My two shining Sun.
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Alice pov
Chapter 1 The vision
Its been only one year after the Volturi came to try to kill my family
with the excuse that my niece was one of the immortal children. But I
left with my true love before they came, to find a half human and half
vampire boy called Nauel so they knew she wasn`t dangerous. But even if
they left I`m always on the watch just in case they decide other
wise.But today was a perfect day I was going shopping with Nessie, she
looked like a 3 year old but she was has smart has a 10 year old. I love
to go shopping and buy cute outfits for everyone but I always get mad
with Bella cause she always complains even if I get my way at the end. I
was waiting for Nessie to get dressed and when she was taking too long I
decided to go help her.
"Where are you going my love" Jasper asked me
" To go find out why is Nessie taking so long" I responded him. He
smiled at me and kissed me very gently. I loved Jasper with all my life
or existence.Since I had my first vision that was him looking for me i
have been waiting for him and finally hes all mine and we both knew.
"Well I gotta go" i smiled at him and kissed him again. He smiled at me
and winked.
I ran trew the forest but I decide to walk at human speed I didn`t know
why. This was unsual but I wanted t relax little. Then I had a vision ,I
knew this cause first I as seing the forest but know all I could see is
a hospital room. It wasn`t anything related to Carlisle cause I couldn
see him.I just saw a mother giving birth. I was confused why am I seeing
this? Then I saw her a beatiful baby girl with yellow golden eyes like
mine. She had dark black hair and her skin was pale white but I knew
every babies skin is like that wen they are born. She smiled at her
mother and the mother smiled back.
" I don know how to name her, how about... Ana Sofia Alison"
The baby or Ana Sofia Alison smiled at her name and laughed her beatiful
bell ring laugh. I just saw a vision about this beatiful baby and I
felt different emotions, first jelousy cause I couldn`t give birth
second I felt love, I love this beatiful, little creature that I just
saw in one vision. And finally I felt curiosity and posesive, I wanted
to learn, to know, to care, to have this beatiful child. Then to soon my
vision ended. I didn`t want anybody to know about this vision.So
Edwardn didn`t notice I started to think about my planned day with
Nessie. When I got to the house I felt lost but was excited to go
shooping but when I got there Jacob had Nessie in his arms.
"Sorry Alice Jacob came and wanted to go with Nessie to the beach with
Quil and Claire" Edward said to me
"Oh... well... it`s ok. Actually I want to research sometime. Have fun
at the beach!" I said excited the last two sentences.
I wanted to learn more about the baby. The beatiful Ana Sofia Alison. I
laughed at my self her third name was very similar to my name. Alice=
Alison. I ran to the garage atnd got into my yellow porshe that Edward
gave to me. I loved it.
"Why are so excited my love?" Jasper asked me while he was opening the
door of my porshe
"Im going to do some research!" I said cause I couldn`t lie to Jasper
but I didn`t want him to know about my vision. Then gain when I thought
of it I had another vision. I saw a beatiful girl ,it was Ana Sofia
Alison but she was much older. I saw her hugging me and Jasper. Then I
had another vision I saw Ana Sofia Alison but she was one of us a
vampire she looked a lot like me, like she was.. my... daughter.
"Alice what are you seeing?" Jasper asked anxious
"A wonderful future, but I can`t tell you now.When the time i right I
will tell you. I promise" I told him and he understood and didn't ask me
anything else. He kissed me again and winked at me and said
"I love you"
"I love you more" I said kissing him again.
I went to Carlisle and asked him about the file of new born child, he
asked me why.
"Carlisle this is important for our future please don think about this
ok." I said and he promise. He show me everything to look for a new born
baby. I thanked him and went to Seattle to a library so I could use my
laptop that Carlisle gave me with everything I needed. I couldn`t go
home caus then everyone will be asking me questions that I didn`t want
to answer. I clicked the tab and I wrote Ana Sofia Alison in the
search tab.I clicked Enter In less than 3 seconds a lot of
names,pictures, and information of different people ws shown in the
computer. In that moment my life was going to change.Everything my life,
her life, meaning. I didnt care to have child until I saw her I felt
she wa mine like that woman had created that beatiful creature just for
me and Jasper. I didn`t know her but I will soon know every thing about
her. Ana Sofia Alison... hopefully... soon..my daughter.
