The Twilight Saga

INCONVENIENCED IMPRINT, a nessie story(PG may become PG-13)

hey everyone, im new to the whole fanfic thing and this is the first fanfic i have ever writen so please be gentle with the critisisim, i would also like to thank Ashley Peterkin for taking the time to edit my story it is much apreciated.
Just so you know im from Australia so my spelling may be different and my editer Ashley is from Canada so between us the spelling will be both American and Australian, but both are correct depending on where you come from. Anyways here is my story and i really hope you enjoy it.

Chapter one

Nessie’s POV

Everyone says that being different is a good thing, and right in the centre of everyone is my family, they’re always trying to reassure me that my being different is what makes me special, but what if I don’t want to special? What if all I want is to fit in, to be a full vampire like the rest of my family? Sometimes I wonder if my family really knows what I’m going through, it’s not like there are many of my kind out there. Vampires on the other hand, well, they’re almost as common as humans, who seem to be oddly unaware at most times as to what’s happening around them, well that’s what my father says, yeah my dad Edward, he was probably listening to my thoughts right now. Who knew having a mind reader for a father could be such a pain in the butt!!!

“Renesmee!” I guess he heard me. “Yeah?” I called from my room on the second floor, he would hear me, that’s one of the good things about being in a family of vampires, you never had to strain your voice. They all had excellent hearing; even me; being the half breed, I still had great hearing.

“Yeah?” I called again when I hadn’t gotten an answer.

Then there was a different voice that answered, it was my Aunt Rose. “Nessie, you’ll be late for your first day of high school if you don’t hurry!” Stated Aunt Rose. I sighed. I had almost forgotten that today was my first day of high school. Then, it was Aunt Alice’s turn “Nessie, come on if you don’t hurry, I’ll have no time to do anything with your hair and make-up” she said sounding annoyed.

“I’m coming!” I almost screamed. “Yeesh, you’d think that my looks were the most important thing about today” I whined walking into Alice’s room, where she and Rose were waiting with smiles the size of the pacific ocean, on their faces.

“I mean, not that it’s not important to look good.” I added quickly as Alice frowned.

Truth be told, there were more important things on my mind, like what if they didn’t like me, or I didn’t make any friends, or I did something to embarrass myself. Suddenly I was pulled from the horror of my thoughts by Alice, telling me to put on an arrangement of cloths she’d pulled from her closet, which I thought looked big enough to house the whole of china.

“Come on Ness, put them on and then Rose and I will fix your hair.” Alice urged.

I walked into Alice’s oversized bathroom and three seconds later, I was out in a pair of dark blue skinny jeans, a red tight fitting tank top, and matching red heels which were obviously Rose’s.

“What do you think?” I said while twirling to let them see the full effect of the outfit.

Alice squealed jumping up and down like an over excited toddler had been let loose in Toys ‘R’ Us. I smiled and went to look in the mirror. Okay, I had to admit, I did look good. The dark blue skinny jeans hugged my legs perfectly, as did the red tank top.

“You look great!” Alice and Rose said at exactly the same moment.

After throwing me the designer denim jacket that went perfectly with my ensemble, we headed downstairs.

When we arrived downstairs there was a stack of chocolate chip pancakes in the middle of the table and Jacob had already started to dig in. I sat in the chair next to him and piled three pancakes onto my plate before speaking.

“Hey Jake.” I said in between mouth full’s of my first pancake, while he was on his seventh.

“Hey Ness.” Jake said while leaning over and planting a kiss on my right cheek.

Jake and I have been together for as long as I can remember, he is my best friend and I am his. We were like two peas in a pod, as his father, Billy had pointed out to us once. When my family and I had moved to Washington, Jake had moved with us and was planning on registering to Washington High along with the rest of my family. I am glad that Jake is here, it’s going to be great. Jake and I, going to school together. At that exact moment my dad snorted. I looked over to him and smiled “Sorry dad.” I thought. “You know I love you.” I thought again, this time putting all the emotion I could into the thought and getting a questioning look from Jasper.

Before Jasper could ask, dad spoke saying” I love you too, Ness.”

