Loss To Love - NOW COMPLETE

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Permalink Reply by AnahyR on November 18, 2010 at 6:58pm

hi Kristahra,
I know this is really hard, it brought some memories to me and I was crying so hard that I had to stop reading for a while, it was so hard for me and I was also listening to Adele's song when reading and that spiced up things!

I'm glad you are liking the story and reviewing, thank you for doing that!!

Permalink Reply by Tami on November 15, 2010 at 10:31pm

It was kinda hard to read through my tears. Another emotionally charged chapter. Jasper was really quite devious at manipulating Bella to go to the funeral. Well done.

Poor Edward, Victoria was out of line there. Edward thought he had saved Peter. Hmmm...what will happen next Michelle?

Permalink Reply by Michelle on November 17, 2010 at 11:11pm

Oh my goodness Tami - did you actually have tears about this chapter? I am so going to take that as a compliment.
Jasper did manipulate Bella but I think he was only able to do it because he was really feeling that way. Maybe we should consider that Alice manipulated both of them to get them to help one another?????

Victoria was out of line but I guess people who are grieving respond in different ways.

Next chapter is Edward and there will be some huge interaction happening between him and Bella.

Thanks for reading

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by cidney on November 15, 2010 at 11:20pm

omg this is truly so sad. I feel so bad, everyone is blaming them selves. When it truly no ones fault, he got in a accident key work= accident. I was on the bus when i read this and i shed a few tears people around me were looking at me like was an idiot. But it was so sad. I love this story so much! great job:)

Permalink Reply by Michelle on November 17, 2010 at 11:12pm

Hi Cidney,

It was an extremely sad chapter and there is a lot of guilt floating around. Thnaks for loving the story so much that you are willing to cry for it on teh bus :)

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by MC,Cullen<3 on November 16, 2010 at 5:54pm

Sooo sad... i feel such pain for all of them...i know it will get better! its just going to take time...bella and edward will be there for eachother i know it:) Thanks always for this amazing writing!!!!
<3 always Morgan

Permalink Reply by Michelle on November 17, 2010 at 11:14pm

Hi Morgan,

A lot of pain but things will eventually get better. There will be some Bella and Edward interaction next chapter so I hope it is a step in teh right direction of them being there for one another.
Thanks as always.

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by DaneiMarie on November 17, 2010 at 3:02am

That chapter was so painfully beautiful. I felt all the pain coming through the words. It was sad but so good. You did an amazing job on this chapter.

Permalink Reply by Michelle on November 17, 2010 at 11:16pm

Hi DaneiMarie,
You have made me feel really good about my writing. Thanks so much. It was a hrad one to write but I am glad it came across the right way. I wanted his send off to be something special.

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by sherry williams on November 20, 2010 at 11:22pm

omg
poor bella and all of them
so sad i cried like a baby
love the story
update soon please

Permalink Reply by Michelle on November 21, 2010 at 3:17am

Thanks for reading and commenting Sherry. Hopefully there will be some good times ahead

Cheers
Michelle

Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on November 15, 2010 at 11:24am

Wow that was the most dramatic and emotional chapter it was so full of real life. I don't see how anyone who has lost a friend or a loved one could possible now relate to this chapter. The song was perfect and I applaud both of yu for a chapter that conveyed the scene so well and was no doubt hard to write. Looking forward to more and keep up the good work. I am sure you used a lot of tissues writing this one.
Hugs
Sarah

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