False Impressions
A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/loss-to-lo...
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Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on -
WOW! Michelle this was a very tough chapter to read but you wrote it with such understanding. A lot of people will look at Deborah as a horrible mother for not standing up for herself and risking her son; but unless you 've been there you can't possibly understand. I am glad that she did take Bella and Edward's words to heart, and is getting the help she and Zach need. I think this new twist will bring Bella & Edward closer, as they try to help Zach & Deborah. I also think Bella is starting to change how she feels about Edward, because she trusted him enough to ask for his help. She may try to fight, she may try to deny it but she's in LOVE with the boy!!
This was a very heartfelt chapter and my heart aches for those who have expierenced such pain and abuse. You may never know but someone out there may read this and realize there is hope for them too.
Great, heartfelt chapter that touched my heart.
I hope you're doing well and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on -
Hi Sarah Beth,
This was a tough one to write but it had always been in the cards because I want Bella and Edward to see each other differently depending on the scenario. I really hope noone thinks badly of Deborah - people being abused are victims and I have made it that as soon as she realised her son was in dnager she was going to stand up for both herself and her son. I agree that this should bring them closer but it has also made Bella realise there are some serious flaws in her own beliefs about Edward that she has to deal with.
Thnaks for all your lovely words.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Seugnet du Toit on
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Great chapter! I am so glad Deborah changed her mind in the end and asked for help! And who knew Bella's sport injury would lead to a little boy asking her for help and end up perhaps saving his and his mother's lives? Very touching indeed! And her trust in Edward in that situation really is a sign that her feelings for him is getting stronger and she is starting to second guess what she thinks she knows about him. If she would just say something about what is bothering her so that the misunderstanding could be resolved! Please post soon so i can see how all this turns out!
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Thanks Seugnet du Toit for your comments. Deborah and Zach will definitely impact on the story and Bella is definitely second guessing herself. You will see this very much in the next chapter where more will be revealed about what she is starting to doubt. Love that you keep supporting this story so thank you
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by MC,Cullen<3 on -
ohh good lord i love this story!!!! more more more please
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Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on -
That's good that Bella is healing well and there were no lasting effects. Poor Em, beating himself up then Edward giving him the cold shoulder. Those two are too tough on themselves when it concerns Bella, their kyrptonite, aha. Glad Bella told Edward to be nice to Em, he didn't mean to hurt her. As for her calling Edward, she does know why she did it, she just doesn't want to tell herself. She trusts Edward and she cares for him, now if only she wouldn't shurg it off or ignore it. >.< Edward is a good person and I'm glad that he got Deborah and her son to the hospital and away from that so called 'man'. No man should hit a woman, women are not rabid animals that deserve that sort of treatment. I hope he gets his and doesn't find Deborah and her son, they deserve to start a new life without him. As to Bella's reaction, I wonder what that was. It was weird and I hope you reveil why she reacted that way later on in the story. I'm glad you updated and I can't wait for more. Also it was another good chapter. (:
Oh, and to your response to my comment.Thanks for telling me about cricket, still don't really get it but I think I'd like it. Baseball is a very fun sport to watch. On tv it's okay but live, it's amazing! I went to a couple of games with my dad when I was younger, we went to see the Seattle Mariners, those were awesome games. (: Okay, well bye now! (:
-Kendra
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Kendra,
Your comments never come up for me to see you have made them and it is not until I go to post a new chapter that I get yours. I am so sorry. I love hearing all the things you write about your thoughts and feelings about the characters. It makes my day that you take the time to wite them down for me so a big thank you!!!! When I come to USA I will definitely take in a baseball game. I actually find cricket very boring to watch :(
Next chapter up and it might answer some questions for everyone.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on
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Twililghtsaga doesn't like. ( ._.) Hahaha, well I'm glad you do see them at least... even though it's a bit late. (: Thank you for loveing my comments, I always feel like I should write more than, "Good, can't wait for more." I'm more than glad to write down my thoughts, as I do have a lot of them, what I just said reminded me of Alice in Wonderland, been reading a lot of that lately, haha.
Yay, glad the next chapter is up. I am no off to read it! (:-Kendra
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Permalink Reply by DaneiMarie on -
I loved it! I am loving that she called Edward!I am beyond happy that Deborah finally got strong enough! I can't wait till the next chapter for answers to be revealed! So sorry I took so long to see this. Dealing with adopt right now. I definitely needed a break. It was fantastic! Great work as always!
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Thnaks DaneiMarie :) Hope everything is okay at your end. Let me know if there is anything I can help you with.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by DaneiMarie on
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Lately things here have just gotten from bad to worse . I am releaved that I get breaks of good from you and this story. I am fine just dealing with alot and most recently my nana passed away but I know she is in a better place so its not too bad. Ill be fine dont you worry about me! I am strong and will get through this! Thanks for your concern. I appreciate it!
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