My Perfect Romeo <3

Edward and Bella typical Love Story :D

Hello Lovely Twilighters!

Ok So I am starting on a new FanFic!

Just because they are so incredibly fun to write!

I have 2 others- which I am still doing but I must admit I have been focusing on this one because the idea and words just keep flowing :O

Ok so here is my take on Twilight, except it’s called My Perfect Romeo :P It is gunna be different but kind of the same as Twilight- I will include some events from all books! Vampires and werewolves and such but the storyline will be a bit different :)

Bella Swan 17 human. Edward Cullen 17 (give or take a few hundred years) Vampire. And the rest of the characters- Cullens and Swans :) Your general Twilight love story with a few twists and turns :) There may be some odd lines of Stephanie Meyers twilight :) just a heads up! Only my faveys! Uhm throughout all the chapters there will be Points of view changes :D
You also have to bear with me- Updates wont be very often! I have two other fanfics on the go! So don’t hate me please <3 (:

ALL CHARACTERS MENTIONED IN THIS STORY BELONGS TO STEPHINIE MEYER

Chapter 1
B.POV
So here I am; leaving sunny Arizona for rainy Forks. Brilliant. My mom, Renee, met a guy whilst shopping; I was her maid of honour- now they wanted to travel. So I think it was due time I visit my dad. Phil was a nice man- I use the term ‘man’ loosely- he was a boy not so long ago, but he makes her happy and that’s all that counts. It’s always been an odd relationship- my mother and I. Our situations have been the reverse. I was more like the worried parent whilst she would be the rebel teenager. She was my best friend and I am dreadfully anxious about her all the time; but I’m sure Phil will take good care of her.
“Ok baby, have a safe flight!” my mother said to me all teary.
“That’s not really up to me mom, but I’ll do my best.” I kissed her cheek, my mask wavering slightly, and boarded the plane.

The flight was good- boring really. I slept most of it. When I got off the plane I searched frantically for my father, Charlie; he was the Chief of Police in the small town of Forks. Me and him are very alike, we are both uncomfortable in situations where the attention is on us and we don’t handle feelings very well. I spotted him waving his arms with an awkward smile placed on his face. I returned the same smile and one-arm hugged him.
“Good to see you Bells.” He said gruffly.
“Good to see you too Dad.” He picked up my suitcase and we walked out to his cruiser. The journey home was ok- some would say the silence was uncomfortable but not for us. It would be easy living with Charlie- he didn’t find the need to fill the silences. ‘He was a man of little words’ as my mom would say. He drove into the small house that I knew once a long time ago. He took me upstairs to what I presumed was my room. It was more or less the same than it used to be; except replacing the single bed with a double one with purple sheets. I smiled at him as he left me to unpack. Tomorrow I would begin my new school life at Forks High school.

I woke up bright and early, though the sun didn’t greet me. Instead clouds filled the sky forming a grey blanket- fantastic start to the day. I got up, stumbling, and made my way to the bathroom for a well deserved shower. The hot water undid the knots in my back- it felt nice. I stayed in a little too long- long enough for the water to become cold. Grunting, I grabbed my towel and picked out something to wear. (http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=22962093) Charlie’s cruiser was long gone. I walked downstairs to be greeted by a note.
Have a good first day at school Bell’s. I wanted to be here for when you saw it but I had to leave early- here are the keys to your ~~new~~ car. Drive safely. Dad.
Next to the note was a pair of car keys. I smiled and looked out the front door. Wow. It was perfect! Maybe a little older but still it looked in good shape. A rusty orange Chevrolet replaced my dad’s police cruiser. I will have to thank him later. I grabbed my bag and a piece of toast before hopping into my car. It roared to life making me jump a little. I backed out the drive way and was off to my new school.

