The Twilight Saga

This is my 2nd story to post up here. I also wrote 'Cullens Truth or Dare' Tell me whay you think! Thank you so much! Love yall!

Think that Bella was the last one to be changed... well think again.
What happens when Carlisle has to unexpectedly turn someone... will the keep
it, abandon it, or give it to something greater... the Cullen’s will face new
battles, and learn who to trust...

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My New Star.

Chapter 1. All goes black.

My name is Macey Tayler. This is my story.

“Addison! Stop it!!” I laughed. We were out in the forest, it was after midnight, and I was playing around with my older brother Addison. He’s eighteen, and so is my older sister, Caitlin, they are twins. Then there is my other older sister, Meredith, she’s almost nine-teen, just eighteen months older than Caitlin and Addison. And last, but certainly not least, is my little brother, Beckett, he’s just nine, and I’m fourteen. The five of us had to stick together, we didn’t have it, as most people would call easy. It was hard, but we had each other, and our loving mother. But our father, he’s a whole different story.
“Make me!” He laughed as he hurled another pine cone down at me. He was up in a tree, that immature fool, and was now throwing pinecones at me. I would have gone up there to get him, but sadly I am probably the least coordinated person you will ever meet.
“There you are!! We have to get home!! Dad will be home any minute!!” Caitlin said, out of breath as she ran up. Oh, no. If we weren’t there when dad got back, it would be serious trouble. We all started running back towards the house, through the dark dreary forest, but oddly enough this had always seemed to provide comfort, we came out here a lot. Our father hated it when we came out here, we didn’t know why, but the only time we saw him was when he stumbled in the door at night, or when he wanted more money from our mother. He hadn’t always been this way, he used to be the picture perfect father, came home in a suite around seven every night to have dinner with the family, read us bedtime stories, and kiss us goodnight. But, after he lost his job, he started off as just sitting around the house, doing nothing, then he started drinking, smoking, doing drugs, and hurting us. He had just gone down hill until he had hit rock bottom, and he had to drag us all down with him. Mom wanted a divorce, we all wanted that with all our hearts, and for him to have no custody of us, but he wouldn’t let her, when ever she brought it up, he would beat her, and all of us. So that leaves us where? With a drunk father who does drugs and beats his children and wife. Lovely. I had tripped again, Addison pulled me up with out missing a step, man had he gotten good at that.
We finally made it to the house, Meredith and Beckett were standing in the back yard waiting for us.
“Thank goodness! I thought he was going to get here before you did!” Meredith said with a sigh. We all ran in the house and jumped onto the couch like we had been there all night, we would usually wait for our father to get home, or else he would freak out. We switched the TV on and waited, he should be here any minute. Just as Beckett was about to doze off, leaning against my shoulder, we heard loud tire screeching and a car hit some thing. We all jumped and ran out side to see our fathers car barely miss a tree, we could see the damage he had already done, it was bad, everything from mail boxes to trashcans, to small trees, were down. Right then, he turned sharply, and the car was headed straight towards us. He was absolutely drunk, no surprise. My first instinct was to push Beckett out of the way, I pushed him all the way over to a near tree, far out of the way. Just out of the corner of my eye I saw that Meredith had pushed Caitlin and Addison that way too. She was just about to pull my that way too, I could feel her hand on my wrist, then I felt an unimaginable pain. It went black.
I woke again, to yelling and screaming, and pain so deep I didn’t even know what to do. I pulled my eyes open as much as possible and looked over to find Addison unconscious in a chair next to me, I could hear Meredith screaming. No. He couldn’t hurt her again, no, no, no. I wanted to get up and help her, to protect her. But I just couldn’t move, my body wouldn’t let me. Then my father stumbled into the room, still wasted.
"Well, look who decided to get up." He stumbled over his words. I didn’t answer. "You answer when I speak to you!!" He screamed unnecessarily, and I felt his fist collide with my face. I was free falling into unconsciousness again. The last thing I saw was Caitlin storm into the room and start yelling at my father. He turned slowly towards her. Then I passed out again.

