My Immortal

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Permalink Reply by Blanca*1D_Vashappening!*♥ on July 2, 2012 at 5:39pm

Sounds good! :)

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 3, 2012 at 10:52am

Thanks :)

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 3, 2012 at 10:50am

Chapter 1:

Sophia’s Pov:

 

“The world has never faced a greater threat then it faces now. Only 5 people can save us, the fate of out world rests in their hands. They will be chosen at random, once chosen there is no turning back. Each a different specie.” A voice on the radio said. “They must work together, even if they are enemies, friends, lovers, or they don’t know each other. We are counting on you.”

I sighed wondering who the 5 people were going to be. I bit my lip as they listed the names. “And the 5 chosen ones are: “Sophia Emma Blackwater, Patrick Micheal Connors, Lilly Rosaria Wood and Dorian Charles Gray.” They said 4, they were missing one, one was missing, surely they either forgot one out or they did not find the 5^th one.

I swallowed when they said my name and I turned paler then a ghost. They also picked out Patrick my best friend. Why was this happening? Why me? Why us? I sighed and got up from my bed and looked into my closet and picked out what I needed. I tucked a dagger in my boot. I knew what was needed to be done, we needed to get find the last one then begin out journey. I knew all the other 3. But Poor Lilly was a human, I wondered why they would want a human to help out with this.  I packed all I needed including some weapons. I got out and saw a demon waiting outside for me he threw a fire ball at me and I dodged. I took out my dagger and with one swift motion I struck him right in the middle of the chest and he turned to ash.

I pulled out the dagger just as Patrick saw me and he ran to me “You okay Soph?” he asked looking at me.

I nodded “As okay as I can be.” I said and sighed. “Did you listen to the news?”  I said looking at him

He nodded “Yes, they are missing the last one and poor Lilly, why would they bring a human into this?”

I nodded “I know..wait they said different specie each. That puts our secret at risks to the others.” I said looking panicked slightly.

Patrick nods “Yeah, but we’ll have to work together and to do that, they will need to know what we are, when it comes it that.” He said, he was always so wise. I smiled at him and nodded then I put the dagger back in my boot.

“Should we go get Lilly first or Dorian?” I said looking at Patrick.

“Dorian first, you know why.” He said

I nodded and sighed, yes I did know why. The past Lilly and Dorian had shared together, more then one. Their love so sweet and pure, but each time she ended up dead. Poor Dorian, I could not image what it was like for him to lose her so many times, it never go any easier I suppose.  I knew the pain he felt each time. I sighed again and looked over at Patrick and smelled blood.

“It’s not human blood” He muttered under his breath and we came to the bushes and kneeled down and pulled apart some of the leaves to see a boy getting attacked by Demons.

I stood up not making a sound and pulled out bow and arrow and aimed at the demons and struck them both at the same time as the arrow split into two in the air hitting them both. I leaped over the bush and landed beside the boy on the floor “Are you alright?” I asked him as I helped him get back to his feet.

He looked at Me and nodded “Yeah I am thanks.” He said and held his hand over his wound slightly as he was bleeding. He was one of the demons that was sent down to kill the populations but he did not want to do so his own group of people turned on him. They were gonna leave him for the dead if it wasn’t for this girl. Me. I was that girl. But I had no idea about him or who and what he was.

Patrick jumped over the bushes as well “You okay Sophia?” he asked her

I nodded “Yeah no worries.” I said and ripping my jacket in half as it was on old jacket and tied it around the boys wound so it stopped the blood and I  rummaged in her bag and pulled out what was a healing potion and gave it to him to drink “This will help you.”

He looked at me and smiled softly and drinks it “Thank you Sophia.” He said

“Wait how did you know my...” I trailed off. Of course Patrick called me Sophia, that’s why. I  giggled and smiled softly “And you are?”

“I am Roger Erick Silverton.” Roger said looking at me and Patrick

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“Nice to meet you Roger, I am Sophia and that’s Patrick” I replied and smiled at him

Patrick nods “Hello” he said, he seemed a bit cautious but I had no idea why. I did not want to press this. I just saved Roger’s life. Poor boy. But I had no idea how wrong I was and that we were talking to our enemy.