Then Bella, my loving and beautiful mother, - dad smiled at me for that thought - came up beside him and spoke. “We all love you, Ness. We’re all going to be here for you if you need us, you won’t be alone at all.”

“I know.” I said, smiling and taking a big breath “Let’s do this.” I said.

“Yes, let’s.” Emmett said chuckling.

Ten minutes later, we were pulling into Washington High school. I’d just spent the entire trip listening to dad explain how we were all related, it went something like this. Alice Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Edward Cullen and I, Renesmee Cullen, were brothers and sisters who had been adopted by Carlisle and Esme. Rosalie Hale and Jasper Hale were twins who had been adopted also, and then there was Bella and Jacob Black who were cousins staying with Carlisle and Esme Cullen. It was all very confusing but I knew that my family would be here to help. I received a reassuring smile from Edward, who is now my big brother. Yep another smile so I must be doing alright.

After getting many stares from the other students, - most of mine were from the guys, which made Jacob wrap his arm firmly around my waist, - we finally arrived at the office, where we proceeded to explain to the lady behind the desk how we were all related.

“Hello, I’m Edward.” Dad said, with a polite smile towards the woman.

“These are my sisters, Alice and Renesmee Cullen, and my brother, Emmett Cullen.” “This is Rosalie and Jasper Hale, my adopted brother and sister.” Edward started again “And this is Bella and Jacob Black, who are cousins.” Everyone smiled and waved when Edward said their name, then we were handed our schedules. Rose and Emmett are sophomores, as well as Alice and Jazz. Bella and Edward are juniors, and Jacob and I were freshmen.

“What do you have before lunch, Ness” Jacob asked immediately after receiving his schedule.

“English.” I replied after scanning my schedule “Then history.”

“You?” I asked.

“English then gym.” He stated sounding grim.

“Well we have one class together this morning.” I replied cheerfully.

“Yeah.” Jacob mumbled “Better than none, I guess.”

Bella, Alice and Rose all hugged and wished me luck with my first day. Rose planted a kiss on my cheek. “Don’t worry Ness, everyone will love you,” Rose whispered, though everyone could hear. I sighed “Bye all.” I said before turning to Jake. “Come on lets go to English.” I said, motioning for him to start walking.

“Don’t worry Ness.” Jake said, squeezing my hand as we walked into English.

“Hello, you must be Jacob Black and Renesmee Cullen?” The teacher asked politely.

“Yes.” We answered.

“It’s nice to meet you.” The teacher, whose name was Mr. Smith replied.

He pointed to two empty seats at the back of the class, Jake started pulling me towards them.

Most of the class was staring at me, and I pulled myself closer to Jake as he wrapped his arm protectively around me.

After Jake and I were seated, Mr. Smith proceeded in telling the class that we would be starting the year off by reading “Gone with the Wind,” something I had read three times already.

English passed in a blur, then Jake was off to Gym and I, in the opposite direction to endure history alone. My own personal hell, where everyone was going to stare, and this time my family wasn’t going to be there to help.

Upon walking into my history class, I was greeted in much the same way, by the teacher Ms Paige. There were only three seats available in this class. One by a tall gangly boy with short brown hair, and the other two were over on the other side of the class. I decided to take one of the seats on the other side of the room, so that I could have the table to myself.

When I finally reached the table, I seated myself in the seat that was closest to the wall, and began to rummage through my bag for my book, when I smelt it. I knew that smell, it was sweet and delicious, almost mouth watering, but that wasn’t right, none of my family were in my history class. Maybe they stopped by to give me something, but that doesn’t make sense. They could have given it to me this morning. Thoroughly confused now, I lifted my head to the scent to see which one of my family members it was, only to realize, with a sharp jolt to my stomach that the person making their way over to me was not from my family, but was indeed a vampire.

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its mine too, its so hard to find pictures of bella and renesmee, but i really like this one
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Hey please try to limit the pictures that you on my story page, thankyou
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Hey guys, I finally managed to finish the last part of Chapter two I hope you like it and can't wait to hear your comments on it whether they are good or bad just as long as you comment! Well here it is, Enjoy!