And that puts me where I am now, I lay here, coughing, with barely enough energy to lift my hand or keep my eyes open. I could hear the beeping of the heart monitor, the quiet dripping sound of my I.V., and my mother’s soft breathing, she was sleeping in a chair next to my bed, she held my hand tightly. Other than that, it was eerily quiet. It was difficult to just fill my lungs with air on my own. I didn’t even know what time it was, all I knew was that I had been here for much too long. A nurse came in the door, checked the monitors, and had a slight frown on her face, which worried me. She left the room with out a sound, so I laid my head back down on the pillows and closed my eyes. I heard the door opening again, so I opened my eyes as far as they could go, and saw the very pale but handsome blonde man, that had come to visit my room more than a doctor would usually visit, come in with the nurse who had just been here. He smiled at me, I tried as hard as I could to smile back, but it was hard.

“How are you, Macey?” He asked me in a sweet, almost fatherly voice.
“Will I ever get to leave this place? More importantly, when can I get out of this stupid gown, its atrocious! ” I breathed, I didn’t think he would hear me, but he did, he always seemed to.
“I get the feeling you would get along very well with my daughter, Alice.” He said to me, and brushed the hair out of my face. He was like a father to me. I loved him like my father. Considering my biological father was never much of a father to me, he was the reason I was here. I tear escaped my eye, Dr. Cullen brushed it away.
“That’s not an answer, Dr. Cullen.” I said and I tried to smile, and almost succeeded.
“You are one of the only people I have ever met who can find a reason to smile when life gives you a thousand reasons to frown.” He told me with a grin. A small giggle escaped my lips. “That’s why so many people love to be around you.”

He turned and checked the monitors, and frowned slightly, but quickly composed his face again. “You never gave me an answer, Dr. Cullen.” I raised an eyebrow and gave him a joking incredulous look. He laughed.

“If I have anything to do with it, you’ll be just fine, I promise.” He told me with a smile and patted my arm. I nodded. He left the room with the nurse, who had watched our whole exchange. There was something different about Dr. Cullen. There was something that told me he was a danger, but it was easy to over look that. I trusted him. He made me feel safe; he made me feel like I was already his daughter. He really felt like he was my father.

My mother raised her head, wiped the sleep from her eyes, and yawned quietly.
“How are you sweetie?” She asked in a motherly, loving, tone.
“As well as some one could be in this place.” I answered her. That was a lie, I just couldn’t stand to see her worried, but she knew. They told me I probably only had about three days left to live. This was all my fathers fault. I wouldn’t be here in this place if it weren’t for him. But for some weird reason, I felt like this was some sort of turning point in my life. But, I had a feeling that I was going to survive, despite what the doctors said. I trusted what Dr. Cullen had said. My mother smiled at me, but you could see the pain in her eyes.

“Here, do you want me to turn the T.V. on?” She asked. I nodded my head. She switched the T.V. on, and started flipping through the channels, and settled on one. I started to laugh quietly.
“What is it?” She asked.
“You know, Mom, I’d rather not watch E.R. while I’m here, Thanks.” I laughed.
She started laughing too. “Good point!” We laughed. Then Dr. Cullen came back into the room. He smiled at us.

“Macey, your laughter is like a virus. You seem to spread it everywhere.” He smiled at me. “Ms. Tayler, they have a few questions they want to ask you at the front desk. If you would like, I’ll stay here with Macey while you answer them.” He was talking to my mom. She nodded and got up from her chair.

“I’ll be back in a minute, Sweetie.” She leaned over and kissed my forehead, then left the room.

“Macey, I have a question to ask you.” He walked toward my bed, and sat in the chair my mom had been sitting in previously.

“Yeah?” I asked.
“Do you trust me?” He asked carefully.
“Of course.” I answered without hesitation.
“Would you trust me with your life?”
“Yes.” I said, again with out hesitation.
“Ok, that’s all I needed to know. Thank you, Macey.” He said sounding almost sad, and almost solemn. I was very confused by his question. Then, almost if on queue, my mother came back in, with tears streaming down her face.

