Minn's Story

this story was written by me. i roleplay this young fox and people wonder why she is who she is. this is why. minn was named after minn from minn and co (twilight fantasy group). here is her story

i also need more banners if anyone wants to make me one

made by amber

made by makrasha

chapter index

chapter 1-page 1

chapter 2-page 2

chapter 3-page 3

chapter 4-page 4

chapter5-coming soon!

Tags: animal, fox, killer, minn, omega, scared, scourge

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Permalink Reply by §ǝsoЯ ʞɔɐןβ{{CяαƵʏ ℓαcɛʏ}} on July 5, 2010 at 12:25pm

I love it!!

Permalink Reply by ♥Shadow Aria Luna Black♥ on July 5, 2010 at 12:27pm

lol thank you!

Permalink Reply by ♥Shadow Aria Luna Black♥ on July 7, 2010 at 12:26pm

CHAPTER 2

“Holly the thing has been asleep for a week now, “says Rose.
“Now it’s old enough to learn more,” replies Holly.
I blink my eyes open. My body still aching, wounds were becoming infected because they were not healed.
“It’s alive at least” says Holly. I look around scared, my ears plastered to my head. “It will and does not deserve a name, so you may call it omega.” I get up, ignoring the pain, and go to sniff at Holly. She flips me onto my back. I whimper scared, I didn’t want to hurt her.
“Submission” she says as she growls into my face. I repeated it very scared and begin to shake. “good” she says. I get up and look on scared as the two kits appear next to Rose.
“Mom can I eat it? I’m hungry and it’s a whiney pathetic little scrap of fur,” says the larger kit.
“You must learn to lead and rule starting with the scrap of fur,” replies Holly.
Holly nudges them towards me and to take turns attacking me and taunting me. I lie there not trying to put up a fight at all. I repeatedly felt claws and teeth dig into my skin and make me bleed. I was hot, hungry, and tired. Blood covered my fur and it was still flowing out of all my wounds. I fell asleep and felt relief from the constant pain, I never wanted to go back again.
I felt teeth rip into me and I wake up scared. I see Sweeney and the ground. He was carrying me by my tail and dragging my head along. I whined scared of the new punishment. Sweeney ignored my desperate whines and continued on. He talked to rose and Holly.
“When my father was alpha he would take omega pups and leave them out in the woods. If they come back they can permanently stay as omega within the pack or be traded.” Explained Sweeney
Sweeney throws me into a river. The cold water hits me and I panic. I didn’t know how to swim. I go under the water. My body was freezing from the water and I gasp for breath. The current fought against me. My pelt becoming wet and dragged me down, as I fought to go back up.. I close my eyes this was the end.
All of a sudden, I see a huge figure with kind eyes and nudged me up. I look at it, it seemed nice but for now I must trust it my life depends on it. The figure told me to move my legs. I did what it said, and moved my legs hard and hard forcing them to work hard. I repeated that until I could no longer feel my body, but then my foot hit something. It was land. I paddled on forward. I gripped onto it with all my might. A huge wave suddenly crashed over me pushing me down. I moved on back to the surface and onto firm ground. I dug my nails into the ground clinging to it. I walked a little then collapsed. I was tired. Out of breath, soaked, hungry, and alone.
I woke up at dawn. The first rays of sun just peaking through. I was on a branch, clinging on. I was so out of it. But how did I end up there? Wasn’t I on land? There was no time to think of that anymore. Land was coming into view. I jumped off with the last of my strength, my body ached. I walked a little then fell down from exhaustion and I lie there asleep again.
I woke up still exhausted and sore. I struggled to my paws, I had to keep moving. At least I was dried off a little. I walked for a really long time. It was hard to do, since I couldn’t feel my feet. I opened my mouth. What was that? I know that scent! It was…Sweeney! And Holly and Rose! I ran forward, for getting my pain in my excitement.
“Hmmmmmm Omega came back after all. I guess she shall be brought in and learn our ways,” announced Sweeney to all the other foxes.

Permalink Reply by Bella Cullen on July 8, 2010 at 12:27pm