Chapter two

Part two

Josh’s POV

Three weeks earlier…

Marcus and I arrived in Washington three weeks ahead of the rest of our family; it was our job to scope out our new surroundings and find a place for our family to live. It’s a good thing that vampires don’t need sleep otherwise we wouldn’t have found a house big enough for all of us. There are twelve members in our family, which is considered highly unusual in the vampire world but that is not the case for us, as we are blood related. This is due to our mother, who we call Amanda now after many strange looks from people, and her extraordinary gift, she is the leader of our coven. Her gift is that she can bear children, so even though she is a vampire her body is still alive. I guess you could say that it’s every women’s nightmare when they are changed from a human to a vampire, and find out they can no longer have children. Amanda on the other hand is the complete opposite; while she may have the ‘hard as rock’ skin, like all vampires, and any other trait of a vampire, she still has a monthly menstrual cycle which allows her to have children, like any normal human being.

Since she first found out that she had this gift, she has not been able to pass on the gene as she has no daughters, and over the last five centuries, she has given birth to seven sons and counting, as she calls herself the breeder and refuses to settle down with a mate, saying it is her job to expand on the vampire world, because of her rare gift. Four of my brothers have found mates which joined our family’s coven. I am in the middle of seven, and have not found a mate, but I’m not worried, the most important people to me are my family, and that will never change. Marcus is the oldest, even though he looks no older than twenty. After giving birth to her first son Marcus, Amanda had time to work out that we would eventually reach maturity, approximately eight and a half years after our birth, drinking only blood, being bottle feed until we were old enough to hunt.

It was human blood until our mother gave birth to our youngest brother - so far, - Jesse (who she babies a little, being the only human in a family full of vampires,) who turned out to be human which was a shock as his father is a vampire and has been for two hundred and fifty years and counting.

Since then most of our family switched from the life of living off human blood, to living off animal blood. Marcus is the only who continues to feed off the blood of humans and only occasionally drinks the blood of animals.

That he said would change once we moved to Washington, as we’d be living in such close proximities to humans.

We had three weeks before we would be going to Washington High, where Marcus, Jesse and I would be attending as freshmen.

Jesse could easily pull it off, being a sixteen year old human that is. Marcus and I, on the other hand, will be getting a little help from one of our brothers, Adam, who has a gift which changes the way you look, the ability to make you look aged, or youthful. His gift came in handy when we didn’t want to move around a lot, which is a necessity, because people found out we were never aging. Jesse, being human is the only one in our family without a gift, and is very interested in whether or not he will get a gift when he is eventually changed. It was decided after much debate that Jesse would be changed shortly after his eighteenth birthday.

Two days before we were to attend Washington high, Amanda and the rest of our brothers Adam, Brad, Chris and James arrived at the new house. Amanda phoned the school and registred all of us; all we had to do was pick up our schedules from the front office on Monday morning. Chris and James, were attending as seniors, Adam and Brad as sophomores and Marcus, Jesse and I as freshmen with the help of Adam, and his gift.

Monday morning came in a blur, and in the early hours of the morning, while Jesse was still asleep, the family had just started to discuss what was to happen. It was decided that Marcus would do most of the talking, when we arrived at the front office later today to pick up our schedules.

Four hours later, we could all hear the distinct change in Jesses breathing, and his heart rate increase. Exactly ten minutes later Jesse came downstairs in jeans and a button down shirt, looking very good for being the only human in a house full of vampires.

After taking a seat at the dining room table, where Brad had set out a small stack of toast with an assortment of spreads, we started to explain to Jesse the routine of today. Jesse was no stranger to moving it would just be a simple run down, of what was to happen so that the humans wouldn’t catch on to what we were, and Jesse being the human and the most comfortable for humans to be around, was to keep an eye out if anyone got suspicious.

