which I had to admit was likely with our family being this big.

Before I knew it, we were at the school pulling into the huge parking lot. The jeep was ahead of us, attracting stares as I had assumed it would, I mean how could it not really.
We all got out of the volvo and went to join the others. We started walking, all 8 of us to the student office. Every pupil in that parking lot had there eyes on us. Curiosity burning in every single pair.

The poor secretary had been dazzled immediately by my family’s intense beauty. She had blinked several times when my dad had been looking at her, gathering our timetables and information. As we left the office I could hear mom talking to dad.
“Oh, poor woman. She’s probably hyperventilating in that room right now. You and your dazzling people..” She shook her head.
“Hmm....your quite dazzling yourself” Then he leaned down and kissed her gently on the lips. Ugh. More lovey-dovey stuff. I looked at my timetable I had trigonometry first. Great! I thought sarcastically. At least I had it with Jake that would make it more bearable. I smiled up at him, and he was grinning wildly back at me. We made our ways to our lockers and put our books in until the bell rang. I turned to my family. 
“Bye ‘sis’” Emmet grinned at me as he walked away with Rosalie. Jasper gave Alice a gentle kiss before walking after them. Sending me calming waves, that was such a useful power sometimes. 
“Good luck honey, I will see you at lunch. Try to socialize with some humans, I would love for you to make some human friends.” She gave me a tight hug.
“I will mom, love you.”
Alice turned to me and pulled me into a hug as well. 
“Keep your eyes out for any cute boys!” She winked at me, and danced down the hallway.
At this comment dad and Jake had growled. 
“Calm it down you two” I mumbled to them. They could be so over-protective sometimes. I knew they meant well but sometimes I couldn’t help feeling annoyed. 
“See you later, love. Don’t listen to your aunt, none of these boys are good enough for you.” 
“Sure dad...oops Edward” I smiled at him. Then he walked away holding mom tightly to him.
“So you ready for this Ness?” Jake said.
“Yeah, unless your worried the work will be too hard for you” I teased.
He snorted at that and offered his hand for me to take, I took it without hesitation and we started down the hallway.

We walked into the trigonometry room every pair of eyes on us again. We walked up to the teacher and he took a breath as he took us both in. Jake’s unbelievable tallness and my pale skin and dazzling smile.
“Right, yes, Jacob and Renesmee isn’t it?”
I nodded shyly at him. 
“So Renesmee your going to be sat next to that boy there, on the left in the third row” He announced pointing out a young boy. I walked over to him taking in his appearance. He looked rather tall even sitting down, but nowhere near as tall as Jake. His face was round and his expression welcoming. His clear blue eyes looked at me happily as I took my seat. He had blonde hair that was gelled into a casual disarray. He smiled brightly at me, at least he looked like he was a decently nice guy.
“Hey, I’m Luke” he said cheerfully.
“Hi, I’m Renesmee” I mumbled shyly. I could feel the burn in my throat at being so close to a human. I did long for his blood but my self control was impressive and I was sure I could control myself.
“So how are you finding it in Prichard?”
“Well, I guess it’s okay. Seen as this is my first lesson I am not sure about the school yet. At least I sit next to a friendly guy in trigonometry.” I said truthfully. He blushed and looked down. Ooops....I hope he didn’t take that the wrong way.
Just then the teacher Mr. Penton started talking to get the classes attention. Oh great! This was the work bit. Even though I knew I could do it, but to be honest I didn’t want to. Im not keen on trigonometry I never have been.

I looked around the room for Jake, he was at the back. I caught his eye and he grimaced looking at his partner. She was sat there picking her nose, not the sort of thing you want in a partner. Jake looked at me disgusted and buried his head in his hands. I tried to hide a laugh by coughing, his face was hilarious. Looks like he drew the short straw. I had actually lucked out. Luke knew what he was doing in trig and he was eager to offer any help if I needed it. The bell rang at the end of the lesson. Luke turned to me.
“Well goodbye then, see ya later” He called as he headed to the door.
“Yeah, bye.”
Jake came up to me with a huge frown on his face. 
“Oh, dammit. You were so lucky. She was the one I wanted to sit with!” I teased him.
He just glared at me and then turned to walk swiftly out the door. I easily kept pace with him as he walked, still mad, down the hallway. 
“Please forgive me Jake I didn’t mean it. I put my hand in his showing him a picture of me apologizing. After that he turned to me.
“Okay, I forgive you” He muttered something under his breath, I picked out the words ‘Always winning’. I beamed at him happily. My first day was going great so far and I had a feeling it was only going to get better as I waked, almost skipped into my second class with Jake.

