False Impressions
A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/loss-to-lo...
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Permalink Reply by Wendy D {#1 Stalker Fan} on -
Ok, Michelle...so sorry been so long since I commented! You know how goes it, so I know you understand...maybe now better than ever!! :( :(
So, Here is my thought of what happened.....you know me, always stalking and guessing!!
I think that Jessica is depressed because she tried to hit on Edward. Now, Edward being the nice guy that he is, probably led her on without meaning it...probably even helped with some labs or something.... Jessica finally gets the courage to act on what she probably fantasized was going on, and he then realized what was going on and told her no. He didn't like her like that. Then she went and told Lauren, who added fuel to the fire....and Lauren basically told Bella that Edward played Jessica until he got what "he" wanted and Bella believed her....
Am I even close??? So Jessica, because she believed he led her on is pissed, depressed and working on keeping him from Bella...I would even guess that Edward turned her down and told her that he liked Bella...which really pissed her off!! LOL!
Don't you just love my theories?!
I can't wait for them to find out....I wonder too if James and Victoria have something to do with it, but not sure cuz can't remember, if they knew them before the group went to Australia.....
Hugs and Love!!! Hope your back feels better soon, as I hope mine too!! MRI today, with IV contrast...so not happy....Wee bit claustrophobic and they want to do one with and one without contrast, so two today??? ugh!
Earl and Kaia…happy dancing together…*sighs—love is in the air*
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Permalink Reply by Wendy D {#1 Stalker Fan} on
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Hmmmm....should have read the comments above...then I would see my dear Michelle said Jessica did not have a crush on Edward....so maybe I got the 2 people switched?? hahaha! Who knows now....well Michelle does!!!
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Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on -
Ugggggg, I am going to murder Bella!! >.< She makes me soooo angry, why can't she just tell him!? I want them to be friends again. D;
I am glad they are finally there and it sounds beautiful. I've always wanted to go to Australia. (:
Hmm, I am glad Bella will try to be more civil but at the end she sounded like a child...gosh, right now Bella is making me hate her, lol.
Anyways, I'm sorry it took so long to reply, school started two weeks ago and it's been kinda hectic getting used to my school schedule again. I remembered to come on today because I've sprained my ankle for the first time and I have nothing to do but ice it. :/
Well, I am excited for the next chapter and I can't wait for more! :D
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Permalink Reply by MC,Cullen<3 on -
I really want to know what this big secret is and i hope they get together soon :) as always it was amazing and i love reading it! More soon please!!!
Always, Morgan
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Permalink Reply by Effy Cooper on -
come on update soon i know you just wrote that chapter but its soo addictive so...please!!!!
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on -
Hi Effy,
Sorry that there will be a wait but it is nice to know that the story is addictive :)
Thanks heaps and cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Alice Cullen** {Elite Pack} on -
Love it like always!!!!! Come on Bella, just yell Edward why all her deep loveing felling left or isnt showing?!?! He knows he did something just doesnt know what!!! Thank you for the update!!! Cant wait for more!!!! Please write soon!!! Even though you just updated.
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Thanks Alice Cullen**{Elite Pack} It would be much easier for all involved if Bella just yelled at Edward and told him what her problem was. Thnaks for reading and I will update as soon as possible
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by bella on -
love this chapter it is amazing as always Michelle ..
I really wish that Bellawould just tell Edward what is wrong .. and I really wish if she tells him all those deep feeling that she has for him .. but I have a feeling that this isn't going to happen soon Right ?!
anyways love this chapter thank u for updating and plz always keep me posted .. u r doing a wonderful job ..
ur # 1 fan
Bella
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Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on -
HI Michelle,
Well what can I say except you've done it again another AMAZING chapter!! I love your writing so much and I look so forward to your updates. Now I am wondering what happened to make Bella think Edward is nothing more than a player with a good guy cover. I am a little uneasy about the fact that Jessica is her dorm mate, she was always a little devious about wanting Edward. I fear that maybe it was a one sided crush that caused Bella to think badly of Edward. Jessica may have led her to believe that he was interested in her when really she was the one at home nursing her bruised ego. I know I am probably way off base but why else would you have Jessica, who I never liked, be friends and dorm mates with Bella? Ok so enough of my random guesses. Good things come to those who wait. As for this chapter I loved all the details and the way you captured the attraction between Bella and Edward before she even realized who he was. I also loved how he knew her just from the pics and the conversations with Alice. I loved every single word and will as always be waiting for more. I hope you're doing well and that life is good. Until you post again keep safe and don't push yourself too hard!!
Hugs
Sarah
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hi Sarah Beth,
I know everyone is wondering what Edward did and I will give you a small clue. Him being a player ( and I am not saying that he is) would not be enough for Bella to be so angry with him. She might be wary of him if she found out that he liked the girls a lot and was with a different one all the time but that is not the case - she is truly upset with him about something much bigger that she thinks he has done. Her snide comments about him being a player, etc are borne out of what she thinks she knows he has done because she can't actually come right out with her accusation. It will make sense later.
Another clue - Jessica does NOT have a crush on Edward but she definitely has something to do with Bella's dislike.
I am glad that you liked the way I wrote the chapter and particularly the memories part where we get to see just how strongly Bella was feeling and attracted to Edward :)
I am doing well - thanks for asking. I am ridiculously busy but other than that I have not been sick or anything for the past month or so so that has been great ;)Love
Love your comments and appreciate every single one of them
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hi Bella,
You are probably right. Bella thinks she has good reason for both why she dislikes him ( even though we all know she feels more than that) and for why she is not telling him or anyone else. It is heart warming to know that you think I am doing a wonderful job so thanks.
Cheers
Michelle
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