The Twilight Saga

In my MiNd..


I thought about a new story and I liked the idea it’s about edward before he met bella we know that edward is a mind reader so this story is about what he listens in the people mind  it’s like his dairy there might be many different characters  so I hope you like it , if you like the idea please comment and I’ll post the first chapter..



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i still feel bad for edward! his lifes so empty :(
ya his life is empty but we all know that he will find his bella

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poor Edward.
^^(you can have me if you like). LOL

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i don't like it!!!!!!!i love it!!!!!!!
i'm glad that you love it

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This is so cool. I love it ^_^

Can you please tell me how to insert animated smileys in comments? Thanks.
Good chapter can't wait for more. Poor Edward!!
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i'm glad that you love it selveena

and sure i'll send for you how to put a =)

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Chapter 6 ( my place … ) :

This place is amazing it looks so beautiful and peaceful , I love those wild flowers they look beautiful , I think I’ll come her a lot , I sat on a rock that was beside a tree , I was in a meadow I found it when I was exploring the area I didn’t notice this place before when I was at my hunting trips but I’m glad that I found it, the sun was shining there up in the sky I went to the middle of the meadow and liyed on the ground between the beautiful flowers I felt the sun light hitting my cold and hard skin it was good it felt warm I closed my eyes and sat in my own little world .. I was leying there for hours the sun was warming my body and my head was clear without everybody’s thoughts in it , I really liked it , I think it’s time to leave and I know that time means nothing to me but I’ll explore the rest of the place …. After a few seconds after I saw the rest of the place .. I’ll go back to home there’s no any more interesting things here …

‘ HELP , PLEASE CAN ANYBODY HELP ME’ I heard a voice male asking for help , he was at the edge of the mountain he was going to fall dawn , and if he slipped his hand he will fall dawn , I ran fast toward his voice I can’t hear someone needs help and don’t help him , helping people makes me forget for a while that I’m a monster and a killer , I slowed down when I was near him I ran in a human speed …

( OMG , I’m gonna die … what will happen to my family if I died )

‘ HELP ‘ he shouted ..

‘ sir give me your hand , I’ll help you ‘ I said to him , he was confused at first but he gave me his hand and when he touch my hand he shivered and pulled his hand he was going to fall dawn but I caught his hands and pulled him up I acted as if it was hard for me … when he was finally on the ground he was shocked …

(OH , thank god .. I’m still alive , I own this young man a lot)

He sat on the ground for a few minutes without saying any word .. so I broke the silence

‘ sir are you ok ?? ‘ I asked .

‘ yeah , thanks for saving my life I own you a lot ‘

‘ you are welcome .. ‘ ( where’s I’m I don’t know where’s the camp ) he thought

‘ are you lost?’ he asked me ( what a teenager will be doing in the forest alone ??!)

‘ no I’m not .. I was just walking ‘

‘ ok .. thanks again … do you live here?’


‘ so you know where’s the beginning of this forest .. I’m camping with my family and I lost the camping site’

‘ yeah .. I know the beginning of the forest do you want from me to show you?’

‘yeah .. please’

I went with him to the beginning for the forest , it wasn’t that hard

‘ thanks .. by the way I’m mark’

‘ I’m Edward .. it was nice to meet you .. have a nice day’ ( there isn’t any boys like this now . he is so polite)

‘ bye’

I feel good for helping him… I went back to home … and stared listening to music..


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