I'm Not Your Number One Enemy

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Permalink Reply by Victoria on September 26, 2010 at 5:38am

Chapter 8

Part 2

Bella's POV

There stood Edward Cullen, water dripping from him as he stood in the porch. How long had he been standing in the rain? "What are you doing here?" I asked coldly. He stood as still as a statue, pain on his face. "You said we couldn't be friends so why are you here?" I was starting to get angry.

Still he stood there like he didn't know what to say. "Why are you here?! You don't want to be my friend so I don't want to be yours Edward Masen!" I screamed before realising what I had said. I looked at him, his expression changed to one of shock. "I mean Cullen." I stammered while looking down at my feet.

Within seconds another pair of feet were in my vision. I looked up slowly, his body closer than I first thought. His shirt was soaked through, hugging his skin. I stopped at his chest, not wanting to look him in the eyes. "You were right the first time Bella." Did I just hear that right? I am going insane?

I took two steps back so I could look at his face. He was looking at me, trying to see my reaction. "You- But- He's dead! You're dead! I went to your funeral.... No. You... You can't be him... He cared about he!" tears started falling again as the impossible was right infront of me. He didn't look like he was lying. But it was impossible.

I took a small step forward reaching up slowly and placing my hand on his cheek. A shiver shot down my spine at his temperature. "Edward? Edward Masen?" I locked onto his eyes. He sighed and placed his hand over mine. "Yes Bella. It's me."

Permalink Reply by cindy prijatel on March 19, 2011 at 9:31pm

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Permalink Reply by Terri Alice Hope Salvatore on September 26, 2010 at 9:46am

keep me updated please xx

Permalink Reply by Victoria on September 26, 2010 at 3:20pm

more soon :D

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Permalink Reply by Angelica Chavez on March 19, 2011 at 8:45pm

It's been months yu have to update!

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i love your story when are you going to update??

Permalink Reply by Bryanna on May 30, 2011 at 12:15am

i love ur story.. r u going to update soon

Permalink Reply by Victoria on June 22, 2011 at 2:00pm

I WILL BE UPDATING :D

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Permalink Reply by Victoria on June 25, 2011 at 4:32pm

Chapter 9

Part 1

Bella's POV

“Bella!” a familiar voice shouted. My eyes suddenly opened to a view of my bedroom door. Right, so was that a dream? But it felt so real. “Bella!” It was Charlie. I grumbled and got up. I looked at the clock, really late! I tied my hair up and ran around trying to find some clothes. “Bella, you are going to be really late! I have to go, you'll have to find a friend who can take you to school!” Great. The door slammed and I was left still searching for something to wear. I called Angela but no answer. Just my luck. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Probably Charlie feeling guilty for leaving without me. I threw on yesterdays clothes and rushed to the door. “I'm ready!” But it wasn't Charlie. “No, you're not Bella.” Alice Cullen said in shock as she looked me up and down. “Erm, hi? What are you doing here?” I asked, majorly confused. “Well I saw your father without you and thought you were either ill or very late.” she smiled. “You can't go to school dressed like that!” I looked down, sadly she was right. “But we're going to be so late!” I protested. Her smile widened as she walked in and ran upstairs. I shut the door and ran after her. “Alice! I really can't be late-” I stepped into my room to find her standing in the middle holding my jeans, blue blouse and grey cardigan. “They're a little plain for me but they look lovely on you. Can I do your hair and make-up? I'll be super quick!” She pleaded. I gave in, feeling that it was the fastest option.

I sat on my bed, watching the clock, I had 10 minutes until my first class. “Can I ask if you're OK, after yesterday I mean.” Alice asked as she started my make-up. “I'm fine, I guess your brother doesn't like me. It's just hard moving here and not really knowing anyone.” It must have been a dream. He is not Edward Masen, I am just crazy. “My brother is like that with new people. He thinks it's better for us to stay together instead of making new friends. Well, you know what people are like with us and all the girls like Edward, but apparently not you.” She giggled and held a mirror up. Perfect curls and make-up that made me look a little like Alice. “Thank you.” I smiled as I grabbed my bag and followed her out to her car. She drove like a madman but it seemed like a snails pace to her. We made it, 2 minutes late. I thanked her again and ran into school. I then realised I had Biology. Great.

I opened the door to a full classroom. Thankfully everyone was talking, must be projects. “Sorry I'm late” I apologised, looking round the room. Well Angela was busy working with Eric. I looked over to see my seat empty with Edward looking at a book. “Try not to make a habit of it. Now join Mr Cullen and carry on with your project.” I slowly wandered over, noticing Mike staring at me. I took my book out and sat down. “I thought we were changing partners.” I asked, slightly annoyed. He didn't even flinch. I sighed and opened my book. So this was how it was going to be. “Look, I don't want to be your friend either but I think we should get our project finished to a good standard.” This time he looked up with a sad look on his face and looked down again. Finally the bell went and I quickly left. “Bella, wait!”

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