False Impressions
A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/loss-to-lo...
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on -
Hi Ashley,
I don't think you are alone in that sentiment. Hope to get the next chapter out as soon as possible. Thanks for your comment and for reading.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Alice Cullen** {Elite Pack} on -
Love it Michelle!!!!! I cant wait for more!!!! Thank you for the update!!! Im so happy he found her!!!!! Aww i was hoping they'd kiss!!!! James is gonna get beat!!! Haha i loved Bella's insult to Victoria!!!! Please write soon!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by bella on -
wow wow wow .. this is soooooooooo Great !!
ok first of all Victoria and James I thought that Edward should have killed James for leaving Bella alone !! I men he's the one who convinced her to go at the first place I mean I don't think it was on purpose by him but still he should have listened to Jada when she said that they should go back for her ...
I really loved when Bella mouthed "promise" to Edward that was so beautiful I mean it truly was a perfect moment ..
I absolutely adored the part when Bella and Edward held each other for the warmth and I also liked when Edward turned to "doctor mode" I really liked seeing that part of him .. my Heart skipped a beat when Edward kissed Bella on her forehead and I was soo thrilled to know that Bella was awake and felt him kiss her and she didn'r pull away or anything ..
I loved this chapter so much u r truly Amazing Michelle keep up the great work ..
ur # 1 fan
Bella
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hiya Bella,
Smiles always happen when I read your enthusiastic reviews - thanks so much. I agree that Edward should have killed James but we don't want Edward in jail over that kind of thing so I will keep it a little less violent ;)
All the parts you enjoyed, I actually ahd fun writing so I am pleased that they came across the right way. As for Bella feeling Edward's kiss that will come up in the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and al;ways being so complimentary.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Thnaks Alice Cullen **{Elite Pack}
Glad you loved it and that you are looking forward to an update. No kisses in this chapter sorry but I can tell you that I have exactly how their first kiss will go in my head and it will hit them both for a six.
Thnaks for reading
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hi Paula,
Thanks for commenting and letting me know what you liked about this chapter. I agree that James and Edward coming to blows would be very interesting indeed. Hope to have more for you soon
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Kelley Brady on -
I absolutely love your story! it is amazing !!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for your next update. Please, please, please update soon!
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Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on -
Michelle thank you for the update.............Finally Edward gets some quality time with Bella.......yey!..................I can't believe James left her and didn't even try to find her......what a butt!!!.........Emment , Sam & Edward didn't waste any time going to look for her...........I'm soooooooo happy Edward was the one to find Bella.............I can't wait to see if she feels differently towards Edward when they are found.................The story is progessing nicely.............until you post again.
ps I hope your feeling better...sending get well wishes..smile
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Thanks Kelley Brady. It makes me happy to know you are enjoying the story. Will update soon
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Wendy D {#1 Stalker Fan} on -
Wow Michelle, This was a wonderful chapter. We got to see more of James and Victoria's true nature, no surprise there, but got to see a warmth from Edward both physically and emotionally. I hope that Bella sees it too. I am dying to know what this "secret" is.
As usual, I got part of my guess right and part wrong, but no hints as to which was correct?! Grrrr.....
I so love your stories Michelle. I love your headstrong Bella and true to life Edward...do anything and take anything if it keeps Bella happy!
I feel sorry that Jade got caught in the middle of James and Victoria's self preservation and not care about Bella...and I do not agree with Edward when he thought "staying together was the right thing to do". Not because the concept isn't right, but because James wouldn't consider doing the right thing in the first place! Selfish wanker!
I know that this will not make everything all hunky dory between Bella and Edward, but I do hope that it will break down a little more of the wall and allow Bella to rethink the obvious lie she has been believing....giving him a little leeway...maybe?!
I truly hope that you are feeling better friend. I did see the surgeon and he is recommending a laminectomy at L5/S1 and hopefully relieving the pressure on my spinal cord and root nerve in that area causing the constant pain and nerve damage in my left foot. We are hopeful that I will regain the reflex and feeling in my left foot with therapy after the surgery. I am still far from the end of this journey, but pain relief would be much appreciated! They did change my meds and give me a better muscle relaxer which has helped tremendously and I am oh so grateful! I actually slept like 5 hours in a row for the first time in months! Woo Hoo!
Cannot wait for the next chapter and see how Edward and Bella "treat" each other after this ordeal. I do not have my hopes up too high yet, I have followed you far too long to know we won't get off that easy!!
Hugs and Love! Your #1 Stalker Fan!!
Earl and Ernie! He came with my new Alien Green Kia Soul! Too cute!
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Permalink Reply by Peace*Love*Twilight on -
Oh my gosh!!! I was thinking Bella going with Victoria and James was a bad idea. I am just glad Edward found her and is helping her. I hope that they are okay and Emmett and Sam find them soon. Bella has been out in the cold for a while now... Anyway, another GREAT chapter as always. Can't wait for more. I saw you weren't feeling good earlier. If you are still feeling bad, I hope you feel better soon and it isn't anything serious. :)
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Permalink Reply by Jazmett Luver on
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TRUE THAT! COMPLETELY AGREE! LUV YA STORIE!
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