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Imprinting. The Truth comes out. Chapter 1

NPOV

I could feel the wind gliding through my hair effortlessly as I glided from tree to tree in search of a prey to eat. I came across a herd of Deer and took down the biggest buck I saw. I thought Jacob was right behind me, but he must have found his own food. I pressed my lips to the deer's neck and begin to drink. I smelled the familiar woodsy smell that I knew and loved. I turned my head to pounce on him in surprise.
"Ready to meet your..." I trailed off finding myself face to face with a unfamiliar wolf. This one was a normal one, but was unseemingly large for its breed. His teeth were exposed and bearing at me. I was not feeling afraid..I didn't think. Just caught off gard. I growled back at him, Then was cut short by the sounds of multiple growls. I stood to find myself completely surrounded by a pack of wolves. There had to be at least 15 of them! I begin to feel a little nervous. I was 7 years old. I looked the age of 18. But I have never found myself in a real fight. I could feel my knees starting to turn to run. I was searching in my mind to find the right words to yell for help. I opened my mind as wide as I could and called for my dad, "Dad, if you are anywhere near, please, help me.I am really scared"
At that moment, on of the large wolves lunged at me. I fought back as much as I could, but then the weight of the entire pack began to weigh itself on me. Their large paws had almost no effect on me, but my clothes were another story. I screamed for help, wondering where my Jacob was, who had never left my side in my entire life. I felt this relief of the weight from my body, opened my eyes to more intense growling. The entire pack turned from me and pursued this new intruder. It was a larger wolf that I knew and loved, it was Jacob. I watched in Horror as he growled at me to stay back. Final after killing 3 of the wolves they retreated and howled deeper into the woods. Jacob layed there on the damp forest ground bleeding. I tried to hard to retrieve my mind from what I had just watched to the need to be at Jacob's side. I regained composer and rushed over to his side. "Jake, can you hear me? Are you hurt bad? " A low groan came from him

"Ness?"
I sighed relief "Oh Jacob, thank goodness your okay!" I threw myself on him and hugged him as hard as I could. I couldn't understand this new feeling that was coming over me. I loved Jacob, he was my best friend. But why did it bother me like this to see him like this?
"Ouch Nessie, careful. "
" Awe Jacob I am sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, I am just so glad that you are ok."
"Nessie?" I heard a familiar deep voice come from the distance. I knew that voice well enough.
"Over here dad"
"Ness is everything okay? Are you hurt? Are you injured in any way?" Obviously looking over my shredded clothes.
"No dad I am fine, but Jacob.." Feeling the tears coming, I didn't know why they were coming so strong. "Jacob he is hurt, he saved me from the Wolves, but they hurt him, I don't know how bad though."
"It's okay Nessie We will get him home and have Carlisle look at him"
Dad picked Jacob up effortlessly and we ran back to the house. Carlisle was waiting and took Jacob up to his office, which was now more like a personal hospital room. I started to follow but felt a hand pull on my arm. I turned around and found my dad pulling me back.
"Let's talk Nessie, I need you to tell me what happened"
I tried to find the words to describe what happened and what I had saw. I felt the sobs starting to build, I felt my mother come and sit by me and put her arms around me.
"It's okay sweetie, perhaps you can show us."
I nodded and put my hands on both their arms, showing them with my gift what had happened. I felt the arms around me tighten.
"Oh Renesmee, I am so sorry, I hope that you are okay?" My mother said while stroking my hair
I put my head down on her shoulder, And began to release the tears that had been building for a while. "Oh mom, what's wrong with me? I felt so scared."
"Honey that's normal, it was a scary thing for you."
"No mom, I am talking about Jacob. I have never felt this fear in my life."
"What do you mean sweetie, what fear are you feeling?" She kissed my tears away.
"I felt so terrified for him, I was so afraid that I was loose him, never see him again, that this could be our last moment together. I feel empty inside, like I had come so close to loosing Jacob and now that has left an empty feeling inside me. I don't understand where these new feelings are coming from. I don't understand, Jacob is my best friend, but now..."
I felt my dad's body tense next to me. I looked up at my parents, they were staring at eachother. I knew that my mom was lowing her shield so that my dad and her could exchange words without me hearing. "WHAT?" I asked impatiently. "What are you two thinking? What are you talking about?"
"Sorry honey," my dad said, "We just knew this day would come, just didn't know when, and how soon."
"I don't understand, what do you mean? You knew I would what?"
They exchanged glances then my mom continued, "We knew that your feelings about Jacob would change someday. We knew that you would begin to see him...in a different way."
"I don't understand whats going on." I stood up and started to pace up and down the floor. My dad came and put his arm around my shoulder.
"Honey, has Jacob ever told you how he feels about you? Has he ever mentioned anything about feelings changing?"
"No"
"Well..."
"What dad?"
"Have you ever heard of imprinting?"
"Yeah a little, Jacob talked a little bit about it at La Push, about some of the other boys and how they fell madly in love with a girl, then did something like imprinting, that made them both fall madly in love with eachother, and they knew...."
It was all coming together now, I now realized what was going on. Why I was suddenly getting these feelings. I ran up the stairs and into my Grandpa's office, where Jacob was laying on the table with just shorts on. He had bandages all over his body, he looked so helpless. I found my self gazing over his huge chest, the way the muscles defined his arms and chest. The feeling came over me to want to touch him, and run my hands over him and..
"Nessie!" Jacob said happily but softly
"Hey you, How are you feeling?" I looked up at Grandpa who gave me a hopeful smile.
"Eh...I feel great. Just some broken bones that will heal faster then you can run"
"Yeah right"
There was a long pause as Jake and I stared into eachothers eyes. I heard my grandpa clear his throat and excuse himself from the room. I stepped closer to Jacob I put my hand on top of one of the wrapped up wounds. I couldn't understand what was going on inside me, I looked up at Jacob who was staring at me adoringly. Did he know what I was feeling right now? Did he also know this day would come? I suddenly felt really embarrassed.
"Uh...I got to go, sorry."
I turned and ran for my room. I closed the door and sat on my bed. I knew my dad would be reading my thoughts, so I tried really hard to distract myself. But there was something that was pulling me back towards where Jake was. I had to see him. I suddenly felt a need to be next to him all the time. What does this mean? What does this change?