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Chapter 2 Research
Alice POV
I saw everything about that little creature, how much she weigh, where would she live, everything about her mom and I found something very interesting, the mother wasn't married, and she got pregnant while virgin. A virgin pregnancy. The mother was 18 years old, her mother was helping her. I found she was living in Seattle.
That's near maybe I can go there....no no no Mary Alice, you must have control. I told myself.
I decided to go back home but order some baby clothes and everything they need. They said they need a lot of money, and I want her to be very healthy, and protected so I bought a lot of cute clothes and a crib and medicine and milk for my little girl. After I paid it with my secret credit card. Jasper took my other card. and Send it to where they live. I took a deep breath and tried to relax.
In this quite library I tried to search for her, I couldn't see anything clearly just her with her mom, and grandmother and a few with me. But that's it. Nothing else. Nothing. Not like she dies or disappears is like, well is exactly like she hasn't decide. she was just a baby...
I sighed and went home, while driving in front of Ana Sofia's new house. When I got home Jasper smiled and kissed me. I ran to our room and jumped in my bed with a huge smile on my face.
"you feel... happy and,...maternal. Just like Bella when she his with Ness." Jazz said confused but a smile on his face. I smiled my Cullen smile that I knew he couldn't resist.
"When the right time comes Jazz, I"ll tell you everything but, right now we just have to let time goes and see what it's brings. But for now... we just wait" I said wrapping my hands on his neck.
"Just wait?"
"Yep" I said impatient for the future... I can't wait for my daughter. But I saw a vision very far, maybe a few years and for Ness and Jacob it isn't good. My vision got blinder, if that could even be possible but I saw next to the blurry figure Huilen and I was very sure next to her was Nahuel was next to her coming her... for what?... I think I know... He was here for Renesmme
Jacob POV
Today I'm going with Ness to the beach with Quil and Claire but the moment phased Quil talked,
Sorry man Claire is sick, we can't go to the beach today he thought to me
Is ok just take care of her, I said and we both phased back to human form
Nessie was waiting for me in front of the cottage.
"Sorry Ness, Claire's sick and can't come" I explained to her but surprisingly she smiled
"Is okay Jakey, we can play her" she smiled she was the cutest little girl in the world, i wonder what she what's to play? Is she cold? Is she happy? I kicked myself mentally because , of course she is happy, she is smiling has big has she can and now she isn't cold because she is my arms. I tickled her and she laughed her beautiful laugh. But then out of now where Edward and Alice where seeing each other with shocked thoughts, Bella and Jazz where confuse like I was...
" What's going on?" Bella asked.
"are you sure Alice?" Edward said in and eerie voice
"I don't know- I- I- I.... it maybe but ,it can be in a few years by now, he doesn't really know until he sees here again." Alice said frustrated
" Hey bloodsucker- I said annoyed now- whats going on? Is the Volturi back for Ness? I swear that if-" Edward interrupted me.
"No Jacob, is not the Volturi. Is Nahuel, in the future he wants Renesmee to be his mate" I tried to control myself I had Nessie on my arms. I think she noticed something was wrong because she touched my neck and showed me ,myself angry. She was worried. Only that made myself calm myself. She cared.
" Nothing Ness, it's just something that I don't what to happen."
"What?" her bell sound of her voice asked
"Sweetie we will tell you when you understand" Bella said and kissed her cheek. I didn't want to let her go, not yet.
"Okay but Jake - Ness moaned- let's go play!!" she laughed. I went to the cottage to play with her but with a glance behind me I saw Edward, Bells, Alice and Jazz with a worried look over their daughter and niece. Nessie took me to her room that Alice decorated for her, thankfully isn't pink, Ness is a little bit like Bells. Is all purple, blue, green and brown. I saw the pictures of her and me in her bed stand.
"That's my favorite picture Jake." She smiled at me. I sat on the floor next to her bed.
"Yeah i like it too" I smiled but I was to distracted trying ti think what should I do. That half blood sucker was trying to steal mine. I looked at Nessie. She was beautiful, I didn't think of her with anything romantic but she is my soul mate.
"Jake, smile. Don't worry Daddy is going to protect me and mommy too"
"I will protect you too Ness." I said
"Yeah but you will be with me. Forever." She kissed my cheek and sat in my lap and I hugged her she closed her eyes. And feel asleep. I kissed her head and whispered...