“Hey Jesse, you know the drill?” said James. “Yeah, the routine hasn’t changed. I know what to say and do James, will you chill?” Jesse said sarcastically. Jesse was right James needed to chill; he’s always the weariest of humans catching on to what we are. He’s a vampire for heaven’s sakes, nothing can touch him, and it’s not like he has a human for a mate, Amy’s a vampire, and has been ever since her change in 1901. She’s more than capable of looking after herself, even though she lets James look after her.

“So you ready for school Bro? Should be fun, huh?” I teased. “Yea sure Josh, it’s a good thing I’m smarter than the average human, maybe I did get a portion of the vampire gene, otherwise I’d be failing, with all the classes I’ve missed because of all of us moving around.” Jesse retorted looking sour. “Only two more years, then mum can change you into a vampire, it’s not really that long bro.” I said sympathetically. “Not long for a vampire you mean.” He grumbled. “Don’t worry love, it’ll come.” Mum said lovingly. “Now finish your breakfast, you don’t want to be late on the first day.” She said before wandering into the kitchen. “I’m done.” He said a minute later, and grabbed his bag as we headed for the door. “Bye mum.” He called before heading out the door after us. “Bye.” The rest of us breathed, it was no higher than a whisper, but it was clear. “Bye boys.” From mum, she must have used a louder the usual voice, for Jesses benefit.

“Shot gun, front seat!” Said Marcus. “What? You always get the front seat, can’t I have it this time?” Complained Jesse. “Marcus, just let him have the front seat.” I sighed. “Why?” Marcus quipped. “Cause I said so, and this is my car so what I say goes, got it?” I practically shouted at him. “I was just having a laugh man, chill.” Marcus replied looking somber, while jumping into the back seat with Adam, Brad, Chris, and, James making room for Jesse to squeeze past him and jump into the front seat of my monster ten seater, black SUV.

The ride to school was quiet. We arrived, with fifteen minutes to spare, thanks to my brilliant driving skills. “The front office is this way guys.” I said motioning to a big cream building, to the left of us. Upon entering the small office, the smell hit me like the force of a wrecking ball, and looking around me I noticed that I wasn’t the only one of my family who had noticed, the distinct smell of vampires. They were all on guard; Jesse had noticed our complete stillness but knew better then to ask. Our plans of having Marcus as the only person to speak to create less suspicion had been abandoned and Jesse seeing that we were all preoccupied, approached the front desk where a middle aged women gave us a welcoming smile, and said “You must be the Ryan boys, yes?” She asked. “Yes, that’s us” replied Jesse. “Well then, welcome to Washington High, here are your schedules.” She continued. Jesse accepted the schedules and started passing them around. While we all briefly glanced over our schedules, Jesse could see that we all needed to talk and quickly. We thanked the receptionist as we headed out the door. As soon as we were out of the confines of the office, everyone started speaking at once before Jesse called us all to a stop. “HEY!!! Will someone tell me what the hell is going on???” He said getting more frustrated, when no one was answering him. “Did you guys hear me; I said what’s going on?” We all looked at each other for a brief moment before… “You tell him.” Said Adam suddenly. I looked around at my brothers and they all had the same look on their faces, which read that they didn’t want to be the one who informed Jesse that there were other vampires in this area, and by the smell of their scent there are quite a few and also maybe a werewolf, with them as there was a lingering scent of it in the office back there. I thought about how I was going to handle this when I had a sudden thought that made me smile. “Fine.” I said smirking at Adam “But you have to call mum and let her know.” I continued and was pleased when the smile was wiped clean off his face. After explaining to Jesse about there being vampires in the area, he was in shock at first, then scared as his scent was particularly pleasing, if you are a blood drinker and it’s lucky that we have Chris, with his ability to mask the scent of human blood, and who has kept his gift attuned to Jesse, and now doesn’t even have to try for his scent to be completely undetectable to the vampire race. It is this reason exactly, that stopped Amanda from coming down to the school and running Jesse all the way home to make sure he was safe. It was decided that we would stay at school and see what happened, if they turned up then we would just return home and pack ready to move on, if not then we would stay. The bell for the first class of the day rang, and we all headed off in our different directions, Jesse, Marcus and I had chemistry first period, then Marcus and I had history, while Jesse would have gym. The only problem we had with that was that no one had gym with him so Chris would have to make sure that even if there is a vampire in his gym class it won’t be able to smell him.

