The Twilight Saga

Immortal Child

The Cullens risked everything to save the child they claimed was innocent, harmless...But what if they were wrong?

What if the growth, the heartbeat, the blood was all an illusion. Nessie can project visions into people's heads...does she really have to be touching them?
Bella wanted it, so Edward wanted it. Rose wanted it, so Emmett wanted it. Esme wanted it, so Carlisle wanted it. Alice and Jasper love their family, so they want it too. Jacob imprinted on her, so the pack (which was really his, remember, despite the fact he handed leadership to Sam) couldn't see the deeper danger: they couldn't betray their brother like that.

Carlisle said he'd seen covens decimated, completely destroyed over immortal children they refused to surrender. Well this one is no different.

**CARLISLE'S POV UNLESS OTHERWISE STATED**

CONTENTS
Discussion: -
Pg 1: Prologue
Pg 2: -
Pg 3: Chap 1 (pt1)
Pg 4: -
Pg 5: Chap 1 (pt2)
Pg 6: Chap 2
Pg 7: Chap 3
Pg 8: Chap 4
Pg 9: -
Pg 10: Chap 5 *Nessie*

Tags: child, cullens, fought, immortal, mistake, nessie, renesmee

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Permalink Reply by Gracie ♥ on July 24, 2010 at 10:33pm
Ooooooooooh!! I want to read it RIGHT NOW! lol
Permalink Reply by kel bel :) on July 24, 2010 at 10:37pm
ooh, sounds good, even though i am jake fan, xD
Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on July 24, 2010 at 10:39pm
glad you approve kel

woah! you guys were quick! i'll try to have the 1st part up today. MAN i can't believe i never thought of this before!!
Permalink Reply by kel bel :) on July 24, 2010 at 10:40pm
lol, ur welcome
Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on July 24, 2010 at 10:41pm
if anyone wants to make a banner that would be AWESOME!!! *hint hint nudge nudge*
Permalink Reply by Gracie ♥ on July 24, 2010 at 10:49pm
Man, I would make you a banner but my banner-making computer is kind of out-of-order :(
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on July 24, 2010 at 10:48pm
Hmmm... i wonder how this one is gonna turn out..lol keep me updated
Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on July 24, 2010 at 11:00pm
Prologue:

Mistakes! Simple mistakes! That's all they were!
Errors made by a child; a growing, learning child. We all make mistakes once in a while, don't we? Why must this poor young child pay so dearly for hers?
I refuse to let this injustice pass. This punishment will not go by without opposition. We would fight until every last one of us was dust, because this child deserved it.
"I'm scared," Renesmee said, her voice trembling. "Will you protect me?"
"Of course we will; we love you," I promised. Renesmee smiled, and I felt happy too.
"I love you too," she assured me. I lived for those words.
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on July 24, 2010 at 11:03pm
love it
Permalink Reply by kel bel :) on July 24, 2010 at 11:04pm
awwwww, ;')
Permalink Reply by Gracie ♥ on July 24, 2010 at 11:06pm
It sounds so good! And I know you will write it amazingly:)
Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on July 24, 2010 at 11:09pm
thanks guys! oh i love having readers like you. *wipes tear*

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