Deep, Dark Sapphire Eyes

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Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 13, 2009 at 9:12am

Please tell me what you think about this! And please tell me if I should continue. My recent Fan Fictions weren't good.. So, tell me if this is!

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 14, 2009 at 1:00am

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Edward's POV

I remembered the day we saved Jarreld. He was dying from lung cancer. He wasn't a smoker, nor was any of his family members. We didn't know why he even had lung cancer. I read his mind, to see if it was still functioning.

Chamellia, don't leave me. Don't worry, I won't leave you.. He chanted faintly in his head. In his mind, was an image of a 17 year old girl, around his age. Around my age, I mean. She has long, wavy black hair that has a hint of brown in the sunlight. Her skin was bronze in colour and her body was slim. But, her best feature that amazes us both wer her eyes, which were sapphire blue in colour. Her sapphire blue eyes were shining like crystals in the sun.

I snapped out of his head, just in time to do the operation. I was helping Carlisle in the hospital while training myself to get used to the scent of blood. It wasn't really necessary, since my love of my life has the most beautiful scent in the world.

After the operation, I went inside Carlisle's office to tell him what happened. That the boy with lung cancer can't die. Because of his love, Chamellia.

"Carlisle, you should make him like on of us. There's no ther way. You have to save him. Chamellia is waiting for him." I said to him so softly that I am sure no one could hear us.

Carlisle looked at me tenderly, "Edward. If there's nothing we could do, there was nothing we could do. We tried everything we could. There's no way we could save him"

"No, we hadn't tried everything, Carlisle! And there is a way to save him." I said sternly. Somehow, I felt responsible for their love. Responsible to make them together again. I was quite frustrated. Why can't we do it? Why can't he be like one of us?

He smiled. "My dear boy, why are you so worried about this particular man dying of cancer and not able to save his love of his life?"

My brows that had been puplled together by great force relaxed. And I breathed out a breath that I have been holding all this time. And then, I looked up to him, plead in my eye.

"You can't let him die" I said simply in a soft whisper.

Carlisle sighed and started to walk across the room, thinking. After a minute, he said, " If there's no other way, he will need to become one of us." I relaxed, "But, Edward, what if he did become one of us, when she's already dead?"

"I'll make sure she isn't. And I'll make sure both of them gets together." I told him in a stern but confident voice.

Author's note: This is between Twilight and New Moon. I hope you enjoyed reading my fan fic!

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 14, 2009 at 7:35am

Aww.. no replies!! Is my fan fic really that horrible?

Permalink Reply by ѼForeverTwilighter on November 15, 2009 at 12:03am

No, dear no! its good, and you have to continue, Dont worry, comments are coming your way, Its just that when you start, its rally hard.. Im interested, so please, continueand update me.... Dont think it's horrible cause its not :D

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 15, 2009 at 4:23am

Aww.. thank you so much Rexanne Monique!!! I'm really touched....Thanks so much for being interested.. I didnt know how to write the summary or epilouge without giving away anything so, no one probably understood it! Thanks again.. for everything!! You make me so much happier..

Permalink Reply by ѼForeverTwilighter on November 20, 2009 at 10:21am

No problem, deary :D hmm.. maybe u can make the summary later, when u wont give away anyting :D I will messagee my friends to read ur fic :D

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 22, 2009 at 9:23pm

Thanks Rexanne Monique!!!!

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 15, 2009 at 1:37am

Chapter 2: Flashback

Jarreld's POV

My chest was aching for two reasons. One, because of my lung cancer. Two, because someone took Chamellia away from me. Chamellia. Don't leave me. Don't worry, I won't leave you. And as I said that, I imagined Chamellia's face in my mind. Her hair, that turns from black to brown in the sunlight, her bronze skin, her slim body and finally, her eyes. Her deep, dark blue sapphire eyes.

No, I can't die. I won't. For her. I have to see her safe, away from harm. I have to see her smile. I have to see those beautiful sapphire blue eyes, shining like crystals, filled with joy, not sorrow. But, how could I make that happen? I can feel them operating my body. And as they operated, I thought about what happened yesterday...

