The Twilight Saga

Renesmee finds herself in another disaster...Surrounded by pain, heartache, and betrayal...And It starts with.....Death of a loved one


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Chapter 1

Renesmee's POV


We all were waiting for Aunt Alice to come back to earth.

She was frozen, her eyes glazed over. I wonder what she was seeing now.

Maybe Jake's going to take me somewhere . . . Maybe he's planning a surprise.

I looked at Daddy and his jaw was clenched, his hands balled into fists.

"What do you see Alice?" Uncle Jazz whispered to her.

Aunt Alice shuddered and her eyes became aware again, they were full of horror, and sorrow.

I felt a chill go down my spine as I saw her and Daddy look at each other meaningfully.

"What is it?!" Mom and Uncle Jazz asked exasperatedly.

"They're coming." Aunt Alice and Dad whisipered.

I felt my stomach tie up into a knot. I looked at Jake and he wrapped his arms around my waist.

"Who is?" He asked. "And for what?" I whispered hesitantly.

"The Volturi!" Dad sighed as he rubbed his temples. "For you." Aunt Alice said at the exact same time, she covered her face.

"Me?! Why me?!" I yelled shrilly, I felt my heart quicken as the fear settled in.

"It doesn't matter! We need to get her out of here!" Aunt Alice said.

"Jacob, take her to La Push. Hide her! They're coming now." Dad said as he pushed us to the door.

"You'll be fine! We'll come and get you in a moment." Mom whispered as she hugged me tightly.

I nodded and followed Jake out to his motorcycle. Jake tossed me his helmet and I quickly put it on and hopped on.

We started speeding down the long narrow drive.

"Jake? Do you think they'll be okay?" I whispered.

"Don't worry. They'll be fine . . . I just need to protect you." That's all he said as he sped even faster.

I rested my chin on his shoulder and let my mind wander . . . Trying to forget about these past few minutes. I remembered the way Jake purposed to me 3 months ago . . . Valentine's Day, he woke me up after I spent the night at his house . . . He took me to the beach, while I was blindfolded, and swam me out to the middle of the water, and when I looked back at the shore the words: "Will you marry me?" were written in the sand. When I turned around he was holding a ring up to me. I smiled at the memory, that was the happiest day of my life.

"Okay, come on. We have to go hide . . . I don't know if they're coming here or not." Jake said as he dragged me to his house.

"Wait! You say that like they can get past the family!" I said as I froze on the porch.

"Well yeah! They could . . . Nessie, the Volturi is very powerful!" He nodded.

I yanked my arm out of his hand and sprinted toward his bike. I jumped on, not even bothering to wear the helmet, and sped out of La Push. I heard Jake's voice, pleading me to come back. I ignored him, my family was in danger . . . In danger because of me . . . If the Volturi wanted me, then that's who they'll get.



Okay...that's it for now...What do you think? Please comment!

Tags: Bella, Betrayal, Cullen, Death, Edward, Fear, Heartache, Jacob, Love, Renesmee, More…Story, Volturi

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i like it so muchhh
Thanks....I have another up called The Noon Moon. :) Thanks for reading!
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thanks! I'll post probably tonight or tomorrow
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Chapter 2
Renesmee's POV

I parked the motorcycle in front of the house and ran in.
I heard my family bickering with others, I froze in the doorway when I saw them.
Jane, Alec, Felix and Demetri. They all turned as soon as I stepped in.
I looked frantically at my parents, Mom's eyes were full of horror, as was Dad's.
No one dared to move, each of the Volturi members were far too close to me, if anyone tried to hurt one of them, Jane or Felix would kill me instantly.
I felt my legs shake as I looked at Jane. She smiled, she looked like an angel.
I closed my eyes before I felt the pain, when I did feel it I crumpled to the floor and screamed.
It was as if someone was burning me, cutting me, tearing me apart, and biting me all at once.
"Stop it!" I heard my parents' pleads.
The pain finally eased, I laid on the ground, waiting for more pain.
"Don't hurt her Jane! K-Kill me! Not her!" Mom said with an eagerness that scared me to death.
I heard Daddy catch his breath in horror and disbelief.
"If you suggest." Jane shrugged and was instantly in front of Mom.
Before anyone of us could react, she threw Mom into the wall, Felix waited for Mom there, my whole family tried to go help Mom, but they all started to stumble around, completely blind and deaf. I looked at Alec and he was looking at my family with intense eyes. I tried to stand but Demetri grabbed me by the throat and pinned me against the wall.
I felt my heart stop when I heard ripping and yelling. When I turned to look, Mom was missing an arm and was being hovered over by Jane and Felix.
I closed my eyes in defeat, I knew this was the end . . . They were going to kill us all.
Why not fight back anyway? I threw Demetri's hands off my throat and pushed him hard, I was surprised by how much strength I had.
I then proceeded to tackle Alec, he fell to the floor and I heard my family running toward me and Mom.
Alec straddled me and started squeezing my throat. I couldn't breathe, I tried to pry his fingers off, but I couldn't pull them off. I heard my family trying to fight the other three. What scared me was that I couldn't hear Mom's voice at all.
I felt myself getting weaker, my eyes started to close and my hands fell limply to the ground.
I let the darkness take over, and I felt myself drifting away.

Sorry! It's kinda short! But I'm writing as I'm going on these first few chapters, so bear with me!
Please comment, and tell me what you think is gonna happen next!
where is jacob at
love the story
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omg!!! from the beging and it's already cliffy and amazin plz write more
Chapter 3
Edward's POV

I stared at the fire burning bright in the front yard. More like glared.
I wanted to rip all four of them apart again, and again.
As I watched the line of purple smoke rise to the sky, I thought of the past.
Having Nessie, watching her grow, being a husband and father.
Now that life is gone . . . Gone forever, because of the Volturi.
I could hear my family's cries coming from the house.
I couldn't move, I couldn't breathe.
"Hey, what happened?!" Jake said as he ran up the drive.
"She's gone." I whispered. I felt my cold heart ache as I said those words.
"W-What?!" Jake stuttered in a panicked voice. "Which one?"
I looked at him with half angry, half sad eyes. "Both of them." I whispered.
He froze and took a step back in shock. "No! No! You're lying! Not both of them! Not Bella....and Nessie!" His voice came out shaky, he had tears developing in his eyes. I wish I could cry. At least it would be doing something!
"I wish I was lying, they're both gone." I told him. He shook his head and ran into the house.
I heard him start to sob, he must've seen Nessie.

Jacob's POV

No! No! No! Not now! No! I'm dreaming! I have to be dreaming! This can't be happening!
I felt myself shake with sobs when I saw Nessie's face.
She was lying on the sofa, Carlisle hovering over her . . . Doing CPR, I think . . . I saw the bruises on her neck. Handprints.
One of the Italian leeches strangled her.
I saw Blondie get up from a chair and walk over to me.
She looked up at me, I could tell she wanted to cry. I just kept sobbing.
She sighed and wrapped her arms around me. "I'm so sorry." She whispered.
Surprisingly, I leaned against her as my knees gave out.
We stayed like that for a few more minutes . . . Until we all turned around when we heard Nessie's gasp of air.

Again, short...Sorry...Hope you like it!
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