The Twilight Saga

COMPLETE.  All HUMAN! Bella and Edward story!!!! Bella is 17 and her parents died in a roller coaster accidnet(ok i picked that because its diffrent) and she has to take care of her 2 year old brother, Max. They move to Forks and thats were she meets the Cullens and the Brandons. 

Swans- Bella(17), Max(2)

Cullens- Esme(39), Carlisle(40), Jasper(18), Rose and Edward (17, twins)

Brandons- Jen(37), Adam(37), Emmett(19, flunked 2nd grade), Alice(18)



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Moving Day

Bella's POV

After i found out that my parents died I had to take car of my baby brother, Max. It has been 3 months since they died and I couldn't take living in the same house. So I decided that we would move to Forks. My dad used to live there before he meet my mom. My parents both were rich from there parents money. I had no family left well exept Max of coarse.

"Bella I'm ready!" Max said in a baby vocie walking to me. He was very smart for his age.

"Okay lets go!" I said picking him up. I walked outside of our house and put him in his car seat. We lived in Pheniox so it was burning hot when we got in the car.

When we got to the airport we went thourg secuirty and boarded our plane.

"Bellwa I miss momma and daddy!" Max said and started crying after the plane took off. I picked him up and rocked him back and forth.

Our mom and dad, Renee and Charlie, were never home because they both worked for the police department. But we still saw them every once in awhile. A nanny would take care of Max and I. But since they died I would have to take care of him. It was the begining of summer when they first passed so I would take care of him 24/7.

"Me too Max but mommy and daddy wouldn't want us to be sad!" I said and he stopped crying. A few hours later the plane landed. Max was sleeping so I picked him up and walked off the plane. I got our bags, we didn't bring a lot. We were just going to buy new stuff. I got a car shipped here from Itally. i put Max in and drove to our new house. It was pretty big for just the two of us. It had 3 floors, 8 bed rooms, 5 bathrooms, a kitchen, a game room, a living room, family room, and a pool in the backyard.


When I pulled in the front of the house Max woke up. I got out and helped him and held his hand as we walked to the front door. We didn't have any neighbors our closes ones were a mile away.

"Bella theres no bed or anything!" Max said as I showed him around the house.

"I know Max. We have to go shopping for that!" I said.

"'kay!" He said.

After we were done looking around we got in the car and drove to Super Target. I got a cart and put Max in the baby seat.

"First thing on the list is fruniture!" I said walking to the furniture(ok i know that target might not have beds but lets say they do!)

I got a queen bed and Max picked out a crib. It was going to be delivered later. I got light blue covers and Max dark green.

"Bella, Bella!" Max said as I was pushing the cart towards the food section.


"I want that!" He said pointing to a bouncy ball. I gave it to him. He started playing with it till he dropped it and it bounced to two ladys. One looked my age with blond hair and the other one looked about 39 with carmel colored hair. She looked ever motherly.

"Here you go!" The motherly women said giving Max his ball.

"Thank you!" Max said smiling.

"Thank you." I said too.

"You're welcome." She said. "What a handsom young boy! How old is he?" She asked smiling at me.

"He's two. He's going to be three in a month." I said, I usally talk too much when I meet new people.

"Are you his mother?" She asked.

"Mom, why are you bothering people again?!" The blond one said walking to her mom, I guess.

"Sorry!" She said about to walk away.

"No you weren't bothering me. And no he's my little brother but our parents died so I guess you can say I'm his mom. Oh my name is Bella and his is Max by the way." I said putting out my hand for her to shake.

"Oh I'm sorry for your lost. I'm Esme." She said shaking my hand.

"Hi, I'm Rosalie." The blond girl said shaking my hand.

"Nice to meet you both. We just moved here so I'm buying stuff for the new house and school." I said.

"What school are you going to?!" Rosalie asked smiling.

"Forks High."

"I go there! I'll show you around and you can meet my friends!" She said.


"Who's going to take care of Max?" Esme asked.

"I'm going to take him to day care."

"I can take care of him if you'd like?" Esme said.

"She loves to take care of kids!" Rose said.

"Yeah that'd be great it you'd like!" I said. That'd be way better then taking him to day care. And she doesn't seem like some kind of weirdo.

"Yeah I'd love to!" She said. I gave her my phone number and she gave me hers, her house phone number and the address.

So what'd you think?!  Please comment! 

Chapters 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 12 (which are the chapters that caroline posted) got deleted so I'll summarize them for the new readers (if there are any)


2: It was in Bella's Pov when she dropped Max off at the Cullen's house. Then she meet Edward, Alice, Jasper, and Emmett. She also meet Jessica who already hates her.


4: Alice, Jasper, Emmett, and Edward met Max. Edward played with Max.


6: The next day Esme calls Bella at school saying Max is sick. Edward to her to their house and they took Max to the hospital to see what was wrong with him.


8:Everyone finds out that Edward's a match. Edward asks Bella on a date.


