The Twilight Saga

PG 13 just to be safe

(all vampires)this story is about the cullens. Bella becomes famous but has the power to change the way she and the cullens look.!! how will the cullens keep their secert from the humans ??

SHOULD I WRITE THIS ??? please comment if i should :D

CHAPTER 5 IS UP :)

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sures sounds very interesting!

 

HEY <3 ok so this is my first fan fic so not be too hard. Please comment and if it sucks ... erm i’m sorry :D I don’t own any of the characters of song lyrics. ENJOY!!
CHAPTER 1...
“BELLA,BELLA,BELLA!!” I heard the crowd chant.
“YAY!! IT’S SHOWTIME!!!!!!!”The annoying pixie-like ‘sister’ was jumping around my dressing room like a 5 year human on Christmas!
“ALICE WILL YOU PLEASE CALM DOWN!!!” I was now screaming over the crowds chant. Ok breath Bella it’s not like this is the first time you’ve been on stage in front of millions fans is it? I questioned myself. With a deep unnecessary breath I walked onto the dark stage. Even with the lights off I could see all of the excited faces of the fans with their too big banners saying things like ‘WE LOVE YOU BELLA’ and ‘BELLA MARRY ME!!’ nothing new then , when will humans gain an imagination? Then backing track to my new song, wild ones started to play. 5...4...3...2...1
Hey I heard you were a wild one
Oooh
If I took you home
It'd be a home run
Show me how you'll do

I want to shut down the club
With you
Hey I heard you like the wild ones
Oooh

I like crazy, foolish, stupid
Party going wild, fist pumping
Music, I might lose it
Blast to the roof, that's how we do'z it
I don't care the night, she don't care we like
Almost dared the right five
Ready to get popping, ain't no surprise
Take me so high, jumping no doubts
Surfing the crowd
Oooh
Said I gotta be the man
When they heading my van, might check one too
Shut them down in the club while the playboy does it, and y'all get lose lose
After bottle, we all get bit and again tomorrow
Gotta break loose cause that's the motto
Club shuts down, I heard you're super models
Hey I heard you were a wild one
Oooh
If I took you home
It'd be a home run
Show me how you'll do

I want shut down the club
With you
Hey I heard you like the wild ones
Oooh

Party rocker, foot show stopper
More shampoo
Never one, club popper
Got a hangover like too much vodka
Can't see me with ten binoculars
So cool
No doubt by the end of the night
Got the clothes coming off
Til I make that move
Somehow, someway, gotta raise the roof, roof
All black shades when the sun come through
Oh, it's on like everything goes
Round up baby til the freaky show
What happens to that body, it's a private show
Stays right here, private show
I like em untamed, don't tell me how pain
Tell them this, bottoms up with the champagne
My life, coming harder than we hit play
Do you busy with the bail, were you insane

Hey I heard you were a wild one
Oooh
If I took you home
It'd be a home run
Show me how you'll do

I want to shut down the club
With you
Hey I heard you like the wild ones
Oooh

I am a wild one
Break me in
Saddle me up and lets begin
I am a wild one
Tame me now
Running with wolves
And i'm on the prowl

Show you another side of me
A side you would never thought you would see
Tell that body
Gotta make sure do you have enough
I can't lie
The wilds don't lie

Hey I heard you were a wild one
Oooh
If I took you home
It'd be a home run
Show me how you'll do

I want to shut down the club
With you
Hey I heard you like the wild ones
Oooh

I am a wild one
Break me in
Saddle me up and let's begin
I am a wild one
Tame me now
Running with wolves
And i'm on the prowl....
I had to giggle quietly to myself at the last line. (Dedicated to team Jacob)The applause exploded! Everybody was screaming with joy. How I loved this feeling! Then the chanting began. “MORE,MORE, MORE” So I went again...

GOOD/BAD??? Comments please :D

Do you have a tune in mind?

I can see where she would be coming from with the words.

I want to know more about Bella's new situation, it's a good twist on the story.