Chapter 2
I sat there in my room for hours not leaving my bed, I wrapped my arms around my knees and pulled them to my chest. I had been trying to sort through my feelings, but couldn't seem to get them anywhere. Was I allowed to feel this way about Jacob? Could I allow myself to feel this way? What would change? MAN EVERYTHING WOULD CHANGE. THIS SUCKS! I heard a soft knock on my door and my dad came in. "hey honey, mind if we talk?"
"sure dad, I guess."
He sat on my bed and opened his arms for me to come and snuggle in. I sighed and gave in, I snuggled in really close to my dad, sometimes it felt like, no matter how old I would get, I would always been his little girl, and he was always going to be my daddy.
"Honey I know that this is hard for you. I have been listening for the past 2 hours downstairs, I know this is not easy. But you can get through this. I felt the same in a way when I met your mother."
" Tell me daddy about that, I love hearing about when you and mom met."
"Honey the first time I saw your mother was in a crowded lunch room. It was her first day of school, because she had just transfered from Pheonix. I sat down at the lunch table with your aunts and uncles, and there she was, staring my way. I couldn't believe how beautiful she was, everything about her was beckoning me. She was definately not like any of the other girls that I had seen in my 108 years of existance to that point. I knew that I would never be the same. The first time that we walked together in our meadow was one of the best days of my life. Your mother knew about me, she had figureed out what I was. And it shocked me that she was ok with it. I was ready to fall deeply in love with her. Ready to let myself be happy for the first time in over 100 years. But still I held back, and was cautious. Your mother on the other hand, was not afraid, she knew it was what she wanted and needed, and went into the relationship without looking back. I guess you could say she inspired me to do the same."
"So you were also unsure about loving her?"
"Oh yes, I was afraid that I would not be able to control myself around her. But you are living proof that I could and did." He stroked my hair. I laid my head down on his shoulder and wrapped my arms around his waist.
"Dad, I don't know what I am suppose to do. This is going to change everything. I don't think that I can live without Jacob in my life. I KNOW that I can't. But what are we suppose to do now?" Where do we go from here."
"Honey I know that I put off that I don't like Jacob all that well. But I truely do love him like a brother and a son. He saved your mother numerous times, and has been a perfect friend to us and especcially to you. I will be happy with what ever you decide. But know this. You can love anyone. But you will truely only ever fall in love with someone once."
He leaned down and kissed my forehead. "Get some sleep honey."
"Okay, I love you dad, give mom a kiss for me."

