False Impressions

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Permalink Reply by Delilah Cullen on July 18, 2012 at 3:44am

Haha, sexy Edward is coming out to play now. This should be fun to say the least. Alice is always so insightful. Oh I wish there was more to read Sweetie. It's been too long since your last update. This was such a tease and you know it, lol.

What comes after the, "Hi Edward." I have to know.

As usual Michelle, a superb job. Now it's going to be agonizing to wait for more. I've been having a rough go of it myself though, so I know where you're coming from. With the slow updates. My characters decided to take a very long vacation from me and I can't seem to locate them. It worries me. Add that and everyday life getting in the way and it seems impossible that they will return. I hope everything is getting better for you. How's your back?

I hope you're back because I really want to finish reading this story. Hope all is going well. Inbox me if you would like to chat a bit.

D

Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on July 18, 2012 at 9:43am

thank you Michele for the update!!!.Welcome back I have miss you terribly..........It seems Bella & Edward might just have a nice time today with the rest of the gang.  Emmet to funny about Edward not telling him first about Rosalie.  I hope James stay's at bay today, and leaves Bella & Edward alone.

Permalink Reply by Michelle on July 18, 2012 at 9:12pm

Hi my dear D, Glad to see you too :)

 

Im a tease? Hmmm I think I like that ;) Edward is going to start fighting in a completely different way now so it should be a bit of fun for us all. I have already started with the what comes next after her "Hi Bella" so will have it up next week. I am truly hoping to get back to my once a week postings to be fair to those of you still reading. Will see how I can do.

 

I am sorry to hear about your rought trot and even sadder to see that you are going to hand over some of your stories. It really is hard to maintain everything at once isn't it?

 

My back is killing me right noiw I am afraid. On my days off I tend to try and stay as flat as possible and constantly ice so that I can get to work on my days on. More annoying than anything not to be able to move normally and be careful of every little turn or bend you make. Shouldn't complain though because so many people are worse off than me.

 

I am sincerely trying to be back properly. Thanks for sticking by me and continuing to read

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on July 18, 2012 at 9:34am

Hi Michelle,

So glad that you're back and I hope that you're feeling well and things for you are good. Oh and did I mention that i missed you?? Okay so on with the review....

I absolutely love Alice and you capture her personality and her demeanor so well. I'm so glad she is their to push Edward and keep him in line.  She can see that Bella and Edward belong together and we know that Alice usually gets her way.  I do wonder why Bella hasn't confided her distrust of Edward with Alice. 

I think Bella is really getting to Edward and he may be getting a little bit touchy with everyone around, which is doing nothing to keep his feelings toward Bella hidden or from showing everyone, other than Bella, how she effects him.  I was laughing as I read the end, Edward in nothing but a towel, I would loved to have seen that! I can't wait to see how he uses this new realization of his effect on her to his advantage.

As always great writing and wonderful story. I will be waiting patiently for the next update.

Lots of hugs

Sarah

Permalink Reply by Michelle on July 18, 2012 at 9:15pm

Hello lovely Sarah Beth,

 

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had a very strong image of Alice coming in and losing it with our Edward even whilst she was trying to organise him - how funny. Bella has made a promise to someone else and she has not broken it with anyone - not even her nest friend Al;ice. They also don't talk too much about it because they don't want to ruin their own friendship.

 

Edward is definitely upping the game now in making Bella see him in a different light to win her - should be a bit of fun to write?????

 

Edward in a towel - yummmmmmmm I would be beside myself too I think.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing - you know I love you for it.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Navdha on July 18, 2012 at 10:08am

I'm so glad that I didn't give up on this story. Michelle, please try not being absent all the time. :(

Permalink Reply by Michelle on July 18, 2012 at 9:16pm

A huge sorry Navdha - sometimes life just gets too busy and priorities have to be decided. I am hoping I am back for good now :) Thanks for not giving up - I truly appreciate it.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Navdha on July 19, 2012 at 3:39am

I had thought you wouldn't return but you always do and yours is the only story that I'm following currently. I'm glad that you're back now and truly excited to read more of your chapters. Yea, I understand but then waiting is a..i'm not supposed to say it but you know what I mean ;)

Hope you're doing well. :)

Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on July 19, 2012 at 2:33am

Oh gosh, Edward really messed up last night. He just doesn't get how Bella's head works, though that is understandable because she never talks to him. But still!! Man up dummy. Haha, anyways James is an arrogant toe rag, no one wants to get into bed with him, haha. Though he is intuitive or he's just not blind, he knows how Bella doesn't want to feel about Edward...if that even makes sense? Alice, oh I love her. One of my favorite characters, she definitely made me laugh in this chapter, haha. Emmett made me laugh as well, he's got it gooood for Rose, ahaha. Can't wait to see how they act around each other. Bella likes Edward's body, oo la la, haha, who wouldn't! I mean, come on! Haha, at least Edward knows that Bella wants him physically and mentally because Alice finally told the blind man what he hasn't been seeing! And Bella ogled Edward's body, oh that made me laugh too. Haha. Oh and about my name, thanks! I like it too, it speaks the truth. (: Well as per usual I can't wait for more, an other brilliant chapter and I am so happy you're back and may start writing like you did before! (:

-Kendra

Permalink Reply by Michelle on July 29, 2012 at 7:29pm

Thanks Kendra. Hearing the things you enjoy about the chapter is great - thanks for giving me such positive feedback. I've just posted the next chapter and you will get to see Bella's reaction to Edward and the towel scene - hmmm I would love to see that myself I must admit ;)

Things are going to start to hot up now so I really do hope you keep reading and enjoying

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by DaneiMarie on July 21, 2012 at 3:50am

Oh am I beyond happy that you posted. To be honest I had pretty much given up on this site since no one really updates much any more. I dont even know why I signed on but I am very glad I did!!! You are so brilliant and I loved it as always! Please post more but sooner!!! I am dying to know what happened and whats going to happen with Bella and Edward!!! Please post more very very soon!!! Oh and of course I missed you and I am glad you are doing well!!!

Permalink Reply by Michelle on July 29, 2012 at 7:30pm

Oh DaneiMarie

Youve been with me since the beginning so it wouldn't be the same if you decided to leave the site and I didn't get your comments on here. Thank you for your kind words as always. Hope you enjoy the next chapter that I just posted :)

Cheers

Michelle

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