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ok I said I wasn't going to do this but hey here is the sneak peek ahahaha
Chapter 3 Sneak Peek:
Jacob POV:
Ness was sleeping in my arms. She looked so... peaceful. The I could smell Bella's scent.
"Hey Bells: I said with out looking at her. She sat down next to me. She kissed my cheek; I chuckled, her lips where ice cold, but she is my best friend.
"You remember the first time you told me you imprinted on Reneesme." she asked me
"Yeah" I laughed
"I know that even at first I didn't accept it...now, well I'm glad you did. I can trust you to protect her... forever. And I can trust you now,well in a few years, to protect her and help her decide on who is going to be her mate."
"Bells I imprinted on her"
"Yeah but Edward explained a little more thanks to you're dad. She can choose another but, you are her soul mate. But she has to decide. And you know that Jake." She explained seriously. I sighed, I knew she was right.
" Yeah I know... Bells?"
" Yeah Jake?"
"I want to tell her. But I will tell her when she decides to be with me. I don't want her to feel like she needs to be with me because imprinted on her. I want her to love me on her own time." she smiled
"And Bells... I'm sorry I didn't think like this when you were human" to my surprise she laughed a bell ringed laugh.
"I know Jake, just know that I love you. You're my best friend" I smiled then I stared at her daughter. My beautiful Nessie. -
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Chapter 3
Jacob POV:
Ness was sleeping in my arms. She looked so... peaceful. The I could smell Bella's scent.
"Hey Bells: I said with out looking at her. She sat down next to me. She kissed my cheek; I chuckled, her lips where ice cold, but she is my best friend.
"You remember the first time you told me you imprinted on Reneesme." she asked me
"Yeah" I laughed
"I know that even at first I didn't accept it...now, well I'm glad you did. I can trust you to protect her... forever. And I can trust you now,well in a few years, to protect her and help her decide on who is going to be her mate."
"Bells I imprinted on her"
"Yeah but Edward explained a little more thanks to you're dad. She can choose another but, you are her soul mate. But she has to decide. And you know that Jake." She explained seriously. I sighed, I knew she was right.
" Yeah I know... Bells?"
" Yeah Jake?"
"I want to tell her. But I will tell her when she decides to be with me. I don't want her to feel like she needs to be with me because imprinted on her. I want her to love me on her own time." she smiled
"And Bells... I'm sorry I didn't think like this when you were human" to my surprise she laughed a bell ringed laugh.
"I know Jake, just know that I love you. You're my best friend" I smiled then I stared at her daughter. My beautiful Nessie.
Jasper POV:
What is happening, Alice tells me something good is going to happen and I was just kissing her when she freaks out because Nahuel is coming after Nessie. I'm feeling confused, but everyone else, is feeling confused, scared, angry, upset, love, happiness, calmness, and....motherly? I looked at Alice and she jsut had her eye blank. I ran to her
"What do you see love?" I asked her. She looked at me and then looked at Edward that was confused.\
"I can't tell you... yet. It was what I was talking to you earlier. Please trust me - she looked at Edward- you too." I tried to feel what she felt... She just felt love and happiness but she was guilty. I sighed and kissed her
"ok, but please tell me. It confuses me" I smiled at her. Her smile was dazzling
"I love you" she whispered and kissed me
"I love you too"
Edward POV
Alice visoion was blurry...
A baby girl, then she grew... The I see her smile and hugging Renesesme?. Then Alice noticed and shut-ed down it felt like the time when she left when the Volturi came
"What do you see lo. She said to Jasper
"I can't tell you... yet. It was what I was talking to you earlier. Please trust me - she looked at me- you too." Jazz tried to feel her .she felt... She just felt love and happiness but she was guilty. He sighed and kissed her
"ok, but please tell me. It confuses me" they smiled at each other
"I love you" she whispered and kissed Jazz
"I love you too"
I ran to Bella and tell her what is happening. I found her with Jacob seeing Renesesme sleep. My daughter. She was the most beautiful creature, besides her mother, in the world.
"Bella love, Jacob.Alice had a vision" I explained the vision to them.
"What does it mean?" Bella asked
"I don't know Alice is hiding something but I trust her."