I laid there in my bed wide awake. What did my dad mean when he said "you can only be in love with someone once" ? Was I in love with Jacob? Or did I just love him? I decided to go find out. I krept up from my bed, out of my room, down the hall to jacob's room. He had moved in with us, it just made sense since he was already here 24 hours a day. I opened the door to find Jacob sleeping soundly on his huge bed. I slid in next to him, which is something we did quite often. Ever since I was a baby, Jacob and I would always sleep together. The warmth that was penetrating from his skin felt amazing. I curled up next to him and breathed his scent in deeply. I felt electric current run through my veins. I looked up to find Jacob staring at me. "You okay Nessie? What's wrong?"
"Nothing, I just missed you, and wanted to be near you." He smiled and wrapped his arms around me and pulled me in close. I breathed deeply calming myself down, I felt his lips against my forehead. "Sleep well Nessie, I love you forever."
I usual said it back, but meaning it only as friends. I became a little thing with us, but now could I truely say it? Did I mean it in that way? Did he mean it in that way? I closed my eyes and fell deeply asleep. I was awoken to cracking. I looked around trying to figure out where it was coming from. CRACK! I stared at Jacob, it was him, what was cracking? I realized that it was just his bones resetting and healing. I looked up at Jacob, who was sleeping soundly. A little too soundly, was he snoring? I giggled softly, and look at his face, with a jolt, a love overcame me. I could feel it from the tip of my head, down to the very bottom of my toes. I felt warm and nervous, excited, sick, awed. I looked at his lips, oh his lips! They were slightly parted and full. I started to lean in closer..closer...closer...Oh gosh! What was I doing? I jumped up as fast as I could and ran for it. I ran and ran and ran.

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It's good. Though very close to Fire's so it's not really new, if you could change the story line or something... and also read it back to yourself because some parts dont really make sense; gramatically. anyway, keep up the good work :D
JPOV

She was there, then gone. I opened my eyes suddenly to find Nessie running out of my room. "Nessie?" I ran out of my room and down the stairs, out the front door. "NESSIE!" what was going on? What had happened? What did I do?"
"Nothing" a voice behind me said, I turned to find Edward standing there with his arms folded across his chest. Although that was his angry pose, he didn't look angry.
"I'm not, just worried. Come to the cottage, Bella and I want to talk to you."
I nodded my head and ran to my room, I opened the draw that had held the second most precious thing in the world to me. I pulled it out and put it in my pocket. I was my father's last wish for me to have this, and to give it to Nessie someday. I hoped that today would be that day.
"Come in Jacob" I had my hand raised to the door, but being who was in there, I am not surprised they knew I was coming. I opened the door to see Bella and Jacob sitting so formally in the living room. The fire was going, it felt nice and loving in there. I knew it was a home that they made together, filled with love and kidness. I only hoped one day...
"Jacob, before you let your mind run wild, do you think we can talk to you about Renesmee?"
"yes, there is something that I want to talk to you about too."
They exchanged glances, and Edward shifted his weight and glared at me. Bella reached up and touched his arm softly. He smiled at her, then looked at me.
"Jacob, I know you are confused by Renesmee leaving like that, but you have to know.."
"Know what?" I persisted
Bella hesistated, then said. "She knows. We told her and she knows now.." I sat there confused? What does she know exactly? "She knows about you, and the imprinting"
I stared at them in shock. "You told her! How could you tell her. I mean..I..uh...I knew...something..was up...but...ah..(sigh)" I lowered my head into my hands. No wonder she was all crazy around me, thats why she left. She must really hate me now. She must never want to speak to me. I know I was sounding like a 15 year old in my head, but I didn't care.
"Quite the opposite Jake. She will kill me for telling you this, but she does love you, she is just confused. She is afraid that things are going to change too much between you two. That you will stop completely being friends, and just want to be lovey-dovey with her, that she will loose her best friend."
"You know that I will always be her best friend first. I love her too much to just let what we have as best friends stop." I knew in my mind that if I started to think what I was wanting to think next, Edward would rip me apart. So I said it before he could. "Edward. Bella. I want to ask you both something."
"Bella put her hand on my knee and patted it. "Jacob you can ask us anything you want."
"Anything?" I asked looking at Edward. He looked at me and I knew he knew what I was going to say next. He nodded for me to continue. " I know that this is completely old fashioned, but I,..uh..." I took a deep breath and began my practiced speech. "I love your daughter with everthing that I am. I have loved her from the first moment I laid eyes on her. You know that, I want to be with her forever. I want to share everything that I am with. I love her so very much. I want to marry her. I am asking you for your permission and blessing to have your daughter's hand in marriage."
Tell me what you guys think. This is my first time. I have had this story in my head for a long time.
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JPOV Continued.

