It's My Life Dead Or Alive: A Breaking Dawn Continuation
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What If everything didn't turn out to be all great and fantastic as Bella and Edward wanted it to be? What if they wanted more? What if Bella wanted more?
PROLOUGE
BPOV
I looked at the danger in front of me. The monster smiled as she eyed me carefully. Her purple hair was moving in the wind and her eyes turned green. I got up off the ground slowly and watched her like prey.
"Are you sure you want to turn it all around Bella?" She asked.
Biting my lip I thought back to the memories. That first time I saw Edward, the first time we kissed, our first date, all the times he said I love you, all the times he saved me, our wedding day, the honeymoon, our baby and then saving her and her first steps, first words and when she said I love you. Then, I thought about the bad things next. Him leaving me alone in the woods to die, when he first said
I hate you, when we first started fighting, when i had to stay away from him and when he said he didnt love me anymore. How it would've all been different if I wasn't like this....if no one was....a mythical creature. "How will it all be different?"
"You'll see what'll happen if you were all human." She said "If none of this ever happened."
"Will I ever go back to normal?" I asked.
"Only time will tell." she said "Are you ready?"
Sighing, I nodded my head. She stepped back and shut her eyes. When they opened they were blue. I heard her whisper something. A spell maybe. "A bump in the night, a frightening story, one that will change us, make us to normal, seize the pain and make us mortal." she mumbled this over and over again.
"Lynnette?" I asked.
The wind around us picked up. It got freezing cold and on the top of the mountain the snow started to fall. Lynette started to fade away and I felt cold. My blood started to rush to my head and my eye sight got blurry.
"Lynnette!" I screamed.
My throat burned and she came close to my ear and dropped a sweater on me. "This is what you wanted." She said "You wanted a new life."
"But Lynne-"
The ground under us shook as I stood up and I fell back down. Lynnette disappeared and I stood up. I could still feel my vampire instincts. I ran as fast as I could to the cottage. I could feel myself loosing my strength as I ran through the door. Jacob, Edward and Renesmee were all in a corner.
"Bella!" Edward yelled coming over to me.
"I'm sorry Edward." I yelled over the sound of trees falling. "I'm sorry."
I could hear the family getting closer and closer.
"Where's Lynnette?!" Edward asked fumed.
Feeling a tear fall I dropped to my knees.
"Bella!" Edward screamed. "What's wrong?"
I heard Renesmee cry in pain.
"What's going on?!" Carlisle screamed.
I looked up at Edward in pain as Carlisle and him kneeled down. "I'm sorry." I said "I never caused anything good to happen. I'm sorry. Always remember me. I'll see you again one day. I love you Edward."
Looking behind him, I felt it setting in. The pain I was looking for. I saw Renesmee slowly disappear and Edward ran over to her.
"Renesmee!" he screamed too late. She was gone.
"Bella? What's happening?" He asked.
I screamed out in agonizing pain and Edward ran over to me. "I'm sorry!" I screamed. "Look for me."
Slowly I watched my body disappear. Edward looked at me in agony and I watched as all the vampires one by one turned human.
"Bella? What did you do?" Edward asked.
With one last tear drop falling, I screamed and whispered "I love you Edward." before disappearing into the cracks of the earth.
I know this is confusing but, I had this idea and i needed to write it. It will be an awesome story! Please comment so far! I'll write the first chapter after at least 6 comments.
Banners are welcome!!!!
What If everything didn't turn out to be all great and fantastic as Bella and Edward wanted it to be? What if they wanted more? What if Bella wanted more?
PROLOUGE
BPOV
I looked at the danger in front of me. The monster smiled as she eyed me carefully. Her purple hair was moving in the wind and her eyes turned green. I got up off the ground slowly and watched her like prey.
"Are you sure you want to turn it all around Bella?" She asked.
