GOLDEN EYES
What if Carlisle had a daughter biologically, Bella Cullen, as we know her.
Carlisle was turned to a vampire, so he left his wife and daughter because he was afraid
that he will be tempted by their blood.
When he comes back after a few years, the news had made his heart break..
His wife had remarried and died and his daughter was missing and possibly, has
also died….But all of that is about to change….
Bella Swan did not die. Someone really close to their family changed her.
She’s a vampire like her father, alone and in misery for many years until something happens.
She meets 5 students in Forks, and they all share one thing:
The name Cullen.
ALL CHARACTERS belong to the amazing Stephenie Meyer, with the exception of Marie(Bella's mom) & Peter(stepfather).
I've made this story when i was 11. Now I'm 13. I've already posted and
finished this, but this version is the better one,
because everything is edited and polished up.. if you still want to read
the old version (i recommend it although you'll know the twists) here's
the link:http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/golden-eyes
Also inside this link are all 4 pages of the chapters, and the link to the original version with all the comments and 177 pages.
Please Comment
I've made this story when i was 11. Now I'm 13. I've already posted and
finished this, but this version is the better one,
because everything is edited and polished up.. if you still want to read
the old version (i recommend it although you'll know the twists) here's
the link:http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/golden-eyes
Also inside this link are all 4 pages of the chapters, and the link to the original version with all the comments and 177 pages.
Please Comment
But say it nicely if it’s criticism.
Chapter 1~page 1
Chapter 2~page 3
Chapter 3~page 5
Tags: alone, bella, betrayal, broken, carlisle, comfort, cullen, drama, edward, esme, More…
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love it and i think that it will be edward coming out in the meadow and bella crying
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Hey people. So, thanks for the support. I still want to have more friends on FB, so if you want to add me: rexannecosico@yahoo.com.ph
Thanks.
here's the next chap..hopefully you'll enjoy it, but I dare say you'll want more after. haha.
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Chapter 4
~Bella~
What Am I going to do ?!?
Knowing my chances,
I know that there is a chance that its all just a coincidence...
But there is a bigger chance that it isn't...
I moved from my room, to the kitchen and finally,
to my piano.
I stopped there.
I played one of the songs I play when I allow myself to every time I
remember my dad...
DANCE WITH MY FATHER AGAIN
Back when I was a child, before life removed all the innocence
My father would lift me high and dance with my mother and me and then
Spin me around 'til I fell asleep
Then up the stairs he would carry me
And I knew for sure I was loved
If I could get another chance, another walk, another dance with him
I'd play a song that would never, ever end
How I'd love, love, love
To dance with my father again
When I and my mother would disagree
To get my way, I would run from her to him
He'd make me laugh just to comfort me, yea yea
Then finally make me do just what my mama said
Later that night when I was asleep
He left a dollar under my sheet
Never dreamed that he would be gone from me
If I could steal one final glance, one final step, one final dance with him
I'd play a song that would never, ever end
'Cause I'd love, love, love
To dance with my father again
Sometimes I'd listen outside her door
And I'd hear how my mother cried for him
I pray for her even more than me
I pray for her even more than me
I know I'm praying for much too much
But could you send back the only man she loved
I know you don't do it usually
But dear Lord she's dying
To dance with my father again
Every night I fall asleep and this is all I ever dream
I cried and cried with no tears escaping and I realized my own feet have taken me to the meadow...This is the reason why I don't allow myself to remember my ...my...
broken family...
What am I supposed to do? Even if Dad is...
like me..
What am I going to do?
I cant just go to that hospital with no reason..
And what am I gonna do If it really was all a coincidence?
How can I endure that?
Now that I allowed myself to hope,
How am I gonna repair myself again???
And besides.. If it is not a coincidence...
Will he accept me? Judging the fact that there are five new students.. and all of them are "Cullens" like me... they are his new family...
Are they like me too? Because all the facts leads straight to that.
A raining little town...
Moving students in that...
But both of that will crumble with the last one...
Knowing my dad, if he is a vampire, he will take the way I took...be the "good vampire"
And will they accept me???
There were more tearless tears that escaped me...
