hey guys was sitting here reading other fan fics and thats when I got to thinking what if Jake repeats history and leaves Nessie cause he thinks its for her own good?!?! humm... I've already got it planned out... hmm comments are love write me and tell me wat you think I take critism alright just be lite about it k ? hope you like the ideas...:)
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@kelly: thanks I'm going to continue! thanks for commenting!:) I'm gonna
post the preface and 1st chapter to day!:)
@sharon:thanks for the good feedback!i'm posting soon!
A/N AM NOT POSTING THE 1ST CHAPPIE FOR PROBABLY
A FEW DAYS SORRY FOR THE INCONVINCE! :(
PREFACE: I was laying there it hurt so much. I was calling out, I knew
my parents were in Italy with the whole family and all the Voltouri,
"Shut up Beautiful," the voice growled. I froze I knew that voice!
And then Jake came into my mind and then I was screaming his
name ,"Jake! Jake help me!"I screamed out and that's when the
door burst open, and the russet colored wolf stood before us.
A/N : Am just posting this Ciao, Bella <3
here is her link she is amazing i'm glad you like both of the things i will definatly update thanks for reading! :)
Chapter One- Date Night
Jake and I had never been on a date by ourselves before, mom and dad had
always sent a "body guard" which was either Aunt Alice or Uncle Emmet. The
last time we went on a "date" Uncle Emmet babysat us and half way through the movie
Jake put his warm muscular arm around me and Uncle Emmet shouted from the top row,
"Hey, you down infront keep your hands to yourself, that's my neice," Jake and I blushed at
the same time and he removed his arm awkwardly.Emmet gave me a thumbs up and I
flipped him off.He snickered.But today was diffrent! Jake and I were going on a date by ourselves.
We were going to get dinner and go to a bonfire with the pack.Dinner was easy, Jake and I went
to a little resturant on the outskirts of Port Angeles. It was beautiful even watching Jake pick up
a fork, wind noodles around it, and stuck all of it in his mouth. I laughed as he slurped down the noodles.
By the time we were finished it was around eight thirty and Jake wanted to get back to the pack.We were
on our way there when Jake said something I always wanted to say to him, "I love you." he whispered
"I love you too," I reached out a took the hand not on the wheel and we road all the way to La Push this way.
When we got to the beach , the flames were already at least eight feet tall.Sam's daughter Ella danced around
the fire, gracefully beautifully she was twelve and as beautiful and kind hearted as her mother, Emily.Her jet black
hair straight as uncooked spagetti noodles.It wasn't long, but two weeks after she was born Collin came to see
Sam and had accidently looked at the baby and poof he had imprinted on her. He clapped when she was done and
so did I,"NESSIE!" she shouted running for me and I hugged her when she got to me."We thought you guys weren't coming!"
she pouted. Jake laughed," Were here now right?" He said, she smiled," Common daddy's about to tell the legends!"
she said pulling us along,"No vampire stories right?" I asked. "Of course not Ness,"Jake kissed my head,and Sam began.
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hey guys I'm travling so wont be on for at least 1 or 2 days thanks for understanding
<3 ciao bella!