The Twilight Saga


Merciless Angel


Fury and vengeance lurked deep in his emerald eyes; piercing into they soul of whoever looked at him. It was his guard against ever letting anyone come in. He acted like he didn't care—that the world meant nothing to him—but I could see the agony and yearning behind the barrier. He would never admit these emotions of weakness though. Because to him showing weakness was worse than death. Live to kill, Kill to live, and love only to suffer, was his personal motto. He said he would never love anyone or anything, because there was nothing left of a soul in his body. But I didn’t believe him for a second. Angels were created to love...and he was an angel...a merciless Angel.

Please note that I started this story a long time ago, and my writing has improved a lot


Hunger. Thirst. Lust. Pain. All unavoidable things. Things that no matter what you do; they come back. Always in the back of your mind like bees--stinging your brain over and over again until you kill them. But some things don’t have to be unavoidable…things like death.

I could avoid death forever; but did I really want too? Did I want to walk this earth forever, searching for something I may never find? Did I want to fight endlessly, never loosing? This city was a clot of death, destruction, unjust behavior, and filled with monsters. Literally. Was this where I wanted to spend eternity? Did I truly want to spend eternity anywhere on this desolate earth?

The answer to all these questions is simply no. I didn't want to walk this earth forever, fighting and killing. I didn't want to stay in this empty city filled with demons. But it doesn’t matter what I want. Because I have to stay in this city and do what I was brought here to do. It’s not my choice…and it never will be. Not everything is about me of course, but the majority of things are.

Chapter 1- (Destiny's POV)

“Destiny, could you please turn your music down for one second and listen to me?” Frank commanded from beside me. I opened my eyes sighing exuberantly in the process, and paused my Ipod before turning to face him.

“What do you want Frank?” I asked, already irritated with the predictable behavior of yet another father figure.

“Don’t talk to me like you’re a pouty five year old; act your age for once.” He grumbled, his perfectly trimmed mustache twitching impatiently.

“Do you even know how old I am?” I challenged innocently. His eyes narrowed resentfully.

“You’re...” He paused, clearly stumped by the question. “...sixteen and much too young to live in Chicago by yourself.”He said a matter-of-factually.

“I’m not living by myself, I’m living with Ryan.” I told him for the fifth time. “Remember, he’s my brother. And by the way, I’m seventeen.” I stated, agitated already. Frank acted like such a know it all, yet he didn't know a thing about me. I clicked the play button on my Ipod and turned it up to block out his angered answer.

I was so sick of Frank. I had only know him for a couple of months, but it was enough of him forever. My mom had gone through many boyfriends in the last few years, and Frank was her latest. He was “stable” as she had put it. He had a retirement fund already, a steady job, and had accomplished so much. My mom thought some stability in life would be good for me.

Of course, like everything she did, she forgot to actually consider what I thought. She never took the time to think about if I even wanted a father, or wanted to meet any of her 'boy toys'. I was used to it by now, because I had met so many, but I still wasn't down with it.

I had moved so many times in the last five years from her crazes that I had actually lost count. I had traveled all over the United States and Canada, never staying anywhere for more than half a year. I never got the chance to make friends, and a boyfriend was completely out of the question.

I would go to school, and pretty much just shut up and do my work. Although sometimes I would start a few fights, disrespect the teachers, or start a fire, they couldn’t punish me because I would already be moving across the country. For the first few moves I had argued with my mom and begged her to stay, but I was accustom to it now.

Truthfully, I was always fine it just being my mom and me, but lately she had suddenly needed companionship, so I would constantly be helping get ready for dates or shopping for 'sexy clothes.' She was like a teenage girl obsessed with boys, except she wasn't actually a teen. Though she was quite young to be a mother.

Her and my dad had 'hooked up' on several occasions when they were young; one time producing my brother, and another time producing me. My mom said we were blessings, but I couldn't believe her. Her life had changed for the worst when she was fifteen, and she had been struggling ever since.

My dad left after I was a few days old, so it wasn't like I missed him. Sure, I wished my mom had someone that would balance her out, but I didn't feel the need for a male presence in my life. One bossy parent was enough.

So that's why I was moving to Chicago to live with Ryan. My mom deserved the chance to let her romance with Frank grow, and I didn't want to be an obstacle. Plus, I was sure it would be easier to live with my almost twin brother. We were the same in spirit and soul, and I was positive we would get along just fine.

Maybe this would be my new beginning. Maybe I would find the thing that would make me fight to stay there. Maybe, and maybe not. It was just a new adventure that I was ready to take on.

“Please fasten your seatbelts, we are preparing to land.” The female attendant’s voice rang over the intercom. I clicked my seatbelt in and got ready to see my newest home.

“This place is a dump.” Frank grumbled, shaking his head as the taxi drove through the cluster of cars. I couldn’t agree in the least.