I pulled in, glad my old truck didn’t stand out from the other cars; most of them were old and battered like mine. I parked the truck and got out, steadying myself, new school the worst thing to do was give my clumsiness away straight away. I swivelled around carefully and saw two cars which were not so much like mine. There was a red convertible- a little ostentatious for my liking and a silver Volvo, which looked like a smooth drive. The people who own those cars must be rich. Very, very rich. I walked to the office and got my schedule- not bad at all. A boy with black hair walked over to me with a big smile on his face.
“Hi you must be Isabella- I’m Eric” he held out his hand waiting for me to shake it. I shook his hand and smiled.
“Uh just Bella.” He nodded and gestured for us to walk. He rambled on about classes and where to go- I was only partly listening. My attention was caught by two outrageously and quite frankly annoyingly beautiful people. They were both as pale as chalk but had these mysterious golden eyes. The female had short spiky black hair- she almost looked like a pixie, but a gorgeous one at that. The male had honey blonde hair and was well built. I felt someone tap my shoulder- Eric obviously found out my attention was drawn somewhere else.
“Oh, those are the Cullens. That’s Alice and Jasper. The Cullen family are all adopted my Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Kinda weird because they are all a thing- as in couples. Apart from Edward, he is a loner, but he has no interest in anyone here…” I managed to tune out his voice. I couldn’t stop staring at these…I could hardly call them people; they seemed much more than that. Alice looked at me with a speculative eye. She smiled slightly- I wasn’t sure if I returned the smile, it would be nothing compared to hers. The boy beside her, Jasper, looked as if he was in pain; he kind of looked like he was holding his breath- must be my eyes. They turned their back on me and walked up the steps to the school. I felt a bit shell shocked at their beauty, I didn’t realise someone-probably Eric- was tugging on my arm.
“Hey you’re the new girl- Isabella right?” my attention turned at my full name, yeah like that’s not going to get annoying.
“Just Bella.” A baby faced boy grinned widely at me. He had spiked blonde hair and quite pleasant blue eyes; nothing compared to the butterscotch ones.
“I’m Mike!” he exclaimed. I gracefully returned the smile not wanting to be rude and started walking to my first class- Biology. Mike and Eric stayed by me like loyal dogs. They walked me to my class, Eric left but I suppose that Mike had this class too. I walked up to the teacher, Mr Banner.
“Ah yes- Isabella, sit over there.” I went and sat at the empty table at the front and started doodling on my folder. The bell rang and the teacher started his lecture. I doodled absentmindedly not listening- I had already done the work he was talking about. Mr Banner suddenly stopped talking.
“Sorry I’m late sir.” Said a velvety bell like voice. I whipped my head up suddenly, wishing I hadn’t. The breath got knocked out of me. Stood at the front of the class was what I can only describe him as a Greek God. He had tousled bronze hair and those striking topaz eyes- he must be part of the Cullen family then. He was quite muscular- but not as big as the one in the car park, though I didn’t care for muscles. His eyes met mine for a split second then I dropped my head, the heat flooding to my cheeks. I heard the chair pull out beside me as I carried on doodling. Shall I risk looking up? I took a chance but quickly regretted it. His amber eyes locked in with mine, I felt I should look away but I couldn’t. He seemed to be right on the edge of his seat, leaning away from me- the expression on his face seemed harmless enough, so why was he leaning so far away? I dragged my eyes back down to my book and breathed deeply. I saw his body suddenly twitch. I peeked through the curtain of hair; he was giving someone the death glare when the phrase ‘if looks could kill’ popped into my head. I swivelled my head to see an innocent Mike staring right back at him. Mikes eyes were wide as he swallowed and ducked his head in defeat- what was that all about? I turned back and Edward was now facing the front, still leaning away. What was this guy’s problem? The bell rang and he was gone- well good first class that was. I trudged off annoyed to my next class- English. I like English; I love to read so I think that helps. When I got in I saw no other than Cullen- hmph, he wants to ignore me then I will ignore him. I went up to the teacher who waved his hand to the seat open to Edward- great. I sat down and immediately pulled my hair across my face.
“Hello. I’m Edward Cullen- you’re the new girl Bella right?” his voice shocked through me as my breathing became slightly delayed. I looked up to see him smiling the most gorgeous crooked smile I have ever seen.
“H-h-hi. Yeah.” I stuttered. I caught a glimpse of his eyes again and held my breath. The pools of gold bored into mine, almost seeing into my soul. I caught my breath and exhaled loudly, I blushed realising it was very loud. My heart pumped almost showing through my clothes as I lowered my head once more. He was an extraordinary human being, how can someone be that perfect.
“I apologize for my behaviour in Biology- not introducing myself to you I mean. It was very rude. I’m sure it’s very foreign here for you, a new school and my rudeness didn’t help.” I looked up once more to see him looking deep into my eyes. I blushed once more- it was very unfair at how persuasive he was- those eyes.
“That’s fine.” I said almost breathless. He grinned at me then turned as the teacher started the lecture.

