Hello. My name is Danielle, author of Heat and Passion and Becoming Another. I have deleted both of my other stories because it has been a while since I have been on; I couldn't start up again. I have another story in mind and it is called "Lost. Heartbreak. Betrayal". I hope everyone enjoys it. (: I will start each chapter color coded so everyone knows whose point of view is being read.
Bella = Red
Edward = Blue
Jacob = Green
Renesmee = Orange
Those should be the only people I use but if I use more, I will just write the name beside the beginning of the chapter.
Like I said before, enjoy. (:
And thank you for the support. <3
The stars were beautiful. The sky completely clear. Being outside when the sun had set was one of my favorite activities. The night brought silence and that's what I needed. I needed to think about what I did. About what he did. I heard the door shut and heard feet coming my way. I sat up straight and smiled as he rounded the corner. "You're so beautiful." He whispered, bringing me water. I didn't really need water but I wanted to live a normal life with him. I smiled at him. "Thank you." I whispered quietly. I knew he could hear me; He had amazing hearing. I took a sip of my water and sat it down on the table beside me. I sighed, looking down at my hands. "What's wrong?" He whispered. I looked up at him, realizing how truly beautiful he was. "Nothing." I whispered, looking down at my hands again. "Bella." He smiled. "I can tell when you're upset." I laughed, getting up and sitting on his lap. "How did I get so lucky?" I smiled. He chuckled, then moved a strand of my hair away from my face. "And how did I get so lucky?" He whispered. I put my arms around his neck, looking into his deep brown eyes. He brought his lips to mine, kissing me for a second. He sat back, looking into my golden eyes. "I love you Bella Swan." I half smiled, tracing his lips with my fingers. "And I love you Jacob Black."
With every wakening hour, I thought about her. Wondering what she was doing. Wondering if she ever talked to our daughter. Wondering if she ever thought about me. "Babe?" I heard her faint whisper upstairs and smiled. She was an amazing, beautiful girl. I never thought I would leave Isabella Marie Swan Cullen, soon just Swan, for another human. I placed my hand against the window, looking down. She wasn't the same when she was a vampire; She had changed. Her personality transformed into this monster. A monster that I didn't like. I heard her call again and ran upstairs to greet her as she awoke. "Edward..." She said smiling. She rolled over to where I was and grabbed my hand, pulling me onto the bed. I laughed as did she. "Why were you downstairs?" She whispered, looking at him. I smiled, rubbing her cheek and felt the warmth as the blood pumped through her whole body. "Nothing, Elizabeth. Go back to bed." I kissed the top of her forehead, doing the same as I did with Bella. "Okay...." She smiled, closing her eyes. I laid down there, with her in my arms. I listened as I heard her heart beat, her chest rising up and down. I heard the phone ring and got up quietly. I grabbed it and answered it. "Hello?" "Edward, it's Renesmee. You have to come home now." Before I could get a word out, the person hung up.
I hope everyone likes the story. Please leave any comments for me. Tell me if you hate it or if you like it or any suggestions.
Thank you for reading and I will be posting more soon.
I like the way you hold the reader in suspence until the last sentance as to who the 'he' would be.
Thank you. I really appreciate the comment. So you did like it? I don't wanna start another chapter for nothing, haha. Well, I'll have it but I would like to share with everyone!
Thank you again!
great start...I really enjoy your writing style...can't wait to see where this goes.
Thank you very much!
she's a vampire? how can they're love be? please continue =D
You're just going to have to wait. (: