A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
Thankyou for the kind words. It sincerely makes me happy to know that people are enjoying the story and like the way I am conveying teh characters.
Jacob will definitely stir things up but maybe that is what Bella and Edward need to get it together.
You might be right about Jessica being closer than she thinks. A group discussion between the three of them would be very interesting indeed - I think I would like to be a fly on the wall for that one.
I like the way you think about how there could have been a miscommunication.
Thanks again for the support.
Loved the chapter!
Rosalie is so great in this story, and she also has some similarities with the Rosalie in the original story. She is a very good friend to Bella and she was a great help with Deborah. Jake definitely likes Bella in this story too, and he could force Edward to work harder to win Bella's heart. I also think the person on the other side of the argument (probably James) was the culprit, and Jessica was too chicken to tell Bella when she mistakenly identified Edward. She did not have the courage to correct her because she might have preferred it that Bella didn't know who the real culprit was. I really hope Jason Jenks the private investigator can find her so that Bella can confront her. It is unfair to her and Edward that they both have to suffer because of her dishonesty and fear. They could help her of she would just trust them. I wonder what her reaction would be if she saw James again ... if he is the culprit as I suspect! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Hiya Seugnet du Toit
Seriously happy that you enjoyed this chapter - I have to admit I was worried about how everyone would take the backstory and how many would be giving me a hard time.
You are correct about Jake - he will try his hand at getting Bella to succumb to his charms - will it work?
You have some interesting theories in your comment and some of it might just be correct ;)
Jason won't be needed for a while - that's all I am saying on that one.
Edward's reaction to finding out what she has believed will be interesting to say the least.
The next few chapters will have our boy doing his darndest to get Bella to admit her attraction to him and will hopefully have some fun times ( amidst teh drama).
Thanks for your theories and input.
Your story (like the first part of Twilight) reminds me a little of Pride and Prejudice with all the misunderstandings!
Amzing as always!!
Keep Me posted!
Love it! you are a great writer. I can't wait to read your next update and to find out what she finds out about Jessica!
Thanks Kelley. Bella won't find Jessica for a little while but there will be some Edward and Bella interactions coming up that might make her rethink whats she needs to do.
Wow amazing story michelle !!! absolutely love it !! and please please post more soon i can't wait to read more and absolutely cant wait to see edward and bella together with all this misconceptions gone and just truly in love with each other and all those cute romantic moments !! post more soon please
http://www.fanfiction.net/ is a better place to put fanfiction because it is specifically designed for it. The reviews/ comments are separate from the actual story.