The Twilight Saga

False Impressions

A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.

 

I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.

 

 

Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:

 

The Heart is a Bloom:  Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...

 

No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...

 

Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.

Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/loss-to-lo...

 


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Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 21, 2011 at 9:13pm

I know I know D - Bella is being beyond frustarting at the moment and she is going to ahve to change her tune soon or we are all going to mass mob her and make her pay for being so mean to our boy lol. Glad that you are hooked and that you continue to enjoy the story even through the frustrations. I do tend to do that I am afraid :)

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by TEAM ESME on August 16, 2011 at 11:07pm

amazing as always,,,,,Edward seems so clueless as to what he did,,,,,, Bella just tell the poor boy so he can explains himself!!!,,,,,,,,,,cant wait to see what happens next,,,,,,,,,,

                                  lots of xoxo TEAM ESME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 17, 2011 at 1:15am

Hi Team Esme,

 

Thanks for the kudos :)  Edward is completely clueless and will remain so for quite a while although I will be giving you clues etc as we go along. It would really have been better for Bella just to tell Edward what the problem was as it would have been sorted by now but of course Bella doesn't believe that she can for reasons that will be revealed later.

 

Thanks for reading

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by DaneiMarie on August 18, 2011 at 3:17am
I love this story and I am glad we got a little insight of what happened in the past, or well a look at the past. I really really wish I knew what happened to make her hate him so much. I am very curious as to the idea of Jessica being involved in the problem. I cant wait for more! I loved that it was super long. Your brilliant!
Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 18, 2011 at 9:01pm

Hi DaneiMarie,

 

Glad you liked the memories - showed that they weren't always at each other even though it didn't tell you what happened to change that.....oh dear. I know you want to know what happened but it will come out soonish. Jessica is involved but not in the way everyone is envisioning I think. Thnaks for your compliments anmd I am glad you liked the long length :)

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by AnahyR on August 18, 2011 at 10:09am

it seems to me that Jess was jealous and she made up something against the couple!!! but why??? I can't wait for you to reveal the real reason for their awkwardness.

 

thank you again for such an amazing story!!!

Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 21, 2011 at 9:15pm

Hi AnahyR,

 

I can tell you that Jess has no idea that Bella and Edward are in anyway interested in one another so she is definitely not trying to make anyone jealous. Thanks for reading - love you for it.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by monica ezzat on August 19, 2011 at 8:06am

Nice job Michelle!!! you left me breathless as always.now we're even more curious to know what happened she seemed so excited about him in the beginning ..so sth. really bad must have took place

and Edward bleading to know what changed all that :) thats not fair at all!!!!! come on Bella!

the phone call was so...edward and bella!! Jessica's problem is wierd hope you will reveal that next chapter.

i LOVED  how you mentioned and described Australia !! hope there is going to be more of  it. Now i just really want to visit Australia so bad!!

cant wait for the next chapter

~MoNiCa~<3

Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 21, 2011 at 9:19pm

Hi Monica,

 

Thnaks for your compliments. Bella really did like him in the beginning didn't she amnd she was so excited about their date - soon you will find out what happened to change that. I feel so sorry for Edward because he is really in the dark but maybe once he finds out what she believes he would have been happier to stay that way. He certainly won't be happy.

Jessica's problem is very much mixed up with what will eventually happen between our favourite couple but not due to jealousy or anything. In a way Jess will kind of be a victim. Won't find that out for a few chapters yet though so sorry.....

Australia is beautiful and I thought it would be nice to write a bit more about places I actuually experience etc. Make sure you come and visit one day :)

 

Thanks again

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Navdha on August 19, 2011 at 9:53am
I am a little late with my reviews this time. :3
First of all, yaay! They're in Australia! It was really good to go back to the time when Eddie boy first met Bella and made her swoon all over again. He.he. I'm guessing that Bella's initial attraction and liking for him was all ruined cause of her roommate maybe? Its jus a guess that maybe she had a crush on him and he said a no or something. But i guess that will still have to wait. Bella is a lil too aggressive in this story though. She definitely looks for ways to make Edward feel like dirt. Ed is patient. More patient than he should be. But he is Edward afterall. M really looking forward to the next chapter.

<3 Navs.
Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 23, 2011 at 7:21pm

Hi Cherub,

 

I seriously thought I had written this huge long comment back to you but it hasn't come up - I mustn't have clicked the button at the end gees - stupid me.

 

I so loved writing the meeting of Bella and Edward to show that there really was something there between them - it also shows that Bella's anger at Edward is going against what she really wants. I know she is frustrating but hopefully our Edward can make her see things differently soon :)

 

 

Jessica definitely DID NOT have a crush on Edward but she most certainly had something to do with Bella's falling out with Edward. Bella is aggressive right now but we will see her softening soon and showing her true colours - at the moment she is in turmoil and trying to hold onto that against what she actually wants.

Edward is extremely patient and I am not so sure how long that will last for.

Thanks for reading. I'm off to finish the next chapter so I can hopefully get it up today.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Navdha on August 23, 2011 at 8:28pm
D:
I hate it when that happens. I feel like throwing my laptop or banging my head against it. *shakes head* I sympathize with you.

Another chapter! Eeeeeep! The only reason m stil here is only cause of you. I've lost my interest in everything other than your fanfic. :)

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