The Twilight Saga

What if Edward met someone before Bella?What would Bella do when she see's her?Well I made this up on the go.So Enjoy!!!! ((Chapter 1 is still continuing!!!)

First Love

Edward’s POV
Normal well trying to (chapter 1)

The sun was flashing down on me and Bella. It was so bright that my body was filled with luminous sparkles. “Love, are you okay?” she hesitated and took a breath “the sun is so beautiful better then ever.” She said “I miss the warmth,” she sighed and rested on my shoulder “I think Renesmee is about to wake up” I said. She smiled with her beautiful white teeth “should we wait a couple of more minutes?” she asked.” Your choice” I hesitated, she got up from the couch and walked to Renesmee’s room. I listened to her footsteps and heard Nessie waking up; I got up from the couch and started to make breakfast. While I was making the pancakes I heard Bella singing to Nessie, she walked into the kitchen. “This is for breakfast?” she asked and I smiled “well just trying to be normal love” I said and Renesmee wanted the food anyways.”You never want to eat ‘normal’ food Edward” she hissed “I’m trying to today” I said. Bella laughed so hard that probably Jacob heard,”O.K suit yourself” she said and trailed off, I rolled my eyes and looked at Renesmee.

“Do you think I could try to be normal?” I asked Renesmee.

She giggled “Well you can try daddy” she said.

I rolled my eyes “whatever I can still read your thoughts”

She got up from her chair and jumped on the wooden floor. “Bind down” she said and I listened to her order on my knees she put her palm of my hand on my cheek “does that really look normal to you daddy?” I looked at the picture closely now, I was still eating deer. “No” I said, I got up from my knees and turned around to wash the dishes, it took forever just to wash the mess.” Is that normal for a dad to wash the dishes?” I asked Renesmee, and then Bella came in with a white dress on “Yes it is Edward.” I laughed sarcastically and Renesmee sighed “I don’t have time for this,” and left out the door for Bella to take her to school. “See you in a few Edward” she said and kissed me on the lips and left. All I could hear was Bella in her Mercedes and drove off to drop off Renesmee; after she left I jumped out the window and went hunting.

I could smell the deer coming near so I hid behind a tree and waited for my prey. I sniffed the air and I could smell I fresh sent of a Vampire, I trailed off to find the scent. It got close to the East side of the forest and the Vampire ran as fast like a speed of light. I started to run fast, and then I hit a tree on accident. Then the shadow stopped and followed my trail, I could smell the fresh blood from the vampire. She approached me and she had red hair like fire and she had deep golden eyes “Edward?” she asked. Then I could see her clear now and it was my first love Maddie.

Chapter 1:Trying to be normal pg.1-2
Chapter 2:Bella is my wife not Maddie pg.3-4
Chapter 3: The Fight pg. 4-5
Chapter 4: What have I done? pg.7-9
Chapter 5: Guilty pg 11
Chapter 6:Let the flames begin Pg.12
Chapter 7: What if Pg.14
Chapter 8: Planning and quality time with your arch-nemesis Pg.14
Chapter 9: Dinner Pg.15
Chapter 10:Shopping with your nemesis Pg.17
Chapter 10 part 2:Shopping with your Nemesis Pg. 19
Chapter 11: Rosalie's Help more like Emmett's Pg.20 and 23
Chapter 12:Chapter 12: Oh Brother Edward please don’t kill me this is just revenge. Pg.25
Chapter 13: Betrayel for Betrayel Pg.28
Chapter 14: Fights + Lies= Divorce Pg.29-

Chapter 15: why YOU? Pg. 31

Credit's to:
Danielle-Thank you for the Banner :D
Rhia- Thanks for the Banner!
Charlotte-Thanks for banner!
Twilight Love Story O_o -Thak you for the banner!!

Dedicated members for chapters and why:
SeducingEdward-Chapter 4 ((She helped me figure out how to so this chapter))
Katie-Chapter 7 ((Because she grounded me >.<))

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write more!!!! ASAP!!!!!! please!!!!!!!! its so cool!!! i love little renesmee and this sounds so cool!!!!!
wow this sounds really good! tell me when you write more?
For sure!! Really intresting I'll give yall in update!
when will you be posting more?
write more
im killing edward silently hahahaha
I'll post more tommorow!!
THis is really good!!!!
Thanks!! and tell your friends please i'll post Maddie's point of view and Bella's tommorow!!!!!!!
like i said im taking edward to disclosed area were i slice him very softly he screams in pain "Oh Edward this is just the beginning" hahaahahha
Here's the rest:

Maddie’s POV

I looked at his bronze hair and his golden eyes, they were exactly like mine bright and shiny. “Hello Maddie love I mean…” he hesitated; I think he felt awkward he was hiding something. “Hello Edward” I said happily, “I haven’t seen you for centuries! How are you?” I asked.”Oh I’m very well what about you?” He sighed, “I’m fine I’d miss you so much ever since we broke-“then he interrupted me “yea” he said. I walked over to him and gave him a great big hug; I wanted to stay like this it was so perfect. He let go of me “Maddie I have to tell you something” he said, I waited for him to answer “I’m married and have a child we can’t…” he stopped “be like old times” he sighed. I smiled “That’s great Edward I’m happy for you” I said, but in my head I was gloomy, I wish I was with him.