I walked into the lunch room, hand in hand with Jake. This morning had gone great, all the people I sat next to seemed to be relatively friendly and talked to me happily. I went to get my food, not that I was keen on even having to eat it but I tried. I grabbed an apple one of the human foods I actually liked, well sort of. Then I grabbed some ham sandwiches. I wasn’t hungry so I didn’t need much. Me and Jake headed over to the table in the corner where all my family were. 

I was bombarded with questions when I sat down.
“Shut up!” I said annoyed. “My morning went fine thanks-” I said now beaming at them, eager to tell them how well I had got on. “-the people I sit next to are really pleasant and likable, they seem to like me too. The guy I sit next to in trigonometry was really friendly and welcoming.” 
“Awww, sweetie, Im so happy it’s going well for you” she smiled as she hugged me obviously elated by the fact that I seemed to be making some human friends. 
“ Was he cu-” Alice started to ask, but as she started to say it, a low growl had escaped form my dad’s lips and it had silenced her. Although I knew she would be asking me later i was glad to be rid of the subject for now. 
“And how were all your first mornings?” I asked, purely to get the conversation off of me.
Everyone turned to me and groaned except for Alice. Ooops I forgot, What alice does. She suddenly started talking non-stop describing every single persons fashion sense that she had seen today. The only one who didn’t look really annoyed with her was Jasper. He was watching his wife’s face with an amused expression. The next 45 minutes went slowly by as Alice finally finished her story on the guy in biology who was, apparently, just a fashion disaster waiting to happen.

I walked into my next class Chemistry, Jake wasn’t with me in this class, but dad was. Even worse he sat just behind me. Not that I didn’t love him, because I do, It’s just it was embarrassing, he’s my dad. Even if he is pretending to be my brother, he was still my dad. Every single time a boy looked at me my dad would let out a growl. Another boy looked at me and I sighed as another growl came from my father. I kept sending him urgent thoughts. Dad Will you please stop growling? I am fine, not in danger. I thought we weren’t supposed to be attracting attention to ourselves. After that he didn’t growl, well not as much anyway. As I walked away from him and out the door, after the bell had gone, I was thinking to him I am going to be having words with you later! I knew he heard me, but he didn’t respond in anyway, and I knew why. Mom was standing there at the door waiting for him. We both walked towards her, then she was in his arms and they were kissing gently.
“Ugh.” I stated simply before I walked off.

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i know you are probably going to kill me for this but here it is anywayy....

Chapter 5 Part 2:

As I got closer to him my breathing increased and I began to feel really faint. My thoughts were incoherent and my head was spinning dizzily. Then I collapsed.

I opened my eyes slowly and Blake’s face was inches from mine. his eyes were careful and wary. His arms were around my waist and he was holding me close to him, I felt the heat flood to my cheeks. He was looking at me like he had when he had kissed me, could it have only been last night?

“Nessie, are you okay?;” He murmured gently to me.

“ mean yes.” I mumbled incoherently, I couldn’t even say a sentence that made sense around him. He chuckled at my bewildered face. 

“Let’s get you outside to get some fresh air.” With that, he lifted me up effortlessly and took my hand to lead me outside. We walked towards the door of the canteen. I could feel the curious and furious stares of my family and friends on my back.

When we were outside we were both staring vacantly into the distance, then he turned to me. 

“Ness, I like you, I mean really like you.” He searched my face for my reaction. I kept my face calm but inside I was freaking out. I knew I really liked him too. But what about Jake, I liked him too. This was getting too complicated, too hard. 

