The Twilight Saga

Immortal Child

The Cullens risked everything to save the child they claimed was innocent, harmless...But what if they were wrong?

What if the growth, the heartbeat, the blood was all an illusion. Nessie can project visions into people's heads...does she really have to be touching them?
Bella wanted it, so Edward wanted it. Rose wanted it, so Emmett wanted it. Esme wanted it, so Carlisle wanted it. Alice and Jasper love their family, so they want it too. Jacob imprinted on her, so the pack (which was really his, remember, despite the fact he handed leadership to Sam) couldn't see the deeper danger: they couldn't betray their brother like that.

Carlisle said he'd seen covens decimated, completely destroyed over immortal children they refused to surrender. Well this one is no different.

**CARLISLE'S POV UNLESS OTHERWISE STATED**

CONTENTS
Discussion: -
Pg 1: Prologue
Pg 2: -
Pg 3: Chap 1 (pt1)
Pg 4: -
Pg 5: Chap 1 (pt2)
Pg 6: Chap 2
Pg 7: Chap 3
Pg 8: Chap 4
Pg 9: -
Pg 10: Chap 5 *Nessie*

Tags: child, cullens, fought, immortal, mistake, nessie, renesmee

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Replies to This Discussion

Permalink Reply by kel bel :) on October 22, 2010 at 6:28am
awwww, now i feel really bad for Nessie.....:(
Permalink Reply by Selveena ♥Cullen♥ on October 22, 2010 at 12:38pm
Poor Nessie. I feel really sorry for her. She thinks she is a monster.
Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on October 22, 2010 at 2:31pm
Wow !!!! Very insightful!!! Nessie got a lot of explaining to do......Very Good story!!! until you post again
Permalink Reply by Esme Anne Platt Evenson Cullen=] on October 22, 2010 at 5:31pm
Poor Nessie. I feel so bad tat she almost killed Emily! She would have felt TERRIBLE!
Permalink Reply by Gracie ♥ on October 22, 2010 at 7:23pm
LOVE IT!!
Permalink Reply by тωιℓιgнтяσχ112 on October 23, 2010 at 1:28am
Poor Nessie.
Update soon.
I love it :)
Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on November 3, 2010 at 7:33pm
I've finally caught up, and iHave to say that Team C+E, i'm still a fan ! this story is so different from most & iThink that's what draws me in . . But it's your writing style that keeps me here. Your thoughts flow, and iThink that is extremely important for any story. i♥ it

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Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on November 4, 2010 at 4:05am
aww I'm touched :)
Permalink Reply by Sam on April 9, 2011 at 8:26am

This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Just like all your fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by TeamCarlisle+Esme on April 9, 2011 at 9:22am
I'm so happy you like it Sam! When I get some free time (hols coming up Thank God!) I will hopefully update all my fics

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