10: Edward and Bella went on their date. Edward took her to the medow and had candles and a picnic.


12: It was in either in Jasper's or Alice's Pov (i forgot) Jasper told Alice that he wanted to keep the baby and would awalys be there for her.

And that was the summary to the missing chapters!!!

i wrote the rest heres the links:


Chapter 3:

Chapter 5:

Chapter 7:

Chapter 9:

Chapter 11:

Chapter 13:

Chpater 14:

Chapter 15:

Chapter 16:

Chapter 17:

Chapter 18:

Chapter 19-

Chapter 20-

Chapter 21-

Chapter 22-

Chapter 23-

Chapter 24-

Chapter 25 Part 1-

Chapter 25 Part 2-

Chapter 26-

Chapter 27-

Chapter 28-


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i wanna cry now edward should go and try to find her post more soon
OMG u just made me cry while reading what bella wrote to edward! u need 2 post more soon!!!

Max is sick again. Really sick. The doctor says that he needs a kidney transplant but we
can't find anyone who matches.

It's been a year since I left Edward. I live with my Aunt Lana and Hannah. After
I told them the whole story of everything Max and I have gone through Lanna decided
to make me stay here. She reminds me so much of Esme, she's nothing like my mom was,
she's a good mother. Hannah is like my sister. Two weeks after we got here I started
going to the school she went to, two months later we graduated.

I haven't heard from the Cullen's or Alice and Emmett. When I found out that Max
needed a kidney I tried calling all of them. I knew it would be too much to ask from
Edward after everything I did to him but I'm despreat. I think Emmett has a right to
know too. But like I said I tried to call them, I tried so many times but the line was
always dead or busy. I called one of my old friends from Forks, Angela, she said that
Alice had her baby and her and Jasper moved to Seattle, Emmett, Rosalie, and Edward
did go to college, and Esme and Carlisle moved to California. Before I got the chance to
ask her if she had any of their numbers she had to go.

We found out Max was sick six months after we got here. Dr. Laz says even if we do
find a match now Max might not make it through the surgry because he's so young and
so sick.

"Bella." Lana says softly walking up to me. I'm sitting in the waiting room at the small
hospital like I always do when I need time to think. Dr. Laz said it would be better if
Max stayed at the hospital for now. I got what that meant, for now, until he dies.

"Yes." I whisper, I haven't really talked since I found out I might loose my brother.

"Honey I think we should take Max home." With those words I knew Lana was giving up
on Max. I didn't want to amitt it but I already gave up on him too, there was nothing we
could do. He could die if we don't find a match or he could die on the opperating table
or we might have a miracle and he could live through the surgry. I wanted the last on
to happen so bad. But if we can't we want him to pass away at home not at the hosiptal.

"You don't think we can find him someone?" I ask looking at her red eyes.

"Bella," She sighs and sits next to me, "I want to believe he will so badly." She takes my
hands and closes her eyes. "We need a merical in this family so badly."

"I think I know someone to call."

"Who?" Her eyes fly open waiting for my answer.

"I remember in health class they thaught us that it's not likely that one parent shares the
same blood type as their kid. Emmett wasn't a match so maybe Max's mom is." I don't
want to depend on that horrible lady but I think right now I would do anything as long
as Max lives.


A year passed. I stuck to my orignal dession and didn't go after her and I don't regret
it. When we got back to Forks everyone was depress from Bella leaving us, the last two
months of school I was like a zombie. I did decide to go to Stanford so after the
summer I moved out there. A month after we got back Alice had Olivia, Jasper and Alice
decided to move to Seattle because they found an apartment.

Rosalie and Emmett decided it would be better if they were just friends. Rosalie couldn't
get over the fact that Emmett had a kid with someone else. Rose is going to college in
New York and Emmett is going to college in Texas. After we all moved away mom and dad
decided to get out of Forks and move to California.

The reason I don't regret going after Bella: She was right. When I started Standford I
met Nikki. I met her in the ice room at the dorm house the second night there. She was in
there crying because she missed home. Since that night we haven't left eachothers sides.
I reliezed I loved her two weeks after we met.

"Hey Edward." Jason, my dorm mate, says walking in the door.

"Sup?" I don't lift my head from my computer.

"What are you doing for spring break?"

"Nik and I are going to viste my parents."

"You're finally going to let them meet her?"

I haven't let them meet Nikki because Esme is still hoping I'll go search for Bella, every
one in my family is still hoping for that.

"So when you go to your parents house could you just like leave Nikki there?" Jason
doesn't like Nikki. My first night here I told him about Bella and since Nikki and I got
together he's been trying to get me to go look for Bella. I know I'm not fully over Bella
but I love Nikki more then anything nothing can make me think otherwise.


After Lana gets off the phone with Renesmee she doesn't look at me.

"She said no?" I ask, she nods then turns towards me.

"Bells I think should get back to Max."

"No I can't right now, can I be alone?" I choke out, I could feel the tears coming and I
didn't want to cry infront of Max.