No... Chances are they won't.
Maybe dad remarried another vampire and they searched for humans to change?
Why do I even want to meet my father again?He left us ...
Abandoned us when we need him..
He let my mom and me to suffer every night ..me emotionally.. my mom physically and emotionally...
The answer was clear in my eyes...
Because I want and need My father..
But I'm sure that if he does, for some reason, exist still.
He don't need me.
~Edward~
It was raining. I was already near- very near in fact when I heard a broken sob.
I was shocked, for the first time to see someone on the meadow.
I focused on her to read why she was crying, but there was .. nothing, nothing...
She seemed to sense someone was with her, For she scanned every inch of the forest, but she didn’t found me. She seemed to give up and I heard the tiny whisper of hers.
"Why???"
and she cried again. This time louder and more heart- breaking.
It seemed as though my heart would break, if it was still there
I tried to turn away from her but I, I cant .
I was having a desire to walk to her as fast as I could and comfort her at least, but I was frozen in place.
That’s when I noticed her appearance,
she was pale, brown haired and well, if I was being honest with myself, the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen...
and she has...
Golden Eyes...
~Bella~
I had finished my broken, tearless sobbing. It was a raining day, which is normal for this little town of Forks. I didn't attend class today, No, not at this state.
I was here again on the beautiful meadow. I don't know why or how but it seemed to me as if I should be here, really be here. Somehow, this meadow lessens my burden.
A strange new scent filled my nose. It was like honey, lilac and sunshine combined yet not exactly the same. I searched every single direction but I could not find anything or, anyone. It was just rain.. tiny droplets of rain. Maybe I finally lost it. Can a vampire be mad?
Well, yeah maybe, maybe because I am different, and to top it all, I am much more different them the different.
"Why?!?" Why did I receive such a hopeless fate? I didn’t chose this, In fact I think I am better off dead , at least maybe, lying in a coffin beside my mothers, at least I am together with my family. Together with the people I love the most.
Without my knowing, I was crying louder this time, I felt sorry for myself. but that was it. I, myself am the only one who cares for me. I was alone, on the miserable world, forever and as miserable as it is, always..
The sweet smell was still there but i don't care anymore, it was nothing and nothing,
I am always alone...
Until I heard something moving.
I heard the sound, searched for it everywhere left, right, then back. There he was, An angel.
Who is he? Why is he here? And... Why is he coming in my direction?
And I stopped breathing. If my heart could stop beating, I think it might.
He was like me. With my eyes. With the type of creature I am.
He was walking towards me, and I was frozen in place. He was still walking to me!?! Doesn’t he notice me? Why is he still coming in my direction?!?
He finally reached me and snatched my hand which was wrapped around my knees. From my earlier crying..
Who is this vampire? Am I imagining things?!? Why is he holding my hand?
"Why are you crying?" I finally heard him murmur, too low.
I looked up to his face and was shocked to see the .. Golden Eyes.
What the?!?!? What is happening here?!? Who is this?!?!
Why is he holding my hand?!? Why is he talking to me and why does he have MY EYES???
I tried to talk, to answer, or ask him, but I was too amazed and shocked.
I felt his gaze on my face and I looked down. Yeah, I'm the shy type.
He squeezed my hand and murmured again.
"Why are you crying?" I looked up to his face again, shook my head and pressed .
he smiled- I think it was a forced one. One side of it was anxious-almost sad. And one side was simply heartbreaking.
"I don't think you’re telling the truth." He said. Catching my eye.
Reason ruled over me. I looked at our hands, twined together.
"What's it to you anyway? and who are you?" My voice broke due to the tears i could no longer shed.
"Well, Honestly I don't know too." And He smiled again.
"Who are you? And What are you doing here?" I asked again,and my voice sounded cold even though i haven't meant it to.I looked at our entwined hands.
It was like my fingers fit his perfectly, like they belong...Stop this.
"Who Am I? You'll know soon enough. What I am doing here? This is my favorite place in the world." He answered. Then smiled at me again.
"Well, It's mine too." I replied. making an effort not to make my voice break.
"Not it's ours." he said with a wink.
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