HELP US!!!

me and my friends came up with a story and wanted to know if ppl would read it here is the info

Name:Enemies
Quote: What if you first true love was your enemy?
Key Points!!!!
*Bella and Rosalie are bffs and r withces
*Rosalie has a boyfriend named Nick
*Emmet,Edward,Jasper,and Alice are new comers to the school and are all friends
*E,E,J,AND,A are all vampires
*Emmet has a girlfriend named Amber
*Jasper and Alice are together

Summary:Bella and rosalie r bffs but when the Newcomers come to school bella gets sidetracked with edward but there is a secret between both of them they r ENEMYS will they still love after they find out or will they fight forever???

thnx tell us what u think :)

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Permalink Reply by Bellaislikeme on August 11, 2009 at 12:07am

I like the idea of it It sounds good

Permalink Reply by ♪♥♪FallenAngels♪♥♪ on August 11, 2009 at 12:10am

thx we will post a chap when we get more comments that say they like it :)

Permalink Reply by Amanda M on August 11, 2009 at 12:45am

its a really good idea it sounds like it will be fun to read

Permalink Reply by Mrs.Kat Cullen on August 11, 2009 at 3:07am

sounds very good cant wait to read it pls let me know when u post!!!!!!! L=

Permalink Reply by Ziesha on August 11, 2009 at 4:14am

totally write more

Permalink Reply by rubrezzy on August 11, 2009 at 4:28am

i lke the idea and i hope yu make things go hey wire
i want something a little wierd because you get the same thing every time edward love bella
how about bella and jasper or maybe bella and edward or even she gets them all
guhhhhhhhhhhh
i always read the same thing even if its a little diferent

Permalink Reply by Rachael on August 11, 2009 at 11:13am