In this city breathtaking city you could barely tell if it was night or day. All the lights of buildings and billboards twinkled against what part of the dark sky you could see. Throngs of people covered the sidewalks and streets. Every store I had ever heard of seemed to all be on the same street. The skyscrapers towered over all the tiny shops, and the thousands of windows reflected the bright lights.

“It’s…amazing!” I breathed as I continued to look out the window. “Look at all the lights! And the people! Their so colorful and unique!”

“Destiny, be serious! Look at all the homeless people! They cover the street like bugs. And all the prostitutes and gangs! How can anyone want to live here?” He snorted in disgust.

“How can anyone not want to live here? Think of all the cool people you could meet? And all the great parties and concerts?” I half screamed, completely blissful.

“You’re not making me feel any better Destiny. You can’t trust anyone here. Not unless you want to end up in Tokyo missing a kidney.”

“Don’t be so uptight Frank.” I rolled my eyes. I think I had finally found my favorite place in the world. I couldn’t wait to explore this giant city.

“I’m not uptight; I’m just responsible and realistic. I can’t believe your mother agreed to let you live here.” In the reflection of the window I saw him shaking his head still.

“She trusts me. She knows that I’m street smart and I can take care of myself. And she knows that Ryan will help out.” I stated in her defense.

“That boy doesn’t know the difference between drugs and candy.” Frank growled. I turned away from the window to glare at him.

“Did you just diss my brother?” I asked in awe. I loved Ryan more than anything. Ryan was my favorite person in the world, and I had missed him terribly for the last year.

“No, I just told you a fact.”

I sighed loudly and turned back to the window. I just had to get there, then Frank would be out of my life. Well, at least for a while.

“563 Greenwald Street.” The taxi driver announced as he slowed down. I scrambled out of the taxi quickly as it came to a full stop.

“This is where he lives?!!” Frank yelled in surprise. I looked up. I didn’t think it was so bad. It was rundown sure, but it was downtown, and it was better than some places I had lived as a child.

“Yup.” I replied. I opened the trunk of the taxi and grabbed my two suitcases. Frank told the taxi driver to wait for a few minutes while he got me settled in.

“He’s in 3B.” I announced as we entered the building. The inside was worse than the outside. The wallpaper was falling off, green moss piled in the corners, and it looked like it had never been dusted or cleaned. I was sure Frank wanted to say something, but he kept his lips in a tight line.

We climbed up the ancient stairs that felt like they could collapse any second if too much weight was put on them. I tried not to breath, because I was sure that the air mixed with dust and other chemical smelling substances wouldn’t be good for me.

Once we reached the third floor Frank looked like he was going to have a fit right then and there. The hallway had no visible lights, and the floorboards had huge gaps between them that looked like someone had tried to glue them together with gum. It was a comical scene, and I felt like laughing.

“Just take a deep breath.” I said calmly. Not waiting for an answer I walked forward to the door with 3B painted on it. I knocked three times. After a few seconds I heard light steps and then the door opened.

“Ryan!” I yelled. I dropped my suitcases, cringing as the floorboards shifted, and jumped into my brothers arms. His familiar smell soothed every nerve in my body. He smelt musky with a hint of mint.

“Hey baby sister. I missed you.” He whispered into my hair. I pulled back and inspected him. He was taller, probably around 6'1. His hair was shorter than I remembered, put in a spiky style. His eyes seemed a shade of blue darker, but his smile was same.

“I missed you too!” I said, and I gave him another hug.

“Nice to see you again Ryan.” Frank said politely as he stepped forward sticking his meaty hand out awkwardly.

“Always a pleasure.” Ryan said as he shook his hand.

“Nice place you have here.” Frank said sarcastically. Ryan nodded, stifling a laugh.

“Come in.” Ryan said moving to the side, his arm still around my waist. Frank looked over into the small, messy apartment and shook his head.

“Wish I could, but I have a taxi waiting downstairs. And I’m sure Destiny is sick of me.” He said quickly.

“Um…Thanks for bringing me Frank. Tell my mom I will call her tomorrow.” I said civily.

“Sure, sure. Have fun kids.” He urged. He reached out and squeezed my arm then turned back to shuffle down the dark hallway.

I turned to smile at Ryan, and he smiled back. Then he stuck out his hand and gestured to the door.

“Ladies first.”

I grinned, feeling more at home than I ever had before.

*note* All characters are mine, along with the plot and ideas

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Chapter 4-
When I woke up I could feel my eyes were blurry. I opened them, and when all I saw was darkness I began to rub my eyes, but the darkness didn’t disappear. Where was I? What happened? The last thing I remembered was being in the car and the sword….

I reached my arms out and with my left I immediately felt a cold wall. I leaned to the right a bit and I felt something metal. I ran my hand down it, and came to the conclusion that it was a lamp. I found the small switch and flipped it.

I was blinded for a second from the bright light, and then I realized where I was. I was back in my room in Ryan’s apartment. I looked down at myself. I was still wearing the same jeans and hoodie, and the cuts on my arms were gone.