“Are you the chosen one’s” Roger asked me and Patrick as he raised his eyebrow slightly curious.

I nodded “Yes we are, we need to find the other two then the last one.” I said “There’s one missing.” I said then thought about it “Would you like to come with us?” I asked him and smiled warmly at him, he seemed like was a strong lad and he was not human, I had no idea what he was yet but nothing would stop me in finding out what he was.

He nodded softly “Yeah sure, I guess I could be of help.” He said and we took of to find Dorian. I just wondered how he would explain this to Lilly. I knew Dorian remembered all the times they have been together but Lilly always did not. This was not going to be easy and I knew that losing her again on the way would be an option any of us especially Dorian would be willing to take. It always was always killing him when he lost her, he lost her too many times that no one could even count how many deaths their love has endured.

Permalink Reply by ♥Rachel♥ [ PainfullyShy ] on July 3, 2012 at 7:14pm

This is awesome!

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 4, 2012 at 5:22am

thanks Rach glad you like it :)

Permalink Reply by michalee shyarea king on July 3, 2012 at 8:28pm

Another great story by stay!
*claps*
amazing

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 4, 2012 at 5:22am

aww thanks Michalee you're making me blush lol

Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on July 4, 2012 at 3:34am

I like it, it sounds really good so far and I like the idea. Though you did have some typos but that's to be expected, no one is perfect. Haha, can't wait for more and please keep me updated! (:

-Kendra

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 4, 2012 at 5:22am

aww thank you Kendra and yeah lol. I know. soz. I'll keep you posted

Permalink Reply by Le Grazie Salvataggio on July 3, 2012 at 4:34pm

brooke ::

"this is inspiring"

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 4, 2012 at 5:23am

Aww thank you :)

Permalink Reply by Summer Love on July 4, 2012 at 10:45am

Chapter 2:

Roger’s Pov:

 

I walked beside Sophia in total silence, I looked at her every once in a while she was just so beautiful; simply breath taking and she saved my life. I was grateful to her for that but how long would she be nice to me? I asked my self. Not long, I mean I am a Demon, the enemy. But the only reason why I turned against my own kind was because I did not want to do this anymore; I did not want to kill innocent people for no reason. They then almost killed me and would have left me to die in the middle of the woods. I sighed and ran a hand in my hair.

 

Sophia looked at me “Are you okay Roger?” she asked and smiled warmly, her warm smile made my heart flatter and turn my legs to Jelly, it took all my might for me to keep standing straight and keep  walking.

 

“Yeah, I am okay” I lied. I was not okay. I was no where near okay. I kept wondering just how long I would be able to pull this off. I knew that if she found out, she would be mad I lied to her, but then I would need to come up with a good excuse as to why I lied. I could tell that Patrick suspected something about me but kept silent for the benefit of Sophia. She would probably hate me as well as him and then I would really be toast, she would probably kill me in the blink of an eye just as she did the demons. She was a tough girl, not one I would want to make mad. But sometimes lying is best if you want to protect someone.

 

“Are you sure?” She asked as she placed a hand on my shoulder stopping walking and stopping me from walking as she was right in front of me.

 

“Yeah, I am fine.” I said “Just thinking.” I said, that was not a lie. I was thinking. That’s true. But I was not going to discuss as to what my thoughts were. She just nodded but still seemed a bit unconvinced so I gave her a bright, wide smile to try and persuade her that I was really fine.

 

Patrick just raised an eyebrow at me and his blue eyes seemed to be filled with coldness, but it was replaced by warmth as soon as Sophia looked over at him and he wrapped his arm round her shoulder, they seemed like a couple but I was not sure. I looked away and kept walking and we saw a tall boy heading towards us, he had brown eyes and brown hair that was slightly longer then the mine or Patricks. I gathered that must be Dorian as he was the only other boy that was the chosen one to defeat the demons, me ............well the rest of us. I smiled at him slightly as he raised his eyebrow at me and then I noticed a young girl heading our way, she smelled human. The last one of the 5. She was rather pretty just like Sophia. But she had brown hair and she looked more petite and younger, about 15 would be best bet.