“What is it, Mom?” I asked quietly, then I started coughing again, with small gasps in between them. I was having a hard time breathing, despite the breathing tubes, around my nose. I tried with all my energy to fill my lungs with enough oxygen, but couldn’t. My mother gasped. That was the last thing I saw before everything went black.
what's happening? this is going to be such a nice story!
:) you'll have to wait and see!! It'll be up in the next chapterrrrr!

That yall SOOOO much for my first comments!!!!!!!!! KEL AND <3FEARLESS ARE AMAZINGG!!!
your such an amazing writter keep it up!
cant wait for more :)
Hey Tami! Well, they kinda didnt have a choice but to change her, she was dying. And shes not so young that she would be a problem w/ the volturi so i decided it could work! Andd its not really my name, i just like it :) lol! Call me a loser! Ahah! Thanks for the comment thou!
wow great story plz continue
thank you very much twilighter08!!
HEY! Chapter two!! Thank yall so much!!! This chapter is dedicated to Kel,<3Fearless, Irene, and Tami! Thank you so much for my first few comments!!


Carlisle POV

Alice had told me that this young girl, who had been through so much, was soon going to join our family. Her name was Macey Tayler. She was a really sweet little girl. Macey had this uncanny way to just make the room light up with her smile; she just made you want to be happy. She had a dark caramel colored ringlet curls a few inches past her shoulder, she had originally had a beautiful tan face, but she was so pale and flushed from being so sick. I had no idea how anyone could hurt this young girl, so innocent, so loving, so sweet. I already saw her as one of my daughters.

I was going to check in on her again. I think this may be the last time I really have to go check in this particular room for her. I walked up the hallway and could already hear her laughing along with her mother. She was such a sweetheart.
“Macey, your laughter is like a virus. You seem to spread it everywhere.” I smiled at her. “Ms. Tayler, they have a few questions they want to ask you at the front desk. If you would like, I’ll stay here with Macey while you answer them.” They wanted to ask her if it was ok to move Macey to a quarantined area. This was upon my request. Macey only had days, maybe, left to live, if I didn’t “save” her. I had to. She had too much to give, to pass away now. She is so young though, only 14, but could very easily pass for 16 or 17about 5' 5. But she’s not so young that it would cause a problem with the Volturi.

Her mother left the room with a swift kiss to Macey’s forehead. I went and sat by Macey’s side, in the chair that her mother had recently been sitting. “Macey, I have a question to ask you.” She smiled at me.

“Yeah?” She asked, curiously.
“Do you trust me?” I asked very carefully.
“Of course.” I answered without hesitation.
“Would you trust me with your life?”
“Yes.” She said, again with out hesitation.
“Ok, that’s all I needed to know. Thank you, Macey.” I said, hoping she couldn’t hear the sadness in my voice that I could even hear. I could tell she heard it. Then her mother came in the room. She was in tears. I felt terrible, I wish I could make this easier on her.
“What is it, Mom?” Macey asked worriedly. Then she started coughing terribly, and gasping for air in between coughs, she couldn’t get enough air in her lungs, she was going to pass out. Her mother gasped and I quickly picked Macey up and started out the door with her mother right behind me. Macey was already unconscious. There was a stretcher already next to me, so I put her down on it quickly and ran her to the emergency room.
“I’m sorry, Ms. Tayler, but you’ll have to stay here.” I said with a frown. She started to protest “I promise, I will do all that I can to save her, I promise.” I said with so much reverence in my voice she gave me a slight smile and a nod. I could see that she really trusted me. I ran her back to the E.R. and started to see if it was possible to save her, while keeping her human.

Ms. Tayler’s POV

Dr. Cullen was wheeling my baby down to the E.R. There was, obviously, something very, very wrong.
“I’m sorry, Ms. Tayler, but you’ll have to stay here.” I was starting to protest but he stopped me before I could say anything. “I promise, I will do all that I can to save her, I promise.” I knew that he was going to do everything in his power, I knew he was different, I knew that he would save my beloved daughter in a way that no human could. He was most definitely not human. I have noticed so many things about him that just aren’t what humans do. It was strange. I knew that this could possibly be the last time I saw her. But I knew for a fact that he would save her. I didn’t know how, but I just knew.

