Love In The City

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Permalink Reply by aleG on August 2, 2010 at 3:13pm

loved it cant wait for more updatee soon no nowww

Permalink Reply by I lOvE mY JASPER~~ on August 2, 2010 at 3:19pm

love it

Permalink Reply by Jessica Elizabeth Burleson on August 2, 2010 at 8:43pm

that was awesome

Permalink Reply by brianna on August 2, 2010 at 11:05pm

Chapter 4 (part 2)
BPOV

         I dragged Edward over to my parents. "Mom, dad this is Edward....my fiancée."
         "We didn't even know you dated someone!" My mom exclaimed. 
        "Well, I did." I said innocently. 
        "Well Edward, we were going to take everyone out to dinner. You should come with us." My mom said.
        "Oh, I wouldn't want to intrude on-"
       "He would love to mom!" I said. "Jasper, do you want to get the limo? Edward and I will meet you guys out there."
      Jasper led my parents out and very loudly said "Im sure you and Edward need to catch up on things. After all, you haven't kissed all day!"
     "Jasper!" Edward, Alice and I exclaimed.
     I shut the door behind them and paced around the room.
     "You didn't tell me your parents would be here!" Edward sneered.
    "I didn't know!" I said "They surprised me!"
    "Well, what are we supposed to do huh? Your parents think we're engaged!" Edward yelled.
    I groaned. "I don't know! If I knew i wouldn't be panicking!"
     "Well, they are waiting for us." Edward said.
     "Thank you captain obvious." I stated.  "Okay well, we're going to have to go along with this whole engaged thing for at least a little bit because if not, my parents will find out. Andy will find out. We're going to have to be good actors." 
      "Okay, fine, whatever. Let's go." He said.
      Edward and I grabbed our coats and stepped out of the apartment. I saw the limo. "Hold my hand." I told Edward. 
     "What?!" He asked.
    "Hold. My. Hand." I sneered through my feet. 
     Edward sighed. "This is going to be so. Much. Fun."
    "You don't know how much fun Im having right now." I said.
    I opened the limo door and edward and I got in. 
     "Thanks for waiting." I said "We haven't seen each other all day."
     "Wait a second," My dad said "Isn't this the guy that you hate? Is this Edward Cullen?"
     "Oh that way before we really got to know each other." Edward said.
     "Yes." I agreed. "We've gotten to know each other better and here we are."
     "But, just last week didn't you say that you wanted to push him off of-"
     "Alice, did you talk about Rosalie yet?" I asked. "Tell my parents how great shes doing."
      While my parents were distracted, I could tell my dad was trying to put this all together. He's smart he would figure all of this out. This is going to be a fantastic dinner....as long as people can keep their mouths shut.
    
      
         (Next chapter will be longer i promise!!!)

Permalink Reply by Clarize Joyce Fajardo on August 2, 2010 at 11:23pm

that was a cliffee!!! =( I hope Bella's father will not find out about their little scheme... when will you update your other story?

Permalink Reply by Ɖαωи ˩ɛσи on August 3, 2010 at 1:39am

priceless!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on August 2, 2010 at 11:45pm

hahahhhaha LOL hope they figure out something!!! :)

Permalink Reply by I ♥ Washington on August 2, 2010 at 11:47pm

luved it

Permalink Reply by M!R@ND@ on August 3, 2010 at 8:07am

OoOoOoOoO..........this dinner is going to be FUN!!!!!!!!! Love it!

Permalink Reply by girly wolf on August 3, 2010 at 11:08am

love it

Permalink Reply by evermore Sweet on August 3, 2010 at 12:23pm

this is really good

Permalink Reply by Twilight Chick on August 3, 2010 at 5:49pm

This is super good.I can't wait to see what Charlie's assumption is about Bella and Edward's sudden engagement.The next chapter ought to be funny.I can't wait for more!

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