Forever Love

So I got this idea for a new story with some of the twilight characters and some new characters. Bella is 16 and Alice and Samantha (her best friends) want to go to this concert and Edward Massen is the singer. All the girls are head over heals for him but bella is not. They go to the concert and Edward falls in love with Bella but bella is not really into him so he trys to make bella fall in love with him and bunch of crazy stuff happen……… anyway tell me if you think I should write more plese, thnx. I promise it will get a lot more interesting …
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Permalink Reply by Lila Graffiti Girl <3 on November 6, 2009 at 12:10pm

Chapter 1
My name is Bella Swan, I live in the small town of Forks in Washington. I am very plain and ordinary. I have 2 best friends; Alice and Samantha, Sami for short. I am 18 years old now. I’ve learned a lot from my experiences like things are not always what they seam and you truly never know what to expect from life. Anyway my story starts when I was 16 years
old :
Alice, Sami and I were headed to lunch.
“Hey guys guess who’s having a concert this weekend in L.A.” Alice said in her all exited voice.
“Who?” I asked. I knew Alice’s favorite male singer was Edward Massen, all the girls were crazy about him. He was georges, he looked like a male model and he supposedly had the voice of an angel.
“EDWARD MASSEN!” Alice said jumping up and down. Then both Sami and Alice started screaming their heads off.
“oh my gosh, oh my gosh I can’t believe it!” Sami was beaming of excitement. I really didn’t see what the big deal was. He was just a singer.
“I already bought concert tickets cause they sell out really fast” Alice was saying.
“Yay wow I can’t believe Edward Massen is coming to L.A” Sami said probably to Alice cause they both knew I wasn’t really crazy about him.
“We have to go shopping for concert outfits” Alice was already planning what to wear.
“yes we do we can go this afternoon I’m free” Sami said.
“we can go straight from school I’ll drive. Bella you’re coming too right?” Alice asked.
“Going where?” I asked. I wasn’t really paying attention to their conversation.
“Shopping for concert outfits Dah! Gosh Bella didn’t you hear a word I just said?” Alice said a lil mad at me.
“Oh sorry, Um ok I could help you guys pick outfits if you want” I said sounding a little indifferent.
“Help us pick outfits?! Please Bella tell me your not planning on wearing a pair of jeans and shirt to the concert!” Alice was outraged.
“I didn’t know I had plans to go to the concert” I said in a small voice.
“Bella that’s not fair. I bought 3 tickets one for Sami, one for me and one for YOU so you have to come with us” Alice whined.
“Alice you know I’m not crazy about him. Why don’t you give the ticket to Jessica Stanley” I said. Jessica would love to go.
“it wont be any fun without you” she said.
“ok I’ll go Alice” I said.
“Yay and you have to buy a new outfit Bella. I’m not gonna let you go in a pair of jeans and shirt” she warned.
“Ok Alice” I said then she got out of her seat, started walking away and called over her shoulder “I’ll be right back”. I wonder where she was going.
“Um Sami where is Alice going?” I asked turning to Sami.
“I don’t know” she replied. 5 minutes later Alice came back.
“I’m back” she said but neither of us asked where she was.
“Oh um Alice can I borrow your phone later so I can tell Charlie I will be with you after school” I asked and she laughed.
“I um sort of already called Charlie so you wouldn’t back out” she said with her apologetic look.
“oh ok” I said. Alice was always one step ahead of me.

*Here is chapter 1 please comment and tell me if I should continue, thnx for reading* =)

Permalink Reply by The Cheshire Cat!!! :) on November 6, 2009 at 12:19pm