The day went quite quickly, though every time I blinked I would see those eyes. I made my way out of the car park walking quietly to my car.
“Hey Bella!” I turned to see Angela a friend I made at lunch. She seemed a very nice girl, someone I could easily get along with; she seemed as quiet as me.
“We are having a start of the year party down at La Push beach this weekend- it would be great if you could come.” I smiled and nodded my head.
“Yeah sounds cool.” I really wasn’t into parties if I’m honest, well not parties in general, things that celebrate me. This one didn’t so I suppose I could go. She waved as she walked back up to the building. I got in my truck and made my way home. For a first day at school, today wasn’t too bad.

I awoke startled. I rubbed my eyes and looked ahead of me. The light from outside sieved through the curtains. That was the first night I dreamt of Edward Cullen. From then on I know he is going ot be a recurring character. I only met him yesterday and yet I can’t seem to get him out of my head. I felt as if there was some sort of pull, tugging me towards him, like…magnets. He was my magnet- but the question was, am I his?

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Permalink Reply by Angel@ $w@n cu!!en on September 29, 2010 at 4:00am

wow!!!great........plz keep me updated...

Permalink Reply by Abby on September 29, 2010 at 11:15am

Will do!
Thankyouuu <3

Permalink Reply by Abby on September 29, 2010 at 6:13pm

Hello gang :) So here is chapter 2! I’m trying to make sure this makes sense so please please please tell me if it doesn’t! I don't think this is the best Chapter but it's up to you! Comment and Enjoy! <3

Chapter 2
E.POV
I led on my couch listening to music.Music. If ever I wanted to escape, music was the way. Although there were always some sort of distractions.
Edward! School. Now. Let’s go!
My most recent sibling and undeniably my favourite; Alice. She bounded in my room with a wide grin. Even with music I could still hear her thoughts- it was very frustrating.
“Come on I wanna go! I will be making friends with the new girl anytime now!” I smiled and stood up. All of Forks was talking about the arrival of the Chief of Police’s daughter; but who wouldn’t in this pin sized town.
“Oh she doesn’t like to be called Isabella. Call her Bella.” I saluted her and sped down to my car.