Biting my lip I thought back to the memories. That first time I saw Edward, the first time we kissed, our first date, all the times he said I love you, all the times he saved me, our wedding day, the honeymoon, our baby and then saving her and her first steps, first words and when she said I love you. Then, I thought about the bad things next. Him leaving me alone in the woods to die, when he first said
I hate you, when we first started fighting, when i had to stay away from him and when he said he didnt love me anymore. How it would've all been different if I wasn't like this....if no one was....a mythical creature. "How will it all be different?"
"You'll see what'll happen if you were all human." She said "If none of this ever happened."
"Will I ever go back to normal?" I asked.
"Only time will tell." she said "Are you ready?"
Sighing, I nodded my head. She stepped back and shut her eyes. When they opened they were blue. I heard her whisper something. A spell maybe. "A bump in the night, a frightening story, one that will change us, make us to normal, seize the pain and make us mortal." she mumbled this over and over again.
"Lynnette?" I asked.
The wind around us picked up. It got freezing cold and on the top of the mountain the snow started to fall. Lynette started to fade away and I felt cold. My blood started to rush to my head and my eye sight got blurry.
"Lynnette!" I screamed.
My throat burned and she came close to my ear and dropped a sweater on me. "This is what you wanted." She said "You wanted a new life."
"But Lynne-"
The ground under us shook as I stood up and I fell back down. Lynnette disappeared and I stood up. I could still feel my vampire instincts. I ran as fast as I could to the cottage. I could feel myself loosing my strength as I ran through the door. Jacob, Edward and Renesmee were all in a corner.
"Bella!" Edward yelled coming over to me.
"I'm sorry Edward." I yelled over the sound of trees falling. "I'm sorry."
I could hear the family getting closer and closer.
"Where's Lynnette?!" Edward asked fumed.
Feeling a tear fall I dropped to my knees.
"Bella!" Edward screamed. "What's wrong?"
I heard Renesmee cry in pain.
"What's going on?!" Carlisle screamed.
I looked up at Edward in pain as Carlisle and him kneeled down. "I'm sorry." I said "I never caused anything good to happen. I'm sorry. Always remember me. I'll see you again one day. I love you Edward."
Looking behind him, I felt it setting in. The pain I was looking for. I saw Renesmee slowly disappear and Edward ran over to her.
"Renesmee!" he screamed too late. She was gone.
"Bella? What's happening?" He asked.
I screamed out in agonizing pain and Edward ran over to me. "I'm sorry!" I screamed. "Look for me."
Slowly I watched my body disappear. Edward looked at me in agony and I watched as all the vampires one by one turned human.
"Bella? What did you do?" Edward asked.
With one last tear drop falling, I screamed and whispered "I love you Edward." before disappearing into the cracks of the earth.
I know this is confusing but, I had this idea and i needed to write it. It will be an awesome story! Please comment so far! I'll write the first chapter after at least 6 comments.
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Permalink Reply by Alyssia Gonzales on -
this is like really different ,... bt we gottaknow the past bout t hem soon! omannn ! cnt w8 for more
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Chapter 2
BPOV
As much as I wanted to fight Emmett, I couldn't watch this. Emmett and I went downstairs and I sat down on the couch next to Alice.
"Renesmee is with Jacob, right?" I asked.
She nodded her head. "I checked on her a few seconds ago. I'll pick her up now.
I sighed of relief. "Good. Okay."
Looking up the stairs I could hear Edward. He was talking to Carlisle.
"I can't let this happen again Carlisle." He said.
"Edward, you know how powerful she is." Carlisle said.
"Bella's mad....I can tell." Edward said.
Sighing I pushed my shield out to him. "Edward," I said. "can we...talk? At the cottage? I need to know what's going on."
I saw him coming down the stairs and nod. He ran over to me and grabbed my hand then we walked outside. "I have a lot to tell you, just be careful walking out here."
"I'm not human anymore Edward." I said.
"I know but, Lynnette is very powerful." He said "Even though you're not human, she can still hurt you."
I smiled and jumped on his back. "Let's go."
Edward kissed me and we went full speed to the house. Even though we are going at full speed, I could still see purple fog. Who was this Lynnette girl? Better yet, what was she?