"I do to. Last time with the Volturi she left to save us. I trust the little pixie." Jake said. Bella just looked away she didn't like Alice living
"She's not going anywhere, love" I said wrapping my arms around my waist
"I thought you couldn't read my mind" I chuckled and kissed her cheek
"It;s getting clearer" WE both laughed at the memory when we went to our meadow for the first time, together.
We both looked at Jacob that had fallen asleep nest o our daughter on her bed.
"He still doesn't feel that way with her. You know that" Bella tried to calm me. I was to tense. I exhaled I read his dream. He was with Nessie just playing at the beach.
"I know." We went to our bed room and kissed I looked outside our window . It was almost midnight
"I love you Bella" I kissed her neck. She kissed my lips and my back was at our bed.......
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This is so good.!!!!! Please keep me updated.!!!!
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ooh....i was wondering wen someone would put Nehual back into the story...honestly i think he would b perfect 4 her...desicions desicions... XD update soon!!!
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thanks will see if she chooses him I really don't knwo and I"M writting the story * laughs*
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Chapter 4
Before I continue.. i changed ... mentally the story a little bit so here is the summary:
Alice vision of the girl in chapter 1 was a memory that she has forgotten... it was her first vision but she was still changing into a vampire so the memory fadded. But when she was thinking of Nessie the memory came back...so this makes baby Alison 15 years old ( in this chapter and so on) so she doesn't have 6 hyears old like Nessie does..I think when Nessie stop growing she also can't be pregnat, right? So I hope you understand...any questions just comment the questiona nd I'll answer it..And now enjot the chapter!!!
Chapter 4:
Jacob's POV
Time passed, and everything was perfect.. it's been 6 years now...my Nessie is 6 years old today, in 3 days is Bells Birth day and alice is making a surprise party...I know Bella will not like it but at the end she will have a great time... i was eating my piece of cake that Nessie brouth me... Reneesme Carlie Cullen... the most beautiful creature in the worl and my universe... She ate the cake.. she doesn't eat human food freakquently but she ate her cake and licked the plate, i had to admit the vampires know how to cook... Seth licked again and again is plate i jsut poked him at him and laughed
"Seth you can get another piece, we are the only ones who eat" Ness and i laughed while seth ran to the house to eat.. We weren't in forks anymore... We were in Darmounth, after I finish high school Edwrad helped me get into the collage. They're always tutoring me but I'm glad.. I'll grduate soon so it's worth the hard work... seth just stared collage so his just stressed but Edward helps him..a lot.
Nessie layed in the ground enjoying the warm weather, that was by miracle shinning today.
I just stared at her... so beautiful
"Jake?" her eyes were closed
"Yeah,Ness" she opened her eyes, her milk chocolate brown eye were full of excitment
"Let's go hunting the cake made me thirsty... and Jake..' I smiled at her.. she was dazzled for a moment then spoke
"Today's my birth.... can I ask yuo something?" she looked nervous
"I kissed her forhead and whispered....
"Anything"
"... can you carrie me in wolf form.. it's been so long" I laughed at helped her up.
"Yeah, it's been so long... wow Ness, you look 15 or 16 not like a 6 year old" I didn't know if this was a good thing or a bad thing
"Well that what happens when you're a half vampire and half human" She chuckleld and coverd her eyes
I phased and touched her arms with my nose. she climed up my back and holded tight to my fur. It felt nice. I ran then Ness jumped strait to her prey. After she finish hunting I went away to pahse but before the pack yelled at me telling me to tell Ness happy birth day to her, that they'll be here in a few days with her present ... in bella's party
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I found Nessie laying on the ground waiting for me. I slowly went next to her
she smiled and the tuckeld me like we were 5 year olds..sometimes with her it felt taht way but sometimes I wanted more, but I want her to love me before I tell her I imprinted on her that she was my soulmate. We laughed until we relaxed under the poor sun
"Ness, the pack send you a happy bith day and that they'll be here for you're moms party'
"cool" she giggled then I stared at her again. I couldn't help it she was so... beautiful
"Why are you looking at me like that?"
"Umm... I.." I blushed and looked away embarras that she caught me staring at her like a complete idiot... But to my surprise she laughed and kissed my cheek.
"Ness" I moaned. I always did that when she knew I was embarras. She laughed more and kissed my other cheek. I grabbed her by the waits and pulled her closer to me she was now on top of me. We froze when we looked into each other's eyes. It was like imprinting on her all over again....