We got to school in no time. The usual chatter in peoples head was very tedious to me now- although the new girl- Bella’s arrival was the topic of choice.
Finally, someone new to look at. I hope she’s hot.
Is she tanned? She’s from Arizona right?!
I look forward to her being my friend.
I hope she will be fine on her first day- it must be really scary for her, being in such an unknown place.
Angela Weber- I can confidently say for a human she was a decent one!
My first lesson-Biology- didn’t start for a while so I decided to take a stroll through the forest behind the school. I let my thoughts crowd my brain. Not a lot was happening in vampire life. It was becoming monotonous- the same day over and over; not to mention the same lessons that I have heard over and over. I climbed the tree closest to me and looked ahead at the school. The feel of the wind blowing through my hair felt good. I could still hear the internal rant of people; I know I will never be able to escape that fully. I heard the bell for first lesson go- damn! I’m going to be late, even at vampire speed. I hurried down the tree and walked at an inhuman pace until I got in view of the school. There were some strays but it was mostly empty. I walked up to my classroom and burst through the door. There was a mahogany haired girl at my desk. When she saw me enter her eyes met mine. She was…beautiful; for a human. She had deep chocolate brown eyes that you could swim in. Our eyes locked for a moment before she ducked her head down. I apologized to the teacher and went to sit in my seat. As soon as I sat down the full force of her scent hit me like a ton of bricks. Venom built in my mouth- it was like no other scent I have smelled before! I leaned away as far as possible; I won’t end this girl’s life. For Carlisle. The smell permeated around the room, making my head swirl. The ache in my throat burned, yearning for me to suck her dry. I looked towards her just as she was me, and our eyes met once again. There was something different. I couldn’t hear her mind. I listened harder, trying to decipher her thoughts but…nothing. I could hear the teachers and the other pupils but I couldn’t hear her- I so wanted to know what was going on- this bugged me, very inconvenient indeed. She let her gaze fall first, letting the curtain of her stunning brown hair fall between us.
Pssh. Of course she goes for Cullen. Perfect Cullen. She’s dumber than I thought.
Anger boiled up inside of me- I don’t know why I cared so much but I could taste the acid in my mouth. He insults us everyday- why is it today, of all days I mind? It was as if my body had a mind of its own. I twisted my body and stared at him; I could feel myself shaking slightly. Mike met my gaze as his eyes widened. I could also feel the stare of everyone else in the class; including Bella.
Woah Cullen’s weird. Why is he staring at me?! Ok I’m kind of uncomfortable now.
He turned to face away- if only I could get him alone, that boy would regret thinking that. I turned back to face the bored, I need to calm down. I kept quick glances at Bella, she was radiant. In the end I gave in, I must talk to her. The bell went as she got up collecting her stuff- I chickened out. Her scent, it was way to overpowering. I walked swiftly to my next class; English, another lesson that is lost on me, I have heard it all before. I sat in my seat anxious to know if she was in my class. Her scent hit me again as she wondered idly into the classroom. She spotted me and blushed a little, though her eyes pulled together- as if she was angry? My seat was the only one open, I can talk to her. I know I can control myself; I have to if not to save this wonderful girl. She sat down and pulled her hair between us again- I really must have annoyed her. If only I could read her mind! It was so exasperating! I tried to swallow- her scent was still very potent and my throat still burnt. I swallowed against the pain and readied myself to talk to her.
“Hello. I’m Edward Cullen- you’re the new girl Bella right?” I started off light using my soft voice I tend to use around humans. I pulled my mouth into a smile as her expression amused me.
“H-h-hi. Yeah.” she faltered. I could hear her heart beating widely- did I affect her this much? Why was I pleased at this?
“I apologize for my behaviour in Biology- not introducing myself to you I mean. It was very rude. I’m sure it’s very foreign here for you, a new school and my rudeness didn’t help.” I softened my eyes and stared deep into the pool of brown. Her eyes seemed to hold another story, they almost told me what she was thinking- almost.
“That’s fine.” She whispered. I grinned widely, and then the teacher started his lecture, effectively ending our conversation. There was something about this girl, she drew me in. I wanted to know more about her. And I will.