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Edward kissed me on the couch and I smiled. "Tell me Edward. What's going on?"
He sat up and wrapped his arms around me. "I'm sorry Bella."
"Edward," I said "We're married now. You can tell me anything."
"Well, I already told you that....you weren't the first girl I loved...but, that's because Lynnette is a witch. I was under a spell. I have never counted that as a first love because you are my love. You always have been."
"Okay Edward, that's beside the point. Why is she here and how does she know me?"
"Lynette...has a charm on me." Edward said "It's going to always stay with me. No matter what. She is always going to have this charm connected to me that I will never be able to get rid of. She knows you because she can feel what I do. If I feel in love, she will know. Remember when we first saw her and as she would say 'I was fawning over her'? She was using her spell on me."
I looked to the floor "But, wait so, so technically you love her?"
"No Bella, never. You're the only one I love." Edward said.
"But, when she uses the spell you don't...you don't love me?" I asked.
"Bella, love, no I will always love you." Edward explained.
I stood up. "But Edward, you just said that when she's around you love her too."
"Bella, you don't understand, I can't help it it's that charm."
I sighed. "How long is she going to be here Edward? Wait a second, why is she here anyways?!"
"She's been here since you have Bella." Edward said. "She's always been inthe background."
"Oh really! Name one time!" I said.
"Our wedding." Edward said.
"What?!" I asked "Where was she?"
"She hid in the back the whole time. Remember when I let you dance with Jacob..."
"She had her charm on you..."
"Remember the time...I-I left...you in the woods?"
"Edward!" I yelled "Why did you never tell me this?!"
"Bella you said It didn't matter..."
"Do you not understand? I didn't know she was meddling into our life!" I yelled.
"Bella, calm down." Edward said. "Please listen to me."
"No." I said going to the door. "I've heard enough for right now."
"But Bella-"
"No buts Edward." I said "I'll be at Charlie's. Alice has Renesmee."
"Bella, please don't leave." He said as I got into the car.
"Bye Edward." I said and drove away.
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Driving up to the house was going to be hard. Talking to Charlie would be worse. I walked up the walkway feeling like I was a terrible person coming back here but, I couldn't stay there tonight. I sighed and put my contacts in real quickly and knocked on the door. Groggily, Charlie answered. Was it really late?
"Bella, what are you doing here? It's 11 at night." He said.
Oh well, maybe it was kinda late. "I'm sorry Dad." I said "I just, I need to....I need to stay here tonight."
"Did Edward and you get into a fight?" He asked.
"Yeah, a fight." I said "It's okay, just I need to cool down."
"Okay, yeah that's fine. Your old room is available." He said.
"Alrighty, thank you Dad. I'll head up there." I said.
"You're welcome....um Bells?"
"Yeah dad?" I asked going up the stairs.
"Are you sure you're okay?"
"Yeah," I said. "I'm okay."
Okay so I know this is a really confusing story but, I promise everything will fall into place. If you are confused please let me know at what and I'll fix it or explain it. -
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Permalink Reply by Gigi Cullen Rodriguez on -
Lynette is a witch!!! in every sense of the word!!!!!!!!!
But I really like this story keep it uup!!
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Permalink Reply by Megan on -
I hate that witch why can't she just leave Edward alone... and why don't they just kill her if she's such a problem.
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not confuseing att all and like theis person uptop sed, too short! LOl. loveee your storyyy
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Permalink Reply by Rose Lillian Hale on -
AHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!! The second I saw "Inbox (1)" it made my whole day!!!!
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Wow... +!update!+
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PLEASE READ!
hey everyone! It's Brianna!
Unfortunately, I cannot get access to my account due to my e-mail getting deleted. I'm going to post this story on another thread. Please add me under this name for updates. I will be updating only this story and another one called Musical Love. Please excuse me for this and I'm sorry.
I've been going through a rough patch this year so far. Also, I am getting my tonsils taken out soon so if you don't hear from me, it's because I do not have access to a coputer. Thank you so much for your understanding. I will get back to updating soon! -
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