The Twilight Saga


His eyes met mine and deep inside, as my heart started to pound in my chest, I felt whole. For the first time in my life. A feeling so great I couldn't that I had lived so long without it. He smiled at me then and I knew he felt it too!! I knew I would never be the same!! He was my future no matter what happens. I don't know why but in this very moment I realized I was very deeply in love with a guy I just met!!!

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Thanks!! I have the first three chapters written!!! I'll update soon!!
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Thanks for the comments here is chapter one:

Lost. I couldn't believe it!! I was completely lost!! Damn it!! My name is Rachel Henderson and I was headed for Forks, Washington to start my new job.I needed to be there today and get lost. Man this sucks!! Why did this happen to me?!! My life sucks at this very moment.I looked at the map again hoping to make sense of it but I couldn't. I knew for a fact that I was in Washington but as for where I don't have a clue. I put down my map and sigh oh well I'll just keep driving till I get there. After driving for a while I start to lose hope until I drive into an amazing place. I couldn't tell if it was real or if I was just dreaming it up after driving for so long. I parked my car and got out to stretch and looking to see if there was anyone who could give me directions. I saw a guy at the end of the street and started walking towards him. He was super tall and very hot. I mean his muscles were very impressive and I was thinking what the hell does this guy do to look that good!!! I looked into his eyes when I got close and they were very breath taking, a deep brown that was almost black and they seemed warm some how. Of course by this time I had stopped in front of him and was staring very rudely at him with my mouth hanging open. "Hi." he said with a smirk on his face. I managed to close my mouth and of course blush. "Hi" I managed to get out of my suddenly dry mouth. He lost his smile as he looked at me his face showing his concern. "Are you ok, miss?" "What?!! Oh!! Yea, sorry!!!" I said and smiled lamely at him. Get a grip on yourself, Rachel, I thought as he smiled back. "OK!!! I'm Jacob Black by the way. What brings you to La Push?" "My name is Rachel Henderson. It's nice to meet you, Jacob. I'm lost and I was looking for a town called Forks. Have you heard of it?" "Nice to meet you too, Rachel and yea Forks isn't to far from here. Let me give you directions." I breathed a sigh of relief. "Really?!! Thanks so much. Umm I'm kinda bad with directions so could you write it down please?" I blushed at that and to my horror he laughed at me. "Sure I'd be glad to, but if you didn't mind I could ride along with you. I've been meaning to go down to Forks for a while now." "Yea, that'd be great!!" I said excitedly. "Umm I mean sure I'd be glad to give you a ride." I smiled at him and started walking back to my car thinking this day just got a whole lot better!!!

Of course it got better!! you're talking to Jacob and he is going to be in your car!! halloo!! LOL

Write more sooon! looove it!!

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Chapter two!!

"So." Jake said. I jumped in surprise. " Oops sorry. I didn't mean to scare you."                                                             "It's ok." I said even though my heart was pounding in my chest, which was weird. I mean just because all he said so far was directions to Forks didn't mean I had to over react when he spoke a little louder then before. "I just wasn't expecting you to talk. Umm I just meant..."                                                                                                                               He laughed " It's ok, Rachel, I know what you mean." He chuckled even more when I blushed.                                         "So you were going to say something?"                                                                                                                 "What? Oh yea!! Sorry I got distracted." He winked at me when he said that. "What brings you to Forks?"                       "I just got a job in Forks."                                                                                                                                           "Oh really? Where?"                                                                                                                                                 "At the police station. Though from what they said it's pretty quit up here."                                                                     "Really? That's cool, I know Chief Swan personally. Yea it's usually very quit up here only the occasional problem. Welcome to Forks!!!" he said.                                                                                                                                     I looked around amazed, Forks is a tiny town but I think it's cute. "It's nice. I like it."                                                       "Yea, Forks is a really nice place. There's the police station over there. Do you have a place to live yet?" he asked. "Umm no. I was hoping that Chief Swan could tell me of someplace to stay." At this point I had parked the car and was looking around as I got out.                                                                                                                                   "Hmm well I don't know of anyplace in Forks where you could live. Hey you could live in La Push. It's not that far away and I know a place you could stay!!"                                                                                                                   "Really?" I asked, excited. This meant I could get to know Jacob and if he was available if not maybe he had friends as hot as him. "That would be great!! Thanks Jacob!!"                                                                                                       "Call me Jake and it's no problem."                                                                                                                             "OK Jake. I hate to run but I'm kinda late. I guess I'll talk to you later then?"                                                               "Yea bye, Rachel." he smiled and walked away                                                                                                           I took a deep breath and walked inside. A woman looked up and asked, "Can I help you, miss?"                                     "Yes, is Chief Swan in?"                                                                                                                                        "He's in his office. Go on in, hon."                                                                                                                   "Thanks" I walked over and knocked on the door and waited until I heard a muffled come in. "Hello, Chief Swan."               "Hello. Can I help you, miss?"                                                                                                                             "Yes, sir!! Sorry I'm late!! I'm Rachel Henderson you're new employee!!" I said as I shook his hand and sat down. My life just keeps getting better I thought as Charlie explained my new job to me. Yea I know I'm gonna like living here!!

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Chapter 3!!

Two hours later, after I was done talking to Charlie, I walked out to my car. I glanced up for a second and then had to look again. Jacob was leaning up against my car waiting for me. "Umm hey, Jake. I didn't expect you to wait for me." "Oh it's no problem I didn't want you to get lost trying to get back to La Push." He winked at me me as he as he finished talking. Crap!! I thought as I blushed and glared at him. Why does he have to so damn hot. "Could you please move so I can get in?" I asked him in a deadly but sweet voice. "Sure" he said as his grin widened and he winked at me again as if he had heard my thoughts. "So how was your meeting with Charlie?" "It went great." I said forgetting my anger. I told about the whole thing on the way back to La Push. "Sounds awesome." he said. "Yea, it should be great." I said as I got out of the car and looked around. "You said there was a place I could live here in La Push?" "Yea, follow me." He lead me to a nice little place and I fell in love with it right away. "Oh I love it. It's so cute!!" He barked a laugh and then tried to cover it by coughing as I turned to glare at him. "What is so funny? I'm a police officer and I'm trained in martial arts. Don't mess with me, Black." He laughed again at the scowl on my face and just said, "I'm shaking in my boots." though he was only shaking because he was laughing so hard. "So do you want a tour?" I glared at him for two more seconds then nodded my head. "Lead the way." He smiled and opened the door. "It's kinda small. That's the kitchen, dining room, living room, and down the hall you have the bathroom, and two small bedrooms. It's a nice place." I walked around the whole house and came back to the living room where he waited. "It's perfect." I said. "I absolutely love it!!" We walked back outside to my car and I was about to thank Jake when a group of half-naked guys came our way. My mouth dropped and I thought what the hell do they feed these guys. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Jake smirk and then I heard him chuckle. I turned to glare at him just as the guys stopped next to us. "Hey, Jake, what's up man? Who's the hottie?!!" I blushed as I looked at them. Man my life is totally awesome right now, I thought as Jake introduced everyone to me.

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