Macey POV.

It was all white. Not black, like you would think, but white. It was so eerie. I didn’t like it at all. But I knew I wasn’t dead. Death is peaceful, this, yeah, not so much. It is one of the most discomforting things ever. I had no idea what was going on. I felt people pricking me with needles, and putting all sorts of machinery on me, and I felt in particular two very cold hands trying to get air flowing in my lungs again. Wait! I wasn’t breathing! I tried to suck a breath in, but couldn’t. I couldn’t do anything. I tried to move, but I absolutely could not move a muscle. It was the most terrifying thing ever. Then everything went absolutely black, almost like they turned off the lights. I drifted into unconsciousness.

Carlisle POV.

She wasn’t going to make it. There was no way I could save her, at least while keeping her human. I knew that this could be a huge mistake, but a strong thought told me it was not a mistake. It told me it was the right thing to do. It was late in the night, almost no one was there. I needed to go talk to Mrs. Tayler. I got Macey to the point where I could hook her up to a breathing machine; she would only need it for a few minuets. I walked out to where she had been waiting for almost four hours.

“Ms. Tayler, I’m so sorry.” I started, she knew exactly what I meant, but some thing told me that she knew that Macey would be alright. But I could also see that she knew she could no longer be with Macey. “There is nothing I can do for her here.” I said.
“Then take her where ever you need to go to make her well again.” She told me with no emotion in her voice at all. “I know that you can save her in a way that no one else can. I don’t care if I can never see her again, but please, I just want her to live longer than this, she has so much potential to do so much good. Please, I’m begging you.” She pleaded. I looked her straight in the eye and nodded.
“Would you like to see her once more?” I asked softly. She nodded her head. I lead her to where Macey was, and let them be alone for as long as Ms. Tayler needed.

Ms. Tayler POV.

I walked up to my sweet daughters’ bed. I knew she was meant to live for so much more than she had already. “Macey, I love you with all my heart. I know that life has been tough on you, but I know you can hold on a little bit longer. I believe that you will go on to do wonderful things; you are such a beautiful young woman. I may never get to see you again, but know this, if someone could ask for anyone as a daughter, you are number one on that list. I have been blessed beyond comprehension to get to be your mother for these past 14 years, and there are no words for how much I love you. I hope I get to see you again, but if I don’t, know that you are the most important thing to me. I love you sweetheart.” I kissed her forehead and left the room with a single tear escaping my eye.
Macey POV.

I could hear my mom speaking to me, it was the sweetest sound I have ever heard. But she was talking as if I was never going to see her again. I was trying to yell to her that it would all be ok, and that I would come home, but I couldn’t. My body wouldn’t let me. She said things that I will never forget as long as I live, how ever long that may be. At this point, I have no idea. Then my mom left the room, I could tell she was sad, but at the same time I could feel that she was proud. It was a moment before I heard the door open again then the two cold hands that I had grown to recognize we under me and I was flying. I had no idea what was happening. But I literally could not open my eyes. After a few seconds of “flying” I was set on a hard table. What was happening? I could hear more people’s voices. But I had no idea what they were saying, I couldn’t breath..
Ok, i'm going to update on wednesday, thats when it all kinda unfolds, you see whats up with this new person and yeah, it'll all work out, lol i'm hoping! Thank you! R&R please!!! LOVE YA!!!! i really do!
yeah! a new chaoter :D and dedicated to me! loveya Macey :)

♥ - a heart for you
Wooh! My only reply for this chap! I'm kinda thinkin of not posting anymore of this story on this website.... there are SO many stories that no one even ever sees any of mine, it makes me sad :( but yeah, if you could mention this to some ppl maybe?? That would make you the most amazing person on the face of the earth! lol!! Love ya fearless!!!!
i think most people just havent been online to see it! you could try sending it to the whole group or something, but i'll definitely introduce this to my friends ^^ continue writing, if you move the story, tell me!!


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