***Flash Back***

Chamellia, Nora, Manuel, Riley, Bree and I were watching a movie. We were hanging out like normal teens. Hanging out as a triple date. Nora and Manuel, Bree and Riley, and Chamellia and I. All of us were 17 years old. We were all best friends since we were 5. We met at the beach. And for 12 years, that friendship grew and never broke.

I wasn't really paying attention to the movie. Only Chamellia's expressions. I reached out for her hand and she held it willingly. I smiled at the pleasure of her hand in mine. The touch of her hand sent some tingles in my spine. I wanted to do more than just that. But, handtouching is as far as we can go right now.

At long last, the show ended and we flooded out of the cinema. We chatted about how great the movie was and decided to eat dinner at Mc Donalds before going home.

"But, don't we have to walk past a dark alley to get to Mc Donalds?" Nora asked. Actually, there was another route, but, there was too much traffic in that route.

"It's better than stopping everytime we see a red light. Besides, the dark alley route is much much faster. And I'm so hungry." Bree said. And so, we walked towards the dark alley. I looked around and noticed that we were the only ones going this way. I ignored the shiver in my spine and went along with my friends. Little did I know at that time.

We passed by a pub - the only one open - and lots of people were coming in and out of it. A guy walked out of the pub and started walking towards us, an evil grin on his face. He was wearing a dark cloak and his skin was so pale white that it looks like it was radiating. We started breathing fast. Why didn't we just use my car? What is this man going to do with us? Lots of questions started to flood my mind. When he was a few feet away from us, he said poiltely, "Hello. My name's Alec. I
see that all of you are.. trying to walk past this alley? This is a dangerous place for all of you to be in. Let me guide you out of this place." His voice was as soft and velvety.

For the first time, I saw the color of his eye. Crimson red, a color that said danger. A color to warn you not to go near him. But his voice was polite, and so was his smile. "Sure!" Chamellia agreed. I nodded. I had a bad feeling about this but, if Chamellia agrees, I will too. The others agreed too and so, we walked towards Mc Donalds with him. I had a strange feeling this won't end up good.

When we reached the end of the dark alley, Chamellia turned to look at Alec, who was staring into space. "Thank you, Alec" Chamellia said politely. He turned around to face her, the same evil grin on his face .

"No, thank you" He said in a creepy voice. And, before I knew it, Chamellia was gone. So was Nora and Manuel. Bree and Riley was still with me.

***End of Flash Back***

If I ever did get through this alive, I will find Alec and kill him. As the flashback ended, I felt something sharp touch my neck. I tried not to scream. Nothing else hurted more than losing Chamellia. And then, I remembered another memory which happened not 12 hours ago..

***Flash Back***

Bree, Riley and I went finding for Chamellia, Nora and Manuel in town. We didn't tell the police because I had a feeling they won't help at all. And so, we went around, looking for Alec, searching for clues. Around mid afternoon, we went to a food court to eat lunch. While eating, I couldn't help but notice a woman hiding behind a tree, looking at us, watching our every move.

After that, we went looking around, finding for information. All the time, I could see the woman in the corner of my eye. She has orange-red hair that looks like flames. Her skin was familiar. It was pale white that looks like it was radiating. But what was most familiar was her eyes. Crimson red. I panicked. She looked so similar to Alec, the man that took my friends. And yet, so different.

When I looked at her again, she was gone. We were walking along a corridor when suddenly, the woman with flaming hair walked in front of us. Before I knew what was happening, she took Bree and Riley.

I didn't know what happened but, after that, I started hyperventilating. My lungs started to hurt. I managed to get attention and was brought back here.

***End of Flash Back***

I realised that, when things started to brighten up, dark clouds will invade it. We were having a good time at the cinema when suddenly, my friends started to go missing. And now, I was alone, more worried about my friends and Chamellia's safety than my own.

There was no more sharp pain in my chest. I felt like I was drifting into heaven. Everything I could see was white. I saw Chamellia and my friends. I was so happy. Happy now that we were in heaven, away from any harm. Suddenly, I felt that same sharp pain, only it was everywhere. I kept my mouth shut. I told myself there was no other pain more great than losing them. If I could save my friends' life, I'll go through anything. Even this.

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 16, 2009 at 6:37am

Thank you very very much!! Im so glad u liked it!!