I ran as fast as I could in my human form. I didn't want to transform in case I found her suddenly. I stopped and tried to smell her. But her beautiful scent was no where to be found. I sat down on the nearest rock. I had remembered earlier hearing from Sam that when you and your imprint finally connect in feelings. You can sense them, and they can feel and hear their thoughts. It made sense, thats why I could hear her and feel her in danger yesterday. I took a deep breath and listened with everything I had. I could hear a faint noise in the far distance. I listened harder, and could hear her crying. I stood up and filled my lungs with the faint smell. I ran as fast and as hard as I could to her side. Why was she crying? Was she hurt? Or worse, did I cause this pain? Her scent became clearer, I knew she was near, but where? Then, there she was, my perfect angel, my everything. I could hear her crying more clearly now. "Nessie? Honey?" I walked over to her slowly and put my hands on her shoulders. "Nessie we need to talk, I need to explain everything to you." She wheeled around and looked at me straight in the eyes. I had never seen her in this much pain. Was it really that awful for her to love me? I started to pull her into me to hug her, but she quickly released from me and walked away.
"There..is...nothing...to...talk...about...I can't do this Jacob. I can't loose you."
I ran to her side, and scooped her up in my arms, I didn't care that she struggled, I had to have her near me. "Ness, how can you even think that. You are never going to loose me. I will never leave you. I love you too much to ever be apart from you. I. Am. Not. Going. Anywhere."
She looked up at me from my arms, he eyes were full of tears and helplessness. We stared at each other for what seemed like forever. I breathed in her sweet smell through my mouth, looked at her with the most loving eyes, then I knew at that moment that I wanted to kiss her more then anything. I put her down and pulled her up again into my arms, closing whatever space there was between us. She looked at me, with what I thought was the same desire I had. I cupped her face in my hands. And ran my fingers through her silky hair. Oh how I loved her hair. I ran my thumb softly over her lips, looking at her with more love then I had ever felt. Her lips parted slightly between my thumb. She smiled her beautiful smile that made me weak in the knees. I leaned my head down slowly, making sure this was slow, so I could make sure this is what she really wanted. She leaned up on her toes and wrapped her arms around my neck. YES! She wanted this too. I had waited my entire life, to feel this way about someone, I had waited years for this moment. The moment that I would final share a kiss with my Nessie. And here we were almost there. Our lips were just an inch from eachother and I could feel her cool breath on my skin. I felt a live wire rush through my body. Could this be happening to me. Could someone this beautiful want to be with me forever? Her lips pressed softly against mine. I felt so much emotion that I thought I would going to pass out. I wrapped my arms around her waist and pulled her into me even closer, if it were possible. The kiss turned from soft and warm to hot and fierce. I felt her wrap her hands up in my hair and hold my head to hers. My hand slid down her back to her butt and I pulled her suddenly up to me. She wrapped her legs around my waist. We fell against a trunk. She was not letting up. I felt the passion inside me surfacing. I needed her more, and I wanted every part of her. And I wanted it now. Suddenly she was gone. I opened my eyes to find her gone. I looked over to her by the river kneeling by the side. What had happened? "Nessie? What's wrong baby?" I sat beside her and put my hand on her back.
"Oh Jacob, I am so sorry. I don't know what I was thinking. I don't know what is going on with me right now."
I felt desperet, Empty. Was she regretting kissing me? "Are you regretting the kiss?"
"Oh Jacob I don't know. It was amazing. But I just don't know."
"What, what don't you know?" I felt the desire to share everything with her. I had to, I had to keep her. "Nessie there is something I want to ask you." She just sat there staring at me. She didn't give me any sign that she wanted me to go on. I was now second guessing myself. Doubt filled my every being. She would never want me. I had lived through rejection once, and it nearly killed me. But I don't think I could do it with her. I felt her soft hand stroke my cheek
"Jake, I am sorry. I was not giving you hope to ask me. What would you like to ask me?"
"No Ness, it's fine. I can wait. Now is not the time."
"Please Jakey" Oh I hated when she called me that. I could never say no to that. I took her hand and pulled her up so we were both standing. I felt so small, even though I was twice her size, I felt small compared to her right now.
"Nessie, I know that this has been a confusing couple of days, and I know that you feel so confused and lost inside. But I want you to know that, (deep breath) you mean the world to me. I cannot live my life without you in it. I cannot go from day to day, I cannot breath unless you are near me. I never want to be apart from you. I love you so much Nessie. You are my best friend. And I make you a promise and vow right now that that will never change. I will always be your best friend. But I want you more then just a friend too, I want you for myself. I want you with me everyday of forever. I love you more then My own life, Renesmee Carlie Cullen, Will you marry me?"
"Jacob I..."
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