Loss To Love - NOW COMPLETE

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Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 5:28pm

Hi Sarah Beth,

 

Thank you so much for all the great things you said in the comment and for understanding the way I am trying to write the characters. You are such a great writer and it shows up even in your comments. lol. I am hoping that Edward giving her some space and taking himself away as a crutch will help Bella realise that Edward means so much more to her than she can admit too. He is always there for her. How will she react when he isn't? Will we see a stronger Bella emerge?

 

Thanks again for your positive support.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 5:22pm

Hi Peace*Love*Twilight,

 

Thanks for reading and letting me know that you enjoyed it. All of the characters had a few things to say and I was proud of Alice and liked showing her protective streak when it came to Jasper too. Everyone seems to think that Bella needs to know what Peter said when he was passing so maybe I should get that in there soon - maybe it will help?????  Edward has been so patient and protective that it is really sad that he is removing that from Bella to try and help her come out the otherside stronger. I want them to be happy to I promise so it shouldn't be too far away now.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Rabizz on March 10, 2011 at 3:48pm

That was a real turn around Michelle.

But it was the way it should go if they would have any chance at all.

But I swear to God that James is going to get his. Hate that guy!!

Another great chapter Michelle, thanks.

Please hurry up with your next post. The suspence is killing me..

 

 

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 5:29pm

Thanks Rabizz. I really appreciate that you are so open to what I just did to our favourite couple - we all want them together :)

 

Hope to have next one up soon.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 7:18pm

Hi Paula,

 

I wish you could tell Bella that too ( even though I could just write it I guess:)

 

Thanks so much for always reading and always leaving me wonderful comments that let me know how you feel about the chapters. I appreciate it.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Melissa on March 10, 2011 at 9:47pm

I am crying because of that chapter.  It was so emotional and I can't stand that Edward is walking out.  He is right he needs Bella to realize what she is doing.  He needs to leave and Bella needs to chase after Edward.  It is the only way she is going to know that Edward is what she needs to heal.  He has been so patient and loving with her and she is pushing him away.  So so so sad that I can't stand it....  It is a great chapter and I really want to know what is Bella thinking letting him walk out of her life.....Please hurry and post more soon.

Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on March 11, 2011 at 1:49am

WOW !! I'm speechless....I 'll just have to diddo what everone else said...........This was a very sad chapter....If I could come thru this screen and beat the living crap out of James I would...........I can't believe Rick would believe James.......uuurrrrrrrr......I just want to scream............I agree Jasper needs to tell Bella that Peter wanted her to be happy with Edward...........Someone also needs to tell Rick what that slimeball James did to Bella at the bar......I know Edward touch on it, but Peter's parents really need to know what James intentions were that night......If he had the chance then he would have taken from Bella what he wanted.......................I hope they work it out, but right now I feel like Edward..until you post again

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 7:22pm

Hi Robyn,

 

For a moment I thought you were going to say if you could come through the screen and belt the living crap out of me you would but then I saw that it was James you were mad at not me....phew. This chapter was full of everyone's sadness and was hard to write but hopefully things will get better for them all.

 

I so love the fact that you are always there encouraging me with your comments. Thank you so much for that.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 7:19pm

Hi Melissa,

 

We are starting to get to the bottom of things now and soon it will be fixed one way or another. I am so humbled that this chapter made you feel enough emotions to make you cry. Thank you for that. I will post as soon as possible.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Iris N.O. on March 11, 2011 at 10:17am

hey gal, nice but soo sad. First of all rick damn you, and bella when will you ever learn? Cheers gal

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 7:24pm

Sorry Iris. The sadness will hopefully lead to happiness down the track. Bella does need to learn - how could anyone give up a man who is so wonderful to her. Thanks for reading!

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Alextraviolet Cullen on March 11, 2011 at 9:52pm

Michelle

             I hate when Edward hurts you have to make it better soon. Bella better coming begging on her hands and knees. after all the love ,patient, care etc that Eddie show her this is what he gets. He is a true man that puts her needs before his own. I am crying because he is hurting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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