The Twilight Saga

This story involes the cullens ( dont worry) but they dont come into the story until later.
Some of these charictars belong to stephanie meyer and some belong to me.
This is my 1st story, tell me what you think, and be honest NO holding back, please dont spare my feelings, i can handle critism
btw if you want updates and yuor not already a friend of mine send a request, that how i let my peeps no i have updated

My Night of Death, My day of life

Chapter 1

"Bella, honey we'll be back by 11:30 at the latest. Nicole and Derick can come over if they want to, but no one else. Do you hear me?" my mom asked me jiggling my locked door.
i walked over to the door and opened it.
"Mom, dont you trust me, i've never thrown wild parties or snuck boys in, much less sneak out."
"Well i guess your right, its just hard being able to trust a 17 year old as much as i do."
"Renee! Were going to be late if we dont leave now! i mean were bound to run into traffic."
"I'll be there in a minute Phil." She yelled towards the stairs. Then she leaned down to me and kissed each cheek.
"I love you, i'll see you tonight or tomorrow morning."
"Ok... I love you to, now go before Phil explodes" i said laughing at the thought of it. Its not that i dont like Phil, I mean he's great... for my mom. He just doesn't know how to act around me. He just doesn't know how to be a dad.
After my mom and Phil left, i got my phone out of my rolling stones bag to call Nicole. Nicole and i have been best friends since 1st grade. I really don't have very many friends, its only Nicole and Derick. Derick is out best guy freind, mostly because he's gay and we were the only ones with open arms on his first day of our freshmen year.
When i called Nicole, her mom picked up.
"Hello?" Mrs. Anderson said.
"Hey, Mrs. Anderson, its Bella. Um... is Nicole there?" I asked shocked that Nicole didnt have her cell phone on her.
"Oh Bella, she made a 70 on her pre-calculus test and Mr. Anderson took her phone away, then i was talking to Mrs. Johnson while doing the dishes and my phone slipped and fell down in the garbage disposal."
"Well, is she there?" i asked trying not to sound impatiant.
"Oh... No shes at Dericks, i was just talking to them on the phone when you called. They said they were about to call you." just then i had an incoming call from Derick.
"Oh, thats them onthe other line. Well thanksand i'll talk to you later Mrs. Anderson. Bye." i said and hung up as she said bye.
I swiched lines and said "hey guys..."
"Hey Bells." they both said at hte same time.
"My mom and Phil left to go out... do you guys want to come over... we can do a friday night movie night?"
"Sure. We'll be at your house in 3... 2...1" Derick said as soon as the doorbell rang.
I ran down stairs so fast i ran into the front door and fell. The door opened and i saw Derick leaning over me and Nicole running into the Kitchen. I felt Dericks stong, muscular arms wrap around my narrow body and then i balcked out.

Tell me what you think... tell me if you think i should write more.

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Omg I love it plz write more!
Are the cullens coming in to this story?
yes, they wont come in til later though, right now its before she moves to forks and meets the cullens
well DUH you should write more!!! I wanna know why she blacked out!!!

Is that okay if Iadd this link to my page w/ other fanfics?
yeah sure... that would be great if added my link to your page... and i'll hopefully have more up tonight... it depends on if my moms all up in my buisness again tonight, she think im hiding something from her...
*rolls eyes, shrugs shoulders*
ugh i hate when rents are like that.
Helicopter parent!!
I have the same kind of parents always say your hiding something.
PLz Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i will, it was almost ready and then my stupid fraking laptop messed up.
heres more... enjoy

Chapter 2

When i woke up i was on the couch with my head in someones lap. i turned my head around and looked up at derick.
"hey... look at who finally woke up." he said smoothing my hair from my face.
"What? What happened?" i said getting up to fast and falling in his lap.
"you ran into the door when you came to awnser it. its a good thing your mom trusts me enough to have one of your house keys."
"what time is it? wheres nicole? did my mom call? are they home yet?" i asked getting frantic.
"its midnight,nicole went to the gas station. she said she had to get a monster or she'd be the one passed out."
jsut then the front door opened and Nicole walked through the she saw i was awakee she jumped over the couch and hugged me.
"are you alright? here i bought you this" she said and handed me a green monster.
Hey.. did you remember my amp this time?" derick said.
"yes" she said rolling her eyes and handing him his amp.
we sat there for a moment in silence then derick said "wheres my change?"
"right here" she said handing him some ones and coins "i was hoping you'd forget like last time.
"Whatever, i dodnt forget, i just reached in your pocket and got while you were sleeping last time" he said while counting his money. he looked up and saw her pouting and said "fine heres a tip" and hander her two quarters.
"wow two whole quarters? are you sure?" she said sarcasticly."i wonder what i can buy?"
i could see they were about to start arguing so i said "hey, can yall shut up? i have a head ache and yall arnt helping"
"fine" was all they said.
when i woke up --laying on one side of derick with nicole on his other side-- to the smell of eggs, bacon, and biscuts. i tried to wiggle out of dericks already firm grasp without waking him up but he just held onto me tighter. so i sat there thinking of which way i should do this again (derick had a tendancy of cuddleing when he slwpt). so i turned my face to look at his calm, peaceful, sleeping face.i leaned in and kissed him, starting at his cheekbone and going down past his jaw and down his neck to his collarbone. He stirred and let go of nicole and turned to face me and said "oh... orlando bloom".
"yes" i said giggling
his eyees popped opend and he said "What the hell bella?"
"what, at least now i know who you dream about." i said still giggling and blushing like i always do.
"wait... why were you kissing me?" he said with worry and conusion on his face and in his voice.
"oh dont flatter yourself. itried to get up but you wouln let me, you just held me tighter. i guess you thought i wa orlando bloom."
"two things... 1 dont ever bring that up please and 2 was i holding you tighter like this?"he said lunging at me and throwing me over his shoulder and following the smell of the food to the kitchen. he sat me down on the counter and came up behind my mom, wrapped his arms around her, set his chin on her shoulder and said "good moring mom, is breakfast ready?" then pecked her on the cheek and went to the fridge to get a slim quick.
"yep... and im soo glad your such great friends with bella, your like the son i never had."
"aww thanks, im happy to, i dont know how i'd still be alive if i didnt have a place to escape to. you know my parents still arnt ok with me being gay and i love having a place to go when i need to get away from everything."
"your always welcome here." she said smiling.
we heard someone clear there throat and when we looked it was nicole. "exuse me, mom but what does that maake me? chopped liver?" she said.
"oh nicole, you know your a second daughter to me. you always have been and always will be."
as derick walked past nicole he said " yeah you've alway been like a second daughter to her, i'm just her favorite out of the three of us" he said pointing to all three of us."
"whatever derick" she said taking a biscut off his plate.
"its true... i'm a great shopping buddy and a guy all in one." he said grinning.
after we all ate we were sitting in my room, sprwled oout across the floor when i said " hey lets go to the park. we havent gone in forever.
"ok" they both agreed.
when we got to the park we sat under our old tree and started talking. we talked for what seemed like a couple of hours when i all of a suddden looked up and saw him walking towards us, looking right at me with what seemed like the perfect smile.
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
You rock!!!!!!!!
Wow I just read it and its so good plez keep me updated
*snort* *heart, heart* (2 words) LOVE IT (and wait for it... wait for it) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOMNESS


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