Loss To Love - NOW COMPLETE

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Permalink Reply by Bella Swan {Ultimate Twi-fan!} on October 19, 2010 at 10:13pm

*Gasp*
WOW.
This was so wonderful. (I'm almost crying).
Poor Edward.

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 21, 2010 at 5:46am

Thanks for reading Bella swan ( Ultimate Two-fan!). It has been quite emotional and I feel sorry for Edward too so I apologise for that.

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Rutz on October 20, 2010 at 11:53am

AWESOME!!
another brilliant chapter
love it how u understand Edward n Bellas actual character and execute it perfectly

Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on October 20, 2010 at 3:05pm

Ladies!!! Ladies!!! OH MY!!! I'm SPEECHLESS!!! What a amazing chapter!!! I have to say that was not was I was expecting........Peter to have been in Love with someone else...................I like the way you have them communicating.............talking ..........what man do you know would react the way Peter did........none I know, that's what I love about the story.........................Now let's talk about that luncheon & crazy James................Edward said I DON"T THINK SO!!!...........Jacob said I GOTTCHA!!! Your not going anywhere. Brothers don't play............lol...................I also like the fact that Edward has a lot of courage, to be able to talk to your BEST FRIEND and tell him you have feelings for his FIANCE!!................That took a lot of GUTS!!!. That's my Edward!!! What is Bella going to do? I'll just have to wait for AnanyR & Michelle to post another Chapter.......sad face.....until your next installment!!.I'll just read this story from the beginning............LOL BRAVO!!!

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 21, 2010 at 5:53am

Hi Robyn,

Thanks for thinking it is an amazing chapter. I don't think that Peter believed he was in love with Charlotte - just that he was attracted to her and I think he is hoping that attraction is all it is with Bella too. We all know it is deeper than that though ;)

Peter did react pretty well to the whole thing and I agree that there aren't many men who would do that.

Edward and Jacob both went into a very strong protection mode didn't they - I love them both like that.

Edward is a good person and has been feeling very guilty about his feelings so if asked outright about it from Peter he would try to be as honest as possible.

What are they all going to do???? Next chapter will answer a lot of questions (but probably make us think of more to ask too.)

Love reading your comments Robyn so thanks.....

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 21, 2010 at 5:48am

Thanks Rutz,

I do try to stay as close as possible to the characters since I am borrowing them from SM and don't want to make their personalities completely different so I appreciate that you think that.

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Amanda on October 20, 2010 at 7:58pm

OMG !!! She cant stay with peter!! she ned to go to edward!!! I bet if she just kissed edward she would know here is something more there then she has with peter

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 21, 2010 at 5:54am

Hi Amanda,

Bella has been with him for a long time so it would be very difficult for her to give that up easily. I imagine if she kissed Edward she would definitely know what her feelings are but I am not sure they would get to that too easily. Lets see what happens.

Thanks for reading and commenting
Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Alextraviolet Cullen on October 20, 2010 at 8:36pm

ok Bella need to contact this chlette woman and ask her what happen. then get them in a room together and see if the feeling are there. she loves Peter but she is not in love with him, she need to admit that to herself

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 21, 2010 at 5:55am

Hi Marsha,

There are many different kinds of love so let's hope it all works out for them all in the end. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Ginny Jones on October 22, 2010 at 5:49pm

Michelle! That was AMAZING!!! i have question. I thought Peter loved Charlotte (is that spelled right?)?
and i'm glad James finally got in trouble.
-Ginny
Update as soon as you can

Permalink Reply by Michelle on October 22, 2010 at 10:48pm

Hiya Ginny,

Thanks for thinking it is amazing. To answer your question Peter was ATTRACTED to Charlotte but chose not to do anything about it because he was committed to Bella. He is thinking that what Bella feels for Edward is the same - that she is attracted to him. I don't think he realises the extent of how Bella feels because Bella hasn't even admitted it to herself. He thinks she is feeling guilty over being attracted to Edward and so he revealed how he once felt that attraction too to make her feel better.

I will update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading
Cheers
Michelle

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