Creative Writing Challenge # 3

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Permalink Reply by ♥Robsessed♫Mieke♥ on August 23, 2010 at 2:40pm

Magical

Siobhan was my creator and Liam her partner and me ... I am Maggie the vampire with powers. I know they love me, well Siobhan does Liam has always been silent and strange to me. He never sai to much, like he knew what was needed and what not. But when he and Siobhan were together no words were needed.

That's how this little cottage had become my little spot, I had discovered it on one of my walkes. After some little adjustments it had been prefect. I had painted the seeling black with the moon and sparkling stars. The walls had all a different theme: forest, beach, mountains and a library wall. For the rest I had placed an old seat, a little table, some candles and bookshelves in it. The windows I had painted black so that they wouldn't show it that somebody was in the little house. I loved spending my time with the books that I had found. Most of all I loved Alce in Wonderland, to travel through that magical world.

While reading it again, I heard something and it was moving fast. I placed the book on the table and didn't blew out the candles, cause vampire eyes saw more than human eyes. So he or she would notice the tiny difference in the black windows color. I didn't moved I only chringed myself for the attack and hoped I would be strong enough. Suddenly I only heard silence and looked to the 4 little windows to see if I saw something that didn't belonged there. But I couldn't see nothing, the only difference was that I didn't want to go outside. When the door opened the only thing I could do was to crowl into the fartest corner oppposite to the door.

It was very hard to keep looking to the door, what was happening with me?!?

I heard a whispered "Hello" and all of a sudden I felt normal it was so strange that I looked into the most beautifull blue eyes and I whispered "Hello" back.

I started laughing because of that and closed the door. This felt so right, I could nor sensce one tiny bit of anger from this vampire.

"I'm not allowed to talk to strangers so let me introduce lyself. Hi I'm Maggie!"
"Glad to meet you Maggie and I'm so sorry for what happened a couple of seconds ago, I'm Fred"

I was baffled "So you mean that you were the one causing all of those feelings, it felt horrible." But when loking into his eyes again I saw regret and the knowledge he already had about his powers. 'I'm sorry but I only have one seat and no chairs; I never expected any visitors." I said smiling.

"That's no problem at all Maggie the floor is good enough for now." He said smiling back.

We started talking and I knew this was just the beginning of a magical part in my own everlasting life.

(I know that it's not vey long, having some creativity issues. But hoping it's okay.)

Permalink Reply by ♥Robsessed♫Mieke♥ on August 24, 2010 at 1:28am

Yep that Fred. I thought they would make a great couple hehe. I love Fred.
And thank you Nina!!!!

Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on August 25, 2010 at 4:22am

*Sniff* poor irina...and i know how you feel about the length! i was considering writing a ffic about the denali sisters...would you like to co-write?

Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 27, 2010 at 8:44pm

love it

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 28, 2010 at 6:41pm

hmm. this was really hard because everyone's story was unique but my vote goes to........
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Ms.NinaღRose ilove this story soo much *

--x good job to everyone who participated =]

Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 28, 2010 at 7:07pm

I vote Three Coins in a Fountain by Team C+E

Permalink Reply by Kim67255 on August 28, 2010 at 7:49pm

That was good and sad. You should write a full story about the Irish coven. I've never read one. I've read stories on 4 different sites. Not a one on them. They were a good choice .

Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on August 28, 2010 at 7:50pm

grr they're all soo good!! i hate voting! it's so hard!!
but still, i suppose i should.
hmm Haunted, Electric Circuits or Lie to Me...
*pulls hair*
*bites thumb*
*twists chair*
my vote goes to:
Lie to Me

Permalink Reply by Katie on August 28, 2010 at 10:56pm

I vote for Lie To Me

Permalink Reply by LaurenJackson {IcyAfterlife} on August 29, 2010 at 12:15pm

My vote goes to:
14: Krissie ♥
I really like it. It's awesome

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