He looked at me for a while “I can’t read your thoughts” He said “Do you have a shield?”

I laughed “Yes but as you can see I developed powers for the last century.”

“You have two powers?” he asked as if he was afraid of me.

“Yep I have a shield and make you go to sleep” I said.

He looked at me “you can make people fall asleep?” he asked amazed. “Yes Edward something that Carlisle has been looking for four centuries” I said. He looked happy and he smiled “I have to tell Bella this she would be delighted” he concentrated. I sighed “well I have no place to stay and I was wondering could I?” I asked desperately. He turned around “Yes and one question how do you make people go to sleep?” he asked. I hesitated “I sing to them a lullaby” I said “or a peaceful song” I said, “come with me you can stay at Carlisle and Esme’s place for a while” He said. I smiled “Thank you Edward” I said, “follow me” he said, and then he ran like a cheetah. I followed his sent he already jumped over the river and sat right next to a tree waiting. I started to run as fast as I could
And I leaped over the river but I got only a tip of my yellow dress wet “impressive” he said. I turned around “I got my dress wet though” I said,”Oh Alice has a huge closet that you can borough clothes from.” After that he ran into the white and glassed house, I got out of the forest and walked on the porch and heard Edward, Carlisle, Esme, Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, Emmett, and two other girls talking. “You can come in now” Edward said and I opened the door “Surprise” Edward said and then Alice jumped up and Rosalie came up to me and hugged me. “We’ve missed you” said Alice and I was happy to see Rose “I’m so glad your here I want you to meet someone.” She said she grabbed my wrist
And pulled me toward the leather couch and I sat down, I looked at the little girl that was smiling at me. “Hello I’m Renesmee” she said in her lovely voice “I’m Maddie” I said “it’s very nice to meet you” and I opened my arms to give her a hug.

((Renesmee’s already home from school))
She scoots over and hugged me and I heard her heart thumping a rhythm, I realized she was human. I went to the edge of the couch “No wait!” she cried and she pressed her hand on my cheek, I saw a pretty image. All I could say is “Oh” then she smiled and sat right back down, I smiled back “this must be your Child Edward she’s precious” I said. He turned around from talking to the beautiful women “Yes I know and there’s one more person I want you to meet” he said then he faced the whole room and show’s the beautiful vampire she had long dark brown hair and it went down to her waist. Her golden eyes were brightest out of the room, “this is my wife Bella” he said.

Maddie’s thought: What should I do? I’m usually never this jealous? Can I still get Edward back and runaway with him? Or is this hopeless? I don’t want to hurt anyone.

Bella’s POV

I saw the new vampire in the house she had red fire hair and deep golden eyes like Edward, I was jealous. She got up from the couch “Hello I’m Maddie” she said “I’ve known Edward for one Century” she said smiling. I wanted to crush her but I had a feeling that I didn’t want to because she had something powerful.”Love, this is her she can make people fall into instant sleep by a lullaby or a peaceful song” he said then he gave me his crooked smile. I turned to Maddie she felt the same thing as I did “and I have a shield” she sighed, I was amazed she has two powers. I was afraid of her now, I hid behind Edward “Love, I know you’ve been missing being a human for six years, I know you would Like to sleep” he said. I looked at her for a while she looked mysterious and helpful. “This must be my lucky day “I hesitated and then she looked up, she smiled “alright” she said.

“What song or lullaby would you like to hear?” she asked and she waited for my answer.

I chuckled “Could I hear Imagine by John Lennon please?” I asked.

She sighed “Yes and I love that song” then she started to sing peacefully she sounded kind of fine frenzy and Avril Lavigne at the same time. I started to fall gently on the couch, she was so peaceful and gentle, I felt like I should just fall asleep now. It turned pitch black and I saw a meadow with purple flowers and it was snowing. I felt like I wanted to dance and so I did, I pranced around and my white dress blended in the snow. There was nobody in my dream Maddie, Edward, Renesmee, The Cullen’s, or the other Covens, I was happy and in peace as if I died. I blinked and I felt human again in my own world. I sat down near a pond that was frozen with ice and not worrying about anyone then suddenly the scene changed. I opened my eyes and saw Edward and Maddie looking upon me wondering what happened. “I’m so sorry I shouldn’t have-“I stopped her “its okay I was happy in my dream” I said. I got up from the couch and started to walk from the kitchen “I wish that always happened to me” I said dancing around the room

Bella’s thought: Can I trust her or is she using me to get to Edward? Is she safe with us? Is she part of any coven that we don’t know about? Could I be in danger…..

End of chapter 1


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