Chemistry passed in a blur, it is so boring when you repeated school at least eight times. Jesse was the lucky one, only having been through high school once, that is until his eighteenth birthday in two years, when he’ll go through high school over and over lucky for us we have Adam, so we can choose which year we want to be in, so we’re not always stuck doing the same thing. Once for a laugh Adam had made Brad look like a ten year old and wouldn’t change him back so Brad spent the whole of 1946 looking like a child. We left chemistry, and said bye to Jesse as we headed for history. The history class was almost full, there were only two seats left in the class, one next to a tall gangly boy and one next to a pretty girl. No pretty was an understatement, she was beautiful. Long Blondie-brown hair set in gorgeous curls, medium height and slender. She is so beautiful I would swear she was a vampire but then that doesn’t make sense her skin isn’t pale like it should be, it’s a beautiful red russet and there’s a hint of blush in her cheeks. She definitely isn’t a vampire but she can’t be human, no female human is that beautiful no male human is that beautiful not even Jesse who has a vampire for a mother is that beautiful, and he’s very handsome compared to other human males.

That’s when I decided, I simply had to know what this beautiful girl was, and if that meant I had to tell her I was a vampire, then that’s what I would do.

I started to make my way over to her and as I did Marcus made his way over to the last spare seat, next to the boy. As Marcus started to, I noticed that she gave him a weary look, and then glanced at the boy. This is interesting maybe she already knows what we are maybe that’s why she looks so frightened. Either way I wouldn’t hurt her, and neither would my brothers, she’s mine.

I noticed that she’d had put her head back down, and this gave me the opportunity to glide over to the empty chair next to her. I decided that I would give her some former warning, that I was there just in case I was wrong and she was just an exceptionally beautiful human, which I highly doubted, but still. So I slowly dragged the chair out from under the table and seated myself in it ready for the lesson to begin.

A minute later when the teacher, - Ms Paige was her name, - had started the lesson and I noticed that the strange girl next to me was leaning in towards me slightly, which made me smile as I remembered a girl who told me that I smelled liked fresh honey-milk chocolate covered strawberries, and apparently was a very appealing aroma for young women, though I never really noticed, but this girl had a strange hold over me, as I found myself daydreaming about her until I finally couldn’t take it anymore, and I had to introduce myself saying “Hello, my name is Josh.” She seemed to hesitate for a moment before answering “Hi, I’m Renesmee but you can call me Nessie if you like.” She said looking a little unhappy with what she had said. Renesmee what an unusual name but it fits her well; I wonder where she gets Nessie from. “Nessie, I like it.” I said smiling. I guess there’s no beating around the bush, so here goes. “Do you know what I am Nessie?” I said wiping the smile from my face to let her know that I wasn’t joking. “Yes.” She said simply nodding, all the while to make sure that I knew she understood. Making sure that no one was listening in on our conversation, she leaned and said “You’re a vampire.” Pausing before adding “And so is he.” She said glancing at Marcus who was obviously listening before returning her gaze back to me. This is where I could take my chance to find out what she was, so I answered “Yes that is correct, so you know what we are, would you care to explain what you are?” I said patiently. She seemed a little confused by this saying “Excuse me?” And cocking a perfectly arched eyebrow. I sighed “Well you’re not human, even if you do have a heartbeat, your way to beautiful to be a human.” I said, which made her blush a cherry red and sent a smile to my lips. “But you do indeed have a heartbeat, however much faster it is then the average human being, and I’m sure that your skin is just as impenetrable as mine is, though I am not willing to try.” I said smiling, which she answered with her own smile, it was just as beautiful as she is. “So would you like to enlighten me with the secret of what you are?” I asked leaning in towards her letting just a little of my scent near, but not too much as to overwhelm her. She paused thinking, and you could almost see her arguing with herself over whether to tell me or not, I just hope that she trusts me enough to tell me, and that one day she’ll love me just like I love her now, and will for the rest of my existence.
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