“I think I like you too Blake.” - His eyes lit up - “But its not that simple, I have Jake as well. I like him as well. I just need some time to figure this out.” I looked up at him and half-smiled.

He nodded at me, then he leant in, kissed me lightly on the cheek, placed my hand in his and we walked back toward the school back to our lessons. My mind was consumed of thoughts of Jake and Blake all afternoon. 

I think, I couldn’t be sure but right now, my heart didn’t long to be with Jake. It longed to be with Blake. I walked up to him at the end of school.

“Blake, I have made my decision.” I said, my voice almost a whisper. “I like you more.” I smiled up at him. His eyes were lit up and he was grinning as he leaned in to kiss me passionately, I wrapped my arms around his neck and parted my lips. Nothing could be more perfect right now. 

“Ness, I would like to show you somewhere, will you come with me?” He asked expectantly. I just nodded in reply too dazed by his kissing to reply with speech. I took his hand and he led me out of the school grounds and through the forest. We walked over the branches and dodged the trees. I wondered how long we had left to walk and where we were going to end up. My parents and family would be starting to worry now, I needed to get home soon. 

We ended up in a small clearing, it was beautiful. There were flowers spread across the clearing.

“Wow, Blake, it’s beautiful.” I grinned at him. His returning smile was dazzling. He lay down on the grass holding his arms out for me to join him. I blushed and happily lay down in his arms, cuddling up to his chest. The moment couldn’t have been more blissful. 

“Blake?” I mumbled

“Yes?” He answered. 

“I was just wondering, you never answered my question to you when we came here. What did you mean when you said that I had kept you waiting a long time?”
I heard a small intake of his breath, but when I looked up, his face was carefully composed.
“What I meant by that was that you, meaning the other half of me, the one whom I could love, kept me waiting a long time. I knew it would be soon you arrived, I could tell, I was more excited each day and well...then there you were. I was too afraid to approach you myself though. I was so excited when you came to sit with us that first time” He explained carefully, I could see the love in his eyes and sincerity rang out with every word. He cupped my chin and leaned in to kiss me lightly on the lips. Even that still left me breathless.

I couldn’t believe I had ended up with a guy like Blake, he was such a gentlemen and truly amazing. My thoughts did drift back to Jake every now and then, but he was my best friend for my whole life, why wouldn’t I miss him?

Blake and I spent most of the night in the clearing. I laid on the grass in his arms, enjoying every moment of his company. We watched the sunset and I couldn’t have felt happier, this was the place for me to be. The sun was beautiful and the sky changed colors until it was a dark blue. I looked at the stars that were beginning to shine in the sky. Nothing could have been more beautiful, except maybe who was lying next to me.

Right then, my thoughts wandered back to Jake. I realized how hurt he must be feeling. He loved me, and of course I loved him but not as much as Blake. I knew I had to talk to him, to try and fix this somehow. I knew he probably wouldn’t answer his phone to me though, and he wouldn’t want to talk to me at all. That left me with a problem, how was I supposed to get though to him, I needed to see him and I’m sure he needed to see me as well, at least just a little bit. Even if he couldn’t stand me right now. Then the decision was made, I would do anything I could to get Jake to talk to me.

Sorry, it is a bit of a cliffie! :P
I hope I don't get too many shouts for this.
Arh, come on! When will you post more?
lol, im not sure yet, but will let you know as soon as i do :)
You can't do this to me and JAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Are you anti-Jake or something?!!!
This is so so so stinking WRONG!!!!!!!!!!

I HATE BLAKE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I do like Jake this was just the way the story ended up going.
sorry if you dont like it, but this is just the way the story is going for now.
thanks for reading though
now you just lost me sorry!!
i think she should stay with jake!!!
it was awesome i love it post more plz!!!!!!!!!!!
i really really liked it!!!! actually i loved it....

omg i do really love your sttory but i also love jake and that was so cruel!!!!....

so plz plz plz plz tell that you r going to make him happy...plzz!!! *puppy face*


( i said all this with all my love for your awsome story :D )
sorry, :P
thanks for the lovee though :)
i love jake tooo :D
so i will try no to be too mean to him ;)


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