Nessie's Pov
Alice made me the best birth day party in the world! And the best present my family can give to me... Jake didn't give me anyhting but I didn't care. He was my present and he gave me himself everyday. Jacob was like a brother to me, ten my best friend and he still is.. but sometimes I see him staring at me like a blind mind seeing the sun for the first time... just weird but I like it, a lot. I haven't ridde in /jake's back in a long time so because this was my special day I think i wanted that. I had fun.. hunting, ridding Jake.. Now we were both laying on the groung enjoying the poor sunshine that was left of the day. But then I asked him why he was staring at me.
"Umm...I..."I laughed. He always blush and turn away when he got embarras. I always knew what ticked him of and get him angrier i kissed his cheek still giggleing
"Ness" He moaned i kissed him again and I laughe dmore but then her grabbed me by my waits and somehow i was on top of him,it took my breath away... but when I saw his eye I froze. I felt a starge pull to my Jacob, but in such a different way... i saw his full, warm lips and I imagen my self kissing those lips I liked the idea but befroe I Could do anything i heard Seth paws coming closer I moved slowly away from Jake, never living his eye from his face, his lips..his eyes. Seth came saw the two of us and phased and came again to Jacob
"Sorry Jake, Edward and Bella are coming. they were worried abput Ness" then I saw my parents holding hands, coming closer to us. I got upand went to them... my mind blank. Daddy stared at Jake he shook his head then smiled at me
" Reneesme,let's go to the house. Alice is waiting for you"
"Ok" I said dazzed ran to where Alice was to find her face with a huge smile but her eye far and blank.. -
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Here is chapter 5 !! I couldn't wait anymore!!!
Ana Sofia alison POV
Mom died a few years ago,but I couldn't exatcly call her a mom. she was great but she was only 18 whe she had me. She wasn't mature enough to have me .Even if she loved me I knew since I knew everything about love, sex, baies, etc...that my mother wasn't ready... she left me a note saying that she never had sex. taht her pregnacy was literally a miracle, but then she had sex after I was a few years old...
I lived in an orphanage in Seatlle... and strangely I had a bank account by my name and I had more than 10 hundred dollars. the money came by an annonymoous person
I thanked God everyday for that person that took care of me after my mom died.
Today i resed a letter with a plane ticket to Darmouth
"What is this?" I asked Lora. Lora was in chargeof the orphanage.
"Well, well i think is fro the lady that gives you money into you're bank account. Ana..if you want to meet her you can.I found information about her - lora gave me some papers- just think abput it sweetie, maybe she can adopt you. and you can finally have a real family" she smiled. Hey brown his looked beautiful against her dark skin
"Thanks" I whispered. I ran upsatris into my room. Thankfully i had a room to yself I was never depress or anything, but I'm always here readign about mithycal creatures..somehow I knew it was all real...soemhow it was all real.
I read along the papers. The woman is called Mary Alice Brandon. Nice,maybe...Ana Sofia Alison Brandon, kinda long, i like it but...long.... maybe... Alison Brandon..Hey Alison- Alice.
I laughed.
Mary Alice is living in Darmouth with her fiancee Jasper Hale. Theier living with their family. Doctor Carlisle Cullen his wife Esme. she was adopted with with others. They were brothers Edward and Emmet Cullen... Jasper and Rosalie Hale are nefews of Esme.
.Wow- i thought, -big family, Edward was married to a girl called Isabella and tehy adopted Edward's niece... she was called, Renesmee. Her name was beautiful. while i read I started packing ..I had a strange urge to go to them,like it was the right thing to do. I looked at me ticket and I had a few hour's 'till the plane went to the air. I told Lora my desicion. And she smiled. she took me to the airport but before everyone in the house hugged me. When I got in the plane and took my seat, first class I might add, I relaxed. I knew that everything wwill be fine. I closed me eye and enjoyed the ride... this will be a new advetured in my life, maybe, just maybe I can have a family.. Alison Brandon or when she got married, Alison Hale.... -
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I'm sad nobody hasn't commented!!!! is it really that bad????!!??!
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hey!!!this is soooo good...for a minute there i tought that bella was dead!!!!! IT WASS SO GOOD..CONTINUE..!!!!1
I WANT MMORE UPDATES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!
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ok..i gotta go but i wil check laters...bye!!!!!...ur friend ......ashmeena!!!!...and once again...great job!!!
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