 

The girl stopped dead in the tracks when she saw the other tall boy who I assumed would be Dorian and she titled her head at him slightly, I looked between them he seemed to look stoned, like he was in rather big shock. I then just noticed Sophia giving him the look that seemed to say. Be careful, you know she won’t remember you like you do her.

 

I wondered why she would not know the boy, mhh memory loss most likely. I told my self. I looked at Sophia “What is going on between them two?” I whispered to her.

 

“It’s a long story, I’ll try and explain it later.” She whispered back. “That’s Lilly and that’s Dorian” she said now speaking louder so everyone heard.

 

Lilly smiled softly at us all “Hello.” She said, she stood by Sophia, that showed she knew her and Patrick, but it seemed she did not know Dorian or me, well as for me. Duh! Of course not.

 

“Hi, I am Roger.” I said and held out my hand to her and saw Dorian raised his eyebrow at me and my hand fell to my side but Lilly caught it in her shaking it before Dorian could even utter a word, he seemed rather protective over her for some reason.

 

“Nice to meet you Roger.” Lilly said and she then turned to Dorian and she smiled warmly and held out hand to him to shake by he just stared at her hand, like he was afraid to touch it for some reason “You okay?” she asked Dorian.

 

“Huh...oh yeah me?” He said, his voice sounded rather deep. “Oh yeah, I am food...I meant good.” He said

 

Lilly giggled a bit when he said he’s food.  She then seemed to look at Dorian a bit closer “You seem really familiar have we met before?” she asked him as she smiled warmly at him and her hand fell back down to her side again.

 

He shakes head “No...no we haven’t.” He said, but the way he said, it sounded a bit of a lie to me. I really did wonder what was going on, but it was non of my business, what ever was going or what ever did happen between them was their own business. Right?

 

“Umm, okay then. If you say so.” She said, she seemed a bit disappointed then she turned to face Sophia “So what are we going to do about this? I mean there’s 5 of us and goodness knows how many of them and we’re supposed to save the rest of the world?” she said, she sounded a bit panicked and her voice was rather high pitched right from the beginning she started to talk to Sophia, she was hyperventaling.

 

“Lilly, calm down, just breathe.” Sophia said as she put her hand on Lilly’s shoulder and tried to calm her down so Lilly did not pass out.

 

Lilly nodded “Yeah, right Breathe...Brea...” she tried to say Breathe twice to calm her self down but she passed down and I caught her in my arms as I was closest to her and Sophia. I looked at Sophia who seemed worried as well.

 

Dorian was just stiff with wide eyes, I raised my eyebrow at him slightly. He was acting very, very odd.

 

Lilly’s Pov:

I layed there out cold, and I slipped into one of my dreams, jut it somehow felt like a distant memory. I felt the warm sun seeping into my skin, it did not burn, even though it was hot on my cool skin. The water was pure blue and the sun was illuminated in the water. It was like a bouncing ball skidding across the water. I heard a rustle in the tree and span around “Who is it?” I asked, my accent was a thick Spanish one. I was in living in Spain around the year 1839.

 

A rather tall boy walked out from the bushes, he was rather handsome and seemed fair skinned, bit tanned as it was always rather sunny in Spain especially in the middle of the summer “Sorry, I....I was just..” he seemed to stumble over his words.

 

“You were just what?” I asked him as I smiled softly at him.

 

“Looking for my watch.” He said. I raised my eyebrow at him as I noticed he had his watch on his wrist, maybe he found it and put it on before he walked out.

 

I nodded “Umm well you found it. So it would seem.” I said and crossed my arms slightly as the wind picked up and blew my hair into my face, as I looked at him, the boy seemed very familiar to me, like I knew and met him somewhere before. Mhh odd. “I am Lillian.” I said

 

“Dorian.” He said and he gave me the most bright and angelic smile, I ever seen a boy give me.

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