The Twilight Saga

Sorry guys, the other one got deleted i think, so now i gotta like, continue on this....and i lost all my comments =((((((((((((((((((( so, heres the next chapter!!!!!!!! And for new readers, just start here, youll be able to catch on!

Bella's POV

We were driving to the hospital.

I’d never thought time could pass so slowly.

But it still passed, I know, Alice should be the main one worrying and all, but if we loose Jasper,
we loose a part of our lives.

I can't imagine how Alice feels, I mean, I just love him as a brother, she was going to marry him

I walked over to Alice and hugged her, she was still sobbing.

A doctor came out, walked over to us, and said something we all really wish he hadn't. "Ma'am,
Jasper Hale is leaving us; you should come in quickly to say your last words."

This hit us hard. The actual thought of one of us dying, just never seemed clear, then this
happens, and...

We walked to Jaspers room, and it seemed to take forever, I had to help Alice walk, she didn't
want to face this.

If it wasn't for that...Rosalie, we wouldn't have to face this.

I let everyone walk in before me, when I come in, Alice's holding jaspers hand, and jasper...he is
pale and sickly, looking like a corpse.

"Don't die, don't die" Alice kept muttering.

Edward was standing against the wall, not wanting to look at jasper, but he always took a quick
glance, which was then followed with a look of pain.

Emmett, his usual happy, joking self, was now replaced with sorrow; he was standing a few feet
from jaspers bed, biting his lip, and trying to keep himself from crying.

Jasper, he just lies on the bed, looking at Alice, the care in his eyes was immeasurable, even
though he was dying, and he was worried about her.

then I started to think about how, Edward was doing the whole, staying away from me thing,
because he was worried, but, I pushed that thought out of my mind.

"I love you" jasper muttered to Alice.

"I love you too" Alice whispered.

Jasper's heart rate started to lower.

Edward took in a quick breath.

Emmett's eyes got wide.

Jasper closed his eyes, and then the heart rate got slower and slower, till there was just one long

Alice looked down and was sobbing uncontrollably.

Jasper Hale was dead.

Tears were running down my face, this wasn't supposed to happen, this is not how life is
supposed to go.

Edward put his arms around me and I started crying into his shoulder.

Emmett couldn't keep it in; he put a giant hand over his face and let the tears run.

Alice leaned over and kissed jasper on his cold, dead lips.

The only sound in the room for several minutes was the heart monitors one long sound.

Then, I heard a beep.

We all looked at jasper.

The heart monitor, the beeping got faster, and faster, until Jasper had all his color back, and that
sickly look was gone.

Jaspers eyes fluttered open

Alice could not believe it, none of us could.

"Jasper Hale you've cheated death" I said.


Edward was in my room, he had just come in, said he wanted to talk to me.

"Bella, I know, I sound like a rollercoaster here, but, I really do love you."

"Yeah, you do sound like a rollercoaster" I said.

"Bella, please, hear me out, I need you" Edward said "I don't care if we're brother and sister, I need

I smiled.

Edward then leaned over and kissed me.

The door creaked open, and then I heard a shocked gasp.

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Edward's POV

I looked over and saw Rosalie standing at the door.

She gasped "Edward...Bella?"

my eyes became wide, I would have been fine if this was Alice, or jasper, even Emmett, just, anyone but Rosalie.

Rosalie looked between the two of us a few times, and then she stepped into the room and closed the door.

"What's going on?" She asked.

"Um..." Bella said.

"Please tell me this was some kind of sick dare"

I stood up and walked over to her.

"Rose, listen, this is, it’s not what it seems..." I said.

"It seam’s like you were just kissing your sister!" She exclaimed

"Not so loud" I whispered.

"Fine, what was that?! That is just sick Edward"

"It was, nothing"

"That wasn't nothing! Nothing is a peck on the cheek! Something is making out on a bed! Especially when the

person you’re making out with is your own sister!"

"I see, how that can look bad, but listen, I didn't mean for it to happen"

"If I didn't come in, I don't want to know what actually could have happened!"

"Rosalie, we're not, I mean, we don't..."

"You love her!"

"No, no he doesn't Rose" Bella put in.

"No" rose said "he loves you Bella, he doesn't just love you, he's IN love with you!"

Bella put her face into her hands, I looked at her. This poor, beautiful creature I love, that I could never be with

because of belief, is in despair all because of my horrible, reckless wanting.

You could not begin to comprehend how much I hate myself right now.

"You idiot!" Rose said to me.

"I know I’m an idiot"

"You’re more than an idiot!!!"

"I know"

I watched as rose continued to fume, the only thing that kept me somewhat happy right now, is the jokes we

made about rose me, you don't want to know.

"Are you going to say anything?" I asked.


"Are you going to tell anyone about this, what you just walked in on?"

Rosalie didn't answer right away.

I bit my lip, I was pretty nervous.

then, Rose gave her answer.

srry for the wait
oh my god its awesome
u r gr8
but u cant stop dere i mean plz do update soon nd if u need help m dere ok...<3 :D
*bows* thank you, thank you



wow, i guess i AM good at cliffy's
[:awwwwwwwwwwwww cum on gosh long wait thne cliffhanger gosh nooo:]
Aww man u can't stop there! Plz keep going! Update asap!! PLZ!! Its good!!
This is amazing ! I'm a little confused though, so are thay really brother and sister? O r is it like a half brother and siter, or step brother and sitser? And how was jasper close to death? Sorry, I just started to read, and didn't see the first chapter. Please tell me this! This is a really good story, but i'm alitlle confused?!
Luv It!
im confused too i just started to read so can u kinda give me an overdraft if i send u a friend request p.s. luv the story cant wait 4 more
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