Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
This story is being worked on by both myself and AnahyR whose ideas are the basis for all chapters. We hope you enjoy it and would love to hear your opinions through your comments. AnahyR will also be doing this story in Spanish so for those of you who are Spanish speaking you will also have access to this at some stage. I will put the link here once it is done.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
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And thanks to Manda for this one too!! Love it.
OMG !!!!! I have to take a moment here to organize my head!
first of all, I DON'T HAVE ENOUGH WORDS TO TELL YOU HOW AMAZING YOU ARE, AND I'M SO BEYOND TRILLED YOU NAMED ONE OF THEIR GRANDCHILDREN AFTER ME (that is really pretentious) !!!
I seriously can't thank you enough, I don't have the words in English nor Spanish, I have to take a few breaks reading this chapter because it was too much for me to handle at the same time, with that I realize how hard it must have been for you to write!
I wish I could travel all they way where you are and give you the biggest of the hugs, YOU HAVE MADE THIS MORE THAN PERFECT!!!!!!
I have been reading all the comments and you can see that I'm not the only one who thinks you would do amazing as a writer, YOU ARE MORE THAN AMAZING WRITER MICHELLE!!!!
Thank you for give life to my ideas, to turn my draft into such a beautiful story!!!
you are very dear to me Michelle, and I seriously wish I could give you a hug right now.
I hope you give us the chance to read your amazing stories, and you keep writing!!!
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH. GRACIAS, GRACIAS, MUCHISIMAS GRACIAS!!!!
CHEERS, TO ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I KNOW
Hi AnahyR. I had to get your name in there somehow and what better way than with their granddaughter who was right there supporting her til the end. lol. Thank you so much for having such a heart warming story to tell and for allowing me to be the one that brought it to life for you. I found it an emotional ride and I know sometimes people were frustrated with how long it took Bella and Edard to get together but I really felt that they needed to be respectful of Peter as well.He was a good guy also.
I am more than willing to take your hug all the way from over there - thanks for your consideration:)
Thanks for the support and the kind words. I have thoroughly enjoyed working with you.
A wonderful story..I can't help but feel so contented and filled with glee when I finally read your epilogue. You are such and amazing writer, Michelle.You have awaken the lady in me, a lady that dreams of having her own Edward.
I am hoping that in the near future you will write a new one. Please tell us if you have, okay? Thanks for being such a great writer. God bless you.
I truly do hope that one day you get to experience your own Edward and that he is a kind and loving man that youi deserve. Thank you for your support and enjoyment of this story. It has been fun to write and then to hear everyone's thoughts. I do have an idea in my head about another story but I am not sure when I will start as I am a little fatigued right now.
Wow, once again I am speechless. Your work is... arabesque, mithycal... and most of all, magical. When reading this story, I felt like I was in a movie, watching all the characters doing their things from a side view.
You know, if saying truth, I've been honestly waiting for this epiloque to come out, because, simply, I was and am enraptured in your marvelous writing. This story, you've written, the ending was not expected. I've never thought that this particular story of yours will end with Bella's and Edward's deaths. I thought that you will just simply explain what happened in Paris, after Bella confessed her love for Edward at the airport in NY. But... this time, I quess, you are a one fanciful and brilliant exception. If saying truth again, you're really really really one of my most favorite writer's. Can't wait to see another marvelous work and writing of yours, because,. as always, it is beyond the true perfection. But most importantly, don't forget to give some time for yourself.
Can't wait to read more,
All of the lovely things you have written in your comment have made me smile and glush ;) I so apprecaite you taking the time to let me knopw how you felt about the story and the way it made you feel. I am glad that you enjoyed the different way I ended the epilogue. I really wanted to show their forever and this was the only way to do that. Again thanks for your ongoing support and if I write another one I will let you know for sure.
Look after yourself and Cheers
Thnaks so much for everything you say about my stories and writing. I am glad that you enjoyed the way this was written. AnahyR gave me a wonderful draft of ideas so I can't take full credit though. The ending had me choked up quite a few times as well I must admit. I wanted to show how happy they had been but even thorugh happiness, life sometimes throws us curveballs top deal with and I wanted it to be reasonably realistic.
Thanks for your support. I will definitely let you know if I write another one.
I am glad that you thought it was a proper goodbye - I was kind of going for that. I wanted to be able to take a peek at their lives together and show that even at the end they loved each other totally. Thnaks for all your support throughout this story and for always having such lovely positive things to say.