I stood up slowly and opened my door. I walked out into the living room and almost had a heart attack when I saw Ryan standing in the kitchen. He was on the phone again, and he was playing with a small orange container of tiny white pills.

“Ryan?” I said insecurely. His head jerked towards me and he hung up the phone and slipped the bottle of pills into his jeans pockets.

“Uh…nice to see you’re finally up.” He sputtered.

“What happened? The last thing I remember was being in the car…” I mumbled as I walked forward.

“What are you talking about Destiny? When I came home you were in your bed sleeping. You must have came home and fell asleep. Don’t you remember?” He asked softly.

I tried to remember, but I couldn’t. I couldn’t remember how I had gotten here. I didn’t remember anything. “No Ryan, I got kidnapped by these two guys…they were cannibals or something. Then someone stabbed a sword through Lucifer’s head…” I mumbled trying to remember.

Ryan chuckled. “Wow Destiny, you must be smoking something weird if you’re having those kinds of dreams.” Then he turned back to the counter and pulled an Arby’s hamburger out of a paper bag. “Hungry?”

I nodded and took the wrapped burger. He was right, I must have been dreaming. But it had been so real. I had felt the glass cut in to me, but there were no cuts on my arms to prove it. I turned and shuffled back to my room.

I sat down on my bed and gingerly ate my burger. After I was done I laid down on my bed realizing how tired I still was…

I felt the pain seething through my body, like an electric current running through a wire. For some reason I felt like I was floating. Maybe I was dead. Maybe I was floating to heaven. Although I always thought I would go to hell…

Suddenly the flying sensation was gone, and I could feel I was lying down against concrete. I didn’t know if I wanted to open my eyes, I was afraid of what I would see. But I opened them anyway to see something the opposite of scary; I saw the most beautiful face in the world.

I could feel the pressure on my lungs as I didn’t breathe, but I ignored it. His face, was so….perfect. It was the green-eyed boy I had seen this morning, and up close he was breath taking.

His eyes were the color of the greenest grass, like the kind in the golf course. His lips were a shade darker than most boys, but it didn’t look like he was wearing makeup or anything. His pale face was without a single bump or blemish, and his hair was the color of the night sky.

“Are you okay?” A silky voice said from somewhere. I realized with wonder that it came from his lips. “Are you okay?” He repeated again, and I felt my dream was ending.

“I…I—“ I stuttered. I couldn’t say anything. I felt like such an idiot.

“Good your alive, I thought that maybe the sight of my face had killed you.” He chuckled sadly. I couldn’t understand why he would say that, was he trying to be funny or did he really think he was ugly?

“I-where…h-how…”I stuttered some more, I couldn’t control my voice. He smiled the smallest smile then he stood up. I pulled myself up on my elbows and took a deep breath.

I began to get up, and my surroundings made my knees go weak and I fell to the ground again. I was on top of a building-a tall one. I felt like I could see the entire city, it was gorgeous! All the cars and the lights, way better than riding in a taxi. Even as amazing as it was, I was never good with heights.

I felt my insides churn and I wrapped my arms around my stomach to stop myself from puking. I felt my heart beating against my ribs and I tried to calm down. I was on top of a building with a strange boy. Um….

“Pretty isn’t it?” The boy said in his velvet voice. I nodded quickly not wanting to stutter again. I closed my eyes tightly, praying that I wouldn’t puke. When I felt that my insides were under control, I got up, without looking down.

He was sitting on the edge of the building, his legs hanging off the edge. I got chills down my spine just watching him. “W-what h-happened? The last thing I remember was being in a car.” I said, barely stuttering this time.

“What do you think happened?” He asked.

“I don’t know, I just know that they were cannibals.” He laughed loudly and shook his head.

“Don’t laugh at me. I’m serious; they said they were going to eat me!” I yelled. I had a bad temper, and the last place I wanted to lose it was on a rooftop.

“Oh I don’t doubt that they would eat you, but they weren’t cannibals.” He said strictly. My head spun in confusion.

“I don’t have any idea what you’re talking about.”

“I know you don’t.” He smiled and got up.

“So, who are you?” I asked.

Instead of answering me he stuck his hand out and slowly tucked one finger after the other. “Five, four, three…”

I was about to ask him what he was doing when his last finger went down and I felt the darkness again.

When I woke up I was angry. What the hell was with my dreams lately? It didn’t feel like a dream, it felt like a memory. And it would explain what happened in the car…but it couldn’t be true. I couldn’t have been on a roof with the green-eyed boy, for one, he wasn’t real, and two I would remember it- not dream it.

But why would I dream about two things that were connected, and why would they feel so real. What were those pills that Ryan had? Could he have drugged me? I erased the thought from my mind as soon as I thought of it. Ryan would never do anything to hurt me. I just didn’t know what to do…or what to believe…

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