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 17, 2009 at 2:43am

Chapter 3: The Pain

Jarreld's POV

The pain was bewildering. How long has it been? It felt like forver. I tried not to scream, to endure the pain inside of me. I had promised. Nothing else was too painful than losing Chamellia. And I'll stick to that promise. The promise that kept my mouth shut. The only thing I'm not going to let go.

The question was, what was happening? Why am I feeling so much pain? Why is this happening? How did this happen? Lots of other questions ran through my mind. Suddenly, blackness covered everything I could see. I tried to imagine Chamellia's face again, but to no avail. I felt that I was too weak to even move a single degree. The blackness was pulling me down, tempting me to just let it go. But, I didn't. I have to think about them. About 'her'. I was still clinging on , going to the opposite force the blackness is pulling me when I felt myself slipping.

I slipped totally, the blackness pullingme down, while I protested, yelling. Suddenly, I could feel my whole body - almost. I could imagine my arms, hugging Chamellia as she hugged me back, her head on my chest. As I hugged her, she grew hotter and hotter and it became so hot that it felt as if I was hugging fire, rather than warm Chamllia. As the time goes by, the heat grew in my chest and it spreaded all over me. I letted go of Chamellia.
The heat was hotter than being near a scorching sun. I felt that I didn't want to live anymore. I quickly forgotten the promise I made. I forgotten even Chamellia and my friends and my mission to save them. Instead, I focused on how to take out the fire that was all over me.

In a blink of an eye, everything came back: time, meaning, life, the promise I had made, my mission, my friends and most of all, Chamellia. And, at the same time, everything I felt was sharp and clear. To my disappointment, the pain and fire raged on. Everything that made sense came back to me while the endless burn didn't stop or decrease even a tiny degree.

I stayed very still, not giving away a shriek, not letting my mouth open. Because if I did, everyone around me - whoever they are - will hear me and catch their attention. I hate attention.

After what seem like millenia, I opened my eyes, only to see eight pairs of eyes staring back at me. Seven were golden yellow and the other one was chocolate brown. I sat up straight and looked at my surroundings - rather than the eyes which were staring at me. Everything was so 'clear'. So Sharp. I could see each dust mote, floating, making patterns and images.

After discovering that I had no idea where I was, I looked at all of them. One of them - who looks like the father - has blonde hair. Beside him, who looks like the mother, ha soft caramel-colored hair which reached until her waist. She had a tender look that only a mother has. There were three more boys and two more girls whose eyes were golden-yellow. The boy beside Esme was big and muscular and had a wide grin on his face, as if expecting something. The other was lean, less muscular and blond. He was looking at me as is he was calculating a big problem. The last boy was almost the same size as the blond haired, only a bit bigger by an inch or two and had bronze hair. He was looking at me with a welcoming smile. Beside the blond haired boy was a small tiny girl with black hair pointing at every direction. She was smiling at me, a smile that shows she was hiding something from you. Beside the muscular man was a beautiful, blonde girl. She gave me a crooked smile. All of them had similar skin - which was pale white - beautiful and young. The difference was their gold-yellow eyes. Some of them had a darker tone of gold, the others had lighter tones. Overall, they were gorgeous.

I turned to the girl just beside the bronze haired whose eyes were the only one different was staring back at me with with wide, chocolate browm eyes. She was pale, but not as pale as them. She was a brunette, with long, curly, brown hair reaching until her waist. She had a smile and a doubt look in her eyes. I frowned as I wondered why.

"Hello. My name is Edward Cullen. This is my family. Carlisle, Esme, Emmet, Jasper, Alice, Rosalie and my girlfriend, Bella." The bronze haired boy said. Suddenly, their eyes were clouded with concern and looked at Bella, then me.

Carlisle raised his hand in front of me and said, "Welcome to the Cullens family" And I gladly shook his hands.

Permalink Reply by ѼForeverTwilighter on November 20, 2009 at 10:20am

sorry 4 my late reply dude Im promoting your fic :D That 2 chapters was amazing my curiosity is burning more LOL

Permalink Reply by ♥::.Amelie StarDust.::♥ on November 22, 2009 at 9:24pm

:D Thank you!!

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