"Alright, I'm going to talk to the doctor okay?" She says before walking out of the room.

I close the door and start crying. It seems like hours before I can stop. I pull out my cell
phone and call Alice and Emmett's old house number again. I only called this one once
because I knew they probaly wouldn't be at this house.

"Hello." Jen, their mom, answers.

"Hi Jen, it's Bella Swan."

"Bella?!" She sounds excited. "Oh dear how have you been?!" Jen is were Alice got her
hyperness from.

"Not so good. I'm kinda in a hurry, sorry, but umm do you happen to have Rosalie's
number?" I want to call Rosalie first that way she can help me tell Emmett.

"Yes one second." She sets the phone down. "Okay it's 267-8347."

"Thank you, I have to go. Bye."

"No probaly, bye."

I hang up and stare at the number before deciding to call her. The phone rings three
times before she answers.

"Hey, Rose here." Same old Rose.

"Hello, Rosalie, it's Bella."

"Bella? Bella Swan?" She sounds amazed.


"Oh my gosh Bella!" Wow she doesn't hate me. "What have you been up to? How are you?
How's Max? Where are you?" It's like she's bouncing up and down on the other end.

"Umm that's why I'm calling, Max is sick, really sick."

"What?" She not happy anymore.

"I was calling because I thought Emmett sould know, I'm not sure how long he has left."
I start crying again but bite back the sobs that try to excapt my lips.

"Bella, Emmett and I aren't together anymore." It sounds like she's crying. "Where are

"In Missouri. Why?"

"I'm coming to Missouri now. I have to go, I'll call you back to find out where in
Missouri." She says then hangs up.


I dial Alice's number as soon as I get off the phone with Bella.

"Alice we need to help Bella." I say as soon as she answers.

"Bella? Rosalie what are you talking about?"

"Max is sick and Bella...she needs our help." I didn't even notice I was crying until
I said that.

"You talked to her?!"

"She just called me, she wanted my help for telling Emmett."

"Where is she? I meet you there." It sounds like she's running around.

"Missouri, I have to get the city she's in so I'll call you back."


"Bella, I know I'm going to die." Max says as soon as I walk in the door to his hospital

"No you're not." I sit on the side of his bed. His face is pratically blue, his lips are
purple, he has no strength at all, he can barely whisper. He's going to leave us soon.

"I'm not afriad." He whispers.

"I'm scared Max." I lay down next to him and wrap my arms around him. My brother,
he can't leave me all alone.

"I'm sorry for everything and thank you for being the best big sister." He swallows as
he countiues to talk. He's leaving me, he can't. His heartbeat monotor slows down.
"Goodbye Bella, I love you." He says then his heart stops.

"I love you too Maxie." I say holding his limp little body in my arms. He's gone.

I let him go and run out of his hospital room. I run to Lana and Hannah who were in
the waiting room and they pull me into a hug with tears running down their eyes also.

Guys I have no idea what to say right now, I'm crying, that was very hard to write.
Please Comment!

R.I.P. Max Charlie Swan
Edward moved on? Why?! I mean he still loves Bella...What about Alice? Is she going to tell him? Please post asap!!! I feel so sorry for Max!!!!!
WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE BELLA??????????? that chapter was awesome from HE DIED BELLA!!! :( I AM CRYING NOW :( you better write more this second or I will fly over to California right now to kick your butt :P!!! x
edward and bella should get back togeather
i know this sounds selfish since max died but you should like reunite edward and bella and he finds out he loves her wwwwaaaaayyyy more than that other girl. i ssssoooo want them 2 be 2 gether PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE IT HAPPEN im so sad i cant read this anymore
omg crying
that is so not fair
poor bella and emmett even though he does not know yet
cant belive edward moved on without looking for bella and max
still love the story
They have to save Max!!!! *sobs* Write more soon!!
omg im crying soo bad!!!! please let them save him!!!! he can't be dead!!!!!!
hi ms. bella pattinson,
i've been reading your story since this morning. (btw i'm from philippines so we have diffrent time zones) I am so awestruck with your storyline. At first i thought it was just about Bella and Edward falling in love thingy but i was completely wrong. Your story amazed me. It does not only revolve around the theme of LOVE but also of loss, grief, friendship, family and LIFE. Sorry for being so melodramatic but I admire your story so much. i've been crying in the chapter when Bella and max left. I like also to commend you for creating great characters especially the character of Bella, i already knew that she has strong personality as what SM had written about her in the saga but you make her more mature and responsible in this one. i know you would be come a great writer or maybe a best seller author someday. Well, So much for all my laudatory comments. hehe im just totally overwhelmed of how this story goes..
Keep the faith, Keep writing and keep on inspiring others !

hi bella pattinson

im reader of ur stories and this story make me cry by the time bella left and now im crying of max is already died and i hope edward realize that bella is her love not nikki and im glad that mother of alice give the number of rosalie and rosalie called her the two of them was the bestfriend of bella


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