B.POV
The next day was a blur. The lessons came and went. There were two particular lessons I was itching for- Biology and English. I had those lessons with him. At lunch everyone was talking about the start of the year party, I blanked in and out of conversations. Lunch didn’t go quick enough. I kept taking sneaky looks at his table. The god like family seemed to do nothing at all. There was something strange about them- I couldn’t quite put my finger on it. They weren’t eating though they had trays in front of them, acting almost like props. The other two Cullens were just as amazing. The model one who could so easily be on magazine had the idyllic figure and long wavy blonde hair. Her man was very buff indeed- he was the biggest of all the Cullen males. He had short black hair and a permanent smile, if it wasn’t for his size he would be more like a teddy bear. Edward would look my way from time to time; I would always catch my breath. He smiled at me and I would smile back-I think.
“Bella?” someone’s voice pulled me out of my daydream.
“We are meeting at La Push at 7.pm.” the same voice confirmed I nodded, dazed still.
“I have no idea where it is…”
“I’ll take-“Mike started, panic flashed across my face- I think Angela noticed.
“I’ll take you. I will drive to yours and pick you up.” I smiled and mouthed thank you at her. She winked and giggled. Mike was quiet the rest of lunch. When the bell finally rang I ambled out of the cafeteria and to Biology. I sat down next to him and inhaled deeply. Ok Bella, you will not be distracted today. He is way out of your league anyway!
“Hey partner.” I looked up blushing a deep red.
“Hey yeah err…partner.” I rushed my words out way to fast. He chuckled lightly. Damn. I broke my one rule I gave myself already. He was just so…so…UGH! There is no possible word to describe how wonderful he is! I huffed disappointed at myself and turned to face the teacher.
“You will be doing an experiment today, get started.” I looked down at the desk- I didn’t even notice the tools we had when I walked in, I’m worse than I thought!
“I’ve already done this.” I said absentmindedly to him. Edward smirked and nodded.
“Me too.” It was like he was laughing at some inside joke. We sped through the experiment quickly then ended up with lots of time to spare.
“What’s your favourite colour?”
“Amber.” I answered reflexively. Amber has never been my favourite colour- it was now though.
“Why?” he chuckled. I blushed- how can I say it’s the colour of his eyes without making me seem like a freak?
“No reason… what about you?” he looked thoughtful for a while before beaming.
“Brown.” I flushed- why? We did questions about our likes and dislikes, back and forth. When class was over I couldn’t believe how upset I was! I walked out of class dazed. I stumbled about, remembering the clarity of his voice, how he never left a long space of silence.
“Bella?” that sounds closer than I thought. I turned around to be face to well almost face with him. He was pretty tall.
“We have English now. Maybe I could walk with you?” he wanted to walk me?! Of all people!
“Yeah, of course.” He walked close beside me; I could almost feel his touch. We turned a few heads, when I looked up he would smirk sometimes-it made me think I was missing some personal joke. We arrived in English and the questioning started again- this time a little deeper.
“If you don’t mind my prying, why did you move to Forks?” I shrugged and bit my lip.
“My mom re-married and they wanted to travel so I thought I would leave them to it and move in with my dad for a while. It’s been a while since I have seen him.” He nodded in understanding.
“If you don’t mind my prying what happened to your parents?” he shrugged also.
“They died of a…uh disease many years… ago. I was, young and Carlisle adopted me.” I tilted my head to the side and sighed.
“I’m sorry.” He looked up and smiled.
“It’s ok, it happened a long time ago, I was very young. Besides, Carlisle and Esme are the best people imaginable to be my parents; I haven’t missed out on anything.” He shrugged and looked thoughtful again.
“This sounds like an odd question but do I intimidate you?” frighten me? Him? Really? That was an odd question.
“Of all the things you do to me, scare me is not one of them…” I trailed off thinking about what I just said.
“Ok that sounded…wrong… It wasn’t supposed to sound like that.” I blushed as he chuckled deeply.
“What do you mean?” he stared deeply with his eyes, persuading me to tell him. Damn.
“That.” I mumbled. He looked at me inquisitively.
“What?” he asked all innocent, a smile playing on his lips.
“The way you stare at me, it’s like you see right into my soul or something.” He nodded.
“Sorry, I didn’t know.” I shook my head- that was so embarrassing.
“Its fine, just don’t do it as often.” He chortled and turned to face the front. The bell rang and I was sad…as much as I hate to admit it. Was I falling for this boy I met yesterday? He didn’t at all seem like a boy, more like a man- more like a God. It’s the weekend; I’m not going to see him, why does it affect me so? Wait.
“Edward?” I called out before he got out the door. He turned around with a crooked smile.
“Uhm we are having this start of the year party at La Push, you should uh come.” He smiled and shook his head.
“I would love to but I’m afraid I can’t. Maybe another time though- maybe just you and me.” with that he left. Wait? WHAT?!

Permalink Reply by XO Edward XO Jacob XO on September 29, 2010 at 6:51pm

This was a throughly enjoying chapter! I am loving this story!!!

Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on September 29, 2010 at 7:52pm

Hi Abby
Oh poor B & E they have indeed turned each others wrorld upside down and iniside out, so cute. I love them together well almost together. I love this so much and I am excited to see where you go next with our fave couple!!
Hugs
Sarah

Permalink Reply by Abby on September 30, 2010 at 4:53am

Thankyou Sarah!
That means so much!
They will be going somewhere I think everyone will enjoy! :D

Permalink Reply by Abby on September 30, 2010 at 4:52am

XO Edward XO
Thanks so much!
:)

Permalink Reply by Maya D. on November 14, 2010 at 1:30am