The Twilight Saga

Its not Twilight related, but I had the idea in my head, and I can't shake it. If I get enough comments I might start writing it. I would like to publish it if I finish too:)

Its about a girl who can turn invisible, she is having a lot of problems with it. Only few people in the world can turn invisible, but she meets someone who can other than her. No one knows about it except for the people who can actually turn invisible, including parents who have been asking a lot of questions lately. But when she starts to feel ill, what will be the outcome?
Okay, heres the first part of the Chapter!!!!! Hope you like it!!! :)

The “Beep! Beep!” of my alarm clock made me roll over in my sleep in the morning. The covers and pillows were sprawled on the floor next to my bed, as always. I kick in my sleep too much.

My mom and dad were sleeping and Roco, my rabbit, was in his little corner of his cage where I put a tiny cheetah print pillow.

It was 6:30 AM and I was NOT a morning person. My mom and dad call me Hoot because I’m a night owl. They think its cute, I don’t. Once my friend Hannah came over and they called me Hoot, she was calling me that the ENTIRE month. At school. Let me tell you; that did not help my unpopularity issues.

Now she just calls me Char, Chary, or just plain Charlotte.

I finally made myself get out of bed, and walk into the bathroom to splash some water on my face. It woke me up a teensy bit.

Ugh! My hairs a mess!

I opened the drawer to look for my special purple brush with my name written on it with Sharpie. I always tell mum not to use it, and she usually listens, but if she can’t find hers, but if she can’t find her brush, she takes mine. And she had to of used it because it wasn’t there. I walked over to the outside of my parent’s room. I could see the brush…on the other side of the room.

Mum and dad are incredibly light sleepers, and I don’t want to wake her up (If she wakes up too early…well, lets just say I would rather kick a bee hive).

I took a deep breath and kept my mind focused on one thing, and one thing only:


It’s not true that you have to…you know, strip down in order to be totally invisible. Anything you touch when your invisible, turns invisible too.

I could feel myself going transparent. It feels like you being lifted in the air, then you just drop-which sort of hurts-then no one can see you!

I legit weigh nothing when I’m invisible. Its like I wasn’t there at all. Good thing because I have really creaky wood floors.

When I stepped into their room, mom rolled over and mumbled something in her sleep. I froze.

She started snoring again and then I knew she was sleeping.

I darted across the room and grabbed the brush quick, and watched it disappear in my hand.

I ran out, and reappeared. Then I went into the bathroom again. I brushed my long straight hair (finally) into a side ponytail.

Then I went into my room, got out of my monkey PJs, and threw on my pink T-shirt that said “Save the Earth! It’s the only planet with chocolate!” with a drawing of the Earth and a bitten chocolate bar. Then I put on my semi-ripped skinny jeans and black high-top Converse.

I went over to my giant mirror on the back of my door and grabbed my eyeliner pencil, and mascara. I just got used to putting it on. It’s the only make-up I wear, by choice.

All of the other girls at my school wear any make-up they can find! It looks really gross and heavy.

Hannah has the perfect amount of make-up though, it looks so natural.

After I finished applying, I went down stairs to pour myself a bowl of Cheerios.

After I was done eating I brushed my teeth with my new electric toothbrush. Then I grabbed my bag and headed out the door.

I just found out I could turn invisible on my 15th birthday a few months ago. No one knows except me. I assume I’m the only one who can actually turn invisible. And I don’t want to draw too much attention to myself. I never really use it, but when I need to I do. Sometimes it’s hard to control. Like, sometimes its hard to be visible again if you don’t concentrate.

Once while walking to school I was invisible the entire way just for fun, and everyone thought I was late because I was still invisible five minutes after the bell rang.

I have to walk to Rainer High school everyday because I don’t have a ride. Its about 25 minutes away, so its not a big deal. But when its really cold out, unlike today, it’s a bit of a problem.

The crunch of leaves beneath my feet made me feel like I was drawing attention to myself.

(This is NOT the end of the chapter. Tomorrow I'll post the rest! Hope you liked it!)

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i think u should write it!!!!!
it sounds really gud :)
if you do write it could u keep me updated??
Of course! And thank you!
you should definatley wrote that one and who cares if it's twilight related as long as it's good i dont think anyone will care and i want to be updated the entire time
eh. it doesn't have much potential.
yes write it! it really sounds good
This sounds like a very interesting topic for you to writer about. Sounds good!! Please tell me when you write the first chapter!!! =)
If one more person (who hasn't commented yet) does another positive comment, I'll write it!
i love it
Okay, I'm going to start to write it every few days. PLEEAASSSEEE be honest in your comments, give me any constructive criticism I need. Thank you!
Its taking me a while to finish chapter one. I'm trying to make it as long as I can. I'll try to finish in the next two days.
u should soooo write it!!!!!
and keep me updated if possible =)
Okay, I'm almost done!


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