Forgiveness (New Fanfic Idea)

I have a new idea for a fanfic, here it goes, but first a few things you need to know.

1) This is set after New Moon
2) Edward comes back and asks for Bella's forgiveness, but she hates him and the rest of the Cullens for leaving her alone and unprotected.
3) Bella is with Jacob now.
4) Jacob is Bella's age.
5) Jacob transferred to Forks high school to be with Bella, before the Cullens came back
6) Jacob is still a werewolf and Edward is still a vampire
Edward still loves Bella but when he returns she has moved on. He decides to fight for her and realizes that she is with Jacob now, a werewolf his enemy. Can both of them handle being in the same school fighting for the same girl. Do they have that much self control? Will Bella ever forgive Edward?
Before I post the first chapter I would like to hear your opinion.

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Permalink Reply by Chantelle_ Cullen on June 16, 2009 at 2:49am

I THINK ITS EDWARD OR ALICE. PLZ UPDATE SOON.

Permalink Reply by Ana Liz De Jesús on August 20, 2009 at 9:01pm

please write soon and keep me updated i love the story please add me as a friend

Permalink Reply by Helena Melo on June 15, 2009 at 4:56pm

you should write about it !
i prefer Jacob to Edward , so .. :b

Permalink Reply by Shantelleee (: on June 15, 2009 at 5:06pm

I love it =]

Please write more soon x

Permalink Reply by Springclaw on June 15, 2009 at 5:37pm

I say it should be wait for Peter and his girl I think it would be knda kool you no everyone thinks Edward but you pick I know you will make it awsom no matter who you pick luv it too , luv Ash

Permalink Reply by Sharee luvs♥ yooh!!(Taylor) ♪♥ on June 15, 2009 at 7:47pm