Best wishes

Chris

teheheh thank you and have you heard wild ones by flo rider?? thats the song :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpOR_HuHRNs&feature=related <--- this is the song :D ( without the rapping )

I like how you made that last line have a little something to do with Jacob. That's a neat idea. Keep it going!

thank you :)

loveRhi

xx

sounds good so far!  please continue!

really ?? thank you <3 i'll try and post more soon :D

CHAPTER 2...
“Thank you everybody I LOVE YOU ALL” I shouted down the mike before walking off stage. I am in Seattle at the minute so my family are at the mansion chilling. I walked into the dressing room to find an Alice reading ELLE on my sofa.
“Ali get out while I change!” with a groan she jumped up and left the room. I sat on the chair pulling a brush through my mahogany hair when I glanced at the picture of my birth family. It reminds me of the time I became immortal.
~~~~~~FLASH BACK~~~~~~
This is it! I have nobody anymore, the Spanish influenza has taken every single bit of joy I had in my life! Even my baby sister has gone just minutes ago. I couldn’t see very much anymore as hot, fresh tears ran down my face. I had to sit on a bench until I could see straight again. “Where will I go?” I cried into the dark night. I sat here for what seemed like hours crying until a man, not very tall yet with handsome looks, walked over...
“ Whets the matter my beautiful lady?” urgg I could smell the alcohol in his breath. I dried my tears and replied.
“ Excuse me but I have to bid you farewell” with that I stood up to leave but was quickly stopped by the man’s arm around my waist like a vice, holding me there with no escape.
“ That’s not very polite is it lady? I haven’t even told you my name!” the anger grew in his voice as he spoke. He pulled my down onto the bench, his arm still around my waist.
“ My name is Charles. And what would yours be sweetness?”
“ Isabella Swan”
“ What a beautiful name for a beautiful lady” with those words he leaned into my face and began kissing me. I started to pull away but he locked his hand around my neck. I tried to pull away but I couldn’t move. I started to push his chest hard trying to get out of his iron grip. He let go and I started to scream for help.
“BE QUITE! SOMEONE MAY HEAR YOU USELSS SCREAMS!!” he pushed me on to the floor and beat me until I could no longer move. I wanted to die! I was too much pain. What did I do to deserve this? I questioned myself while waiting to die, then a felt like I was flying had no strength to open my eyes so I imaged I was dead and on my way the heaven. Then I felt pain, more pain than when Charles was beating me. WHAT? I AM DEAD WHY AM I IN MORE PAIN? Then the fire began I was burning. This wasn’t death, death was meant to be peace full! Another fire erupted in my body. How long was this burning going to last? I screamed as loud as my burning lungs would allow, only to be meet by apologies and quiet sobbing. I felt bad, I stopped screaming and clenched my teeth together to endure the pain. 72 hours, 4320 minutes and 290,000 seconds later the burning started to ease away from my hands and feet, until it was completely gone.
“Esme...” I heard someone shout. The call was followed by light footsteps
“ Oh, it’s time” the bell like voice, which I assumed belonged to the footsteps, said.
My eyes opened to see everything. And I mean EVERYTHING it was all so clear. I could see dust that a normal eye would not be able to see. After about ¾ of a second I heard my name.
“Isabella? I think we need to talk...”
~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~
That was when Carlisle and Esme explained everything to me. I was now a vampire and had the ability to change the way I and others around me looked. I also had super control so I could be near humans and not want to drink their blood! A few years later my god like husband Edward was created( he can also read minds apart from mine, not that i’m bragging),then Rosalie came and joined the Cullen’s, along with Emmett not long after. A decade or so later Alice and Jasper appeared out of nowhere but knew everything about us and Alice officially decides mine and Edwards’s room was the best and move us out of our room. Alice can see the future and jasper can mess about with your emotions. So yeah we are the Cullen’s.

COMMENT PLEASE <3

I think it would be very fun to read a new twist on the twilight saga.

thank you :D

<Micheal>interesting

<M> Micheal seriously you spend all day just....wow move over I'm reading.

<Micheal> Praise the lord you CAN read

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