The Twilight Saga

Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.

 

This story is being worked on by both myself and AnahyR whose ideas are the basis for all chapters. We hope you enjoy it and would love to hear your opinions through your comments. AnahyR will also be doing this story in Spanish so for those of you who are Spanish speaking you will also have access to this at some stage. I will put the link here once it is done.

 

 

Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:

 

The Heart is a Bloom:  Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...

 

No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...

 

 

 

 

 Thanks to Sasha for this gorgeous banner - We can't thank you enough.

 

 

 

 And thanks to Manda for this one too!! Love it.

 

 

Chapter 1 - Friendships                                             Chapter 2 - Interactions

Chapter 3 - Denying Attractions                                 Chapter 4 - A Friend in Need

Chapter 5 - Realizations                                            Chapter 6 - Truths

Chapter 7 - Peter                                                      Chapter 8 - Collision

Chapter 9 - Aftermath                                                Chapter 10 - Saying Goodbye

Chapter 11- Drowning Sorrows                                   Chapter 12 - Waking Up

Chapter 13 - Baby Steps                                           Chapter 14 - Friendship?

Chapter 15 - Flight                                                    Chapter 16 - Acceptance

Chapter 17 - Getting Closer                                       Chapter 18 - The Good and the Bad          

Chapter 19 - In These Arms                                      Chapter 20 - Accusations

Chapter 21 - Coolness                                             Chapter 22 - Candid

Chapter 23 - Broken Silences                                   Chapter 24 - At the Heart of it

Chapter 25 - Uncertainties

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Hi AnahyR. I had to get your name in there somehow and what better way than with their granddaughter who was right there supporting her til the end. lol. Thank you so much for having such a heart warming story to tell and for allowing me to be the one that brought it to life for you. I found it an emotional ride and I know sometimes people were frustrated with how long it took Bella and Edard to get together but I really felt that they needed to be respectful of Peter as well.He was a good guy also.

 

I am more than willing to take your hug all the way from over there - thanks for your consideration:)

 

Thanks for the support and the kind words. I have thoroughly enjoyed working with you.

 

Love ya

Cheers

Michelle

A wonderful story..I can't help but feel so contented and filled with glee when I finally read your epilogue. You are such and amazing writer, Michelle.You have awaken the lady in me, a lady that dreams of having her own Edward.

I am hoping that in the near future you will write a new one. Please tell us if you have, okay? Thanks for being such a great writer. God bless you.

 

Hi Charmie,

I truly do hope that one day you get to experience your own Edward and that he is a kind and loving man that youi deserve. Thank you for your support and enjoyment of this story. It has been fun to write and then to hear everyone's thoughts. I do have an idea in my head about another story but I am not sure when I will start as I am a little fatigued right now.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Wow, once again I am speechless. Your work is... arabesque, mithycal... and most of all, magical. When reading this story, I felt like I was in a movie, watching all the characters doing their things from a side view.

You know, if saying truth, I've been honestly waiting for this epiloque to come out, because, simply, I was and am enraptured in your marvelous writing. This story, you've written, the ending was not expected. I've never thought that this particular story of yours will end with Bella's and Edward's deaths. I thought that you will just simply explain what happened in Paris, after Bella confessed her love for Edward at the airport in NY. But... this time, I quess, you are a one fanciful and brilliant exception. If saying truth again, you're really really really one of my most favorite writer's. Can't wait to see another marvelous work and writing of yours, because,. as always, it is beyond the true perfection. But most importantly, don't forget to give some time for yourself.

Can't wait to read more,

Ash

Hi Ash,

 

All of the lovely things you have written in your comment have made me smile and glush ;) I so apprecaite you taking the time to let me knopw how you felt about the story and the way it made you feel. I am glad that you enjoyed the different way I ended the epilogue. I really wanted to show their forever and this was the only way to do that. Again thanks for your ongoing support and if I write another one I will let you know for sure.

 

Look after yourself and Cheers

Michelle

Michelle you are so brilliantly talented. I cant tell you enough at how much I love your work. I am horribly sad its over but everything has to end eventually. That was a perfect ending to a great story. It was breath taking the way you did it, I was so choked up at the end and the tears are flowing like a waterfall. What an amazing story you have written. I am praying you write something else. Please say you will start another story. I will read any and everything you write. Please let me know! BRILLIANT, AMAZING, ASTONISHING!!! Just a few words that come to mind!

Hi Daneimarie,

 

Thnaks so much for everything you say about my stories and writing. I am glad that you enjoyed the way this was written. AnahyR gave me a wonderful draft of ideas so I can't take full credit though. The ending had me choked up quite a few times as well I must admit. I wanted to show how happy they had been but even thorugh happiness, life sometimes throws us curveballs top deal with and I wanted it to be reasonably realistic.

 

Thanks for your support. I will definitely let you know if I write another one.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Well then a big thanks to AnahyR! I would also like to know if she comes up with anything else.
Oh my. Thank you so much for a proper goodbye. This story has been one of the very best I have ever read and I am going to miss it dearly! I did cry for the loss of each and everyone of them. This has been such a pleasure to read and I don't know what I'm going to do with out it. You have kept edward and bella alive for me when noone else could. Thank you so very much.
Always <3 Morgan

Hi Morgan,

 

I am glad that you thought it was a proper goodbye - I was kind of going for that. I wanted to be able to take a peek at their lives together and show that even at the end they loved each other totally. Thnaks for all your support throughout this story and for always having such lovely positive things to say.

 

Cheers

Michelle

First off thank you for sending me the link so that I could read it. Second off, ohmygosh, you were right I did need tissues I started crying and my cousin wanted to know what was the matter with me. Haha, anyways that was the most bitter sweet epliouge I have ever read. When I read that Edward had died I was so heartbroken, just like Bella. And when you wrote how everyone else had died I cried even harder. I mean poor Rose dying way before she should have, and then Em all alone. That was heartbreaking. Then when you said Alice and Jasper died I cried more because all I could imagine was Alice being her cute little self. Then you said that Jake died saving someones life I smiled because of course he would die saving someone. That's just him, haha. (:

Wow, I sound like I'm writing about real life people...I guess I do that because your writing is so real feeling. Anyways thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and I'm really hoping that this could get published because it is a beautiful story. So thank you. (:

I'm happy and sad that the story has ended, you guys did a beautiful job. So good job Anya and Michelle! :D

Well please tell me if you write another story, I guess I'll go now.

-Kendra(:

 

Hi Kendra,

 

No problem about sending the link. Sorry you had to wait for it :(

 

You must be a softie like me - I cry at almost anything and I definitely cried whilst I was writing this chapter. I could see them all living their lives and having their children and just wanting to live life to the fullest. When I was writing about how people had passed on it really got to me because I love the characters so much and it is hard to let go of them. I fully understand that you can see them as real people. I always get sad when a book I am reading finishes and that I have to let go of the characters because I think I know them so well - it is almost like theyve become my friends.

 

Thank you for all the great comments over the course of this story. AnahyR and I have both appreciated them. I will let you know if another story comes up.

 

Cheers

Michelle

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