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She lived in France, Germany, Italy & now Forks. She used to be a model centuries
ago, till someone got to her... He was an obsessed vampire, who wanted her for his
own. But she ran away, and killed many because she was only a new born.
She could sing & play the piano. She became a vegetarian, after a century & was a nomad.
She had strawberry blond hair, and golden brown eyes like all of us. She hated vampire groupings,
she liked to be alone. Then she met Edward & 'fell in love' with him. She once went to Asia,
and learned Tai Chi & other martial arts...
After hearing so much from her to Alice, I could tell she was an amazing person. Alice
couldn't stop smiling, when talking about her. "She seems.. Amazing." I whispered,
Alice nodded her head. "I'm mean she even helped Edward in..." her voice faded and I looked
straight at her.
"How'd she help Edward?" I asked, sounding curious now, but she shook her head. "Never mind."
she replied, and got up. I got up too, and she handed me the clothes again. "But anyways...
we should go down now, and see what everyone is up to." she said, with a weak smile...
I wondered what she was hiding? What did she help Edward in?
When both me and Alice got downstairs, which was fast of - course. They were all talking...
"Bella!" Carlisle said, a huge smile was on his face. "Um... Yes?" I asked. "We just want to say,
your fighting is improving. Even though you've only been here for a day." Jasper said, and
everyone chuckled, except for me, I just smiled.
"Uh... Thanks. But I don't think I'm that good..." I admitted, "You are good Bella. It's pretty
impressive for a beginner... Are you a beginner?" Emmet asked, I rolled my eyes. "Of - course,
Emmet." I said, he smiled. "Just checking." he added, and everyone chuckled again.
Then it was quiet. "Well... I should get going now. Thanks for the help..." I said, and made my
way to the door. But before I could even leave, Alice pulled me into a hug. "Don't leave, without
giving us a hug!" Alice exclaimed and I quickly hug her. But once she hugged me, they all started
to hug me. Then it was Jasper, he seemed tense though. Then Emmet, boy is he strong, he gave
me a huge bear hug. Then Rosalie, she hugged very cautiously. Carlisle then Esme...
Then I spotted Tanya & Edward... They just looked at me. Then to my surprise, Tanya moved
towards me. And she hugged me, I kind of gasped, when she pulled away. I looked at her
pure beautiful face, she was amazing... I felt more envious & jealous. Then when Edward hugged
me, I felt like I couldn't breath. I tried to remind myself, of what he did to me, but all my thought
went away... I felt... like I was enjoying the touch of him, his hug... and he wasn't even really
hugging me, yet I was enjoying it? What is wrong with me?
I quickly pulled away, and gave a weak smile. "Um... Thanks a lot. I'll see you guys soon..." I said,
and quickly walked out of the house... When I was outside, I was breathing like crazy... which isn't
normal at all, I mean for god's sake I'm a vampire, vampires don't have breathing problems...
Then all the memories came back again... Edward kissing me... Edward saving me... Edward staying
with me at night... Edward & I in Biology class... I felt stupid & even slapped my face.
"Don't Bella..." I said, as I walked home. "Dont' fall for anything stupid. Not again." I told myself,
then I heard a noise, and I froze. I didn't want to listen, or look, I started to run as fast as I could.
Then I could hear it, so close from behind me. I was about to turn around, when I hit myself against
a tree, and flew back. Then I screamed, I could feel it's presence right next to me.
I screamed with fear, and was thinking about how 'glad I was that I was far from The Cullens house'.
Hopefully they weren't hearing me... I really didn't want them to find out. Just then, finally I heard
a familiar voice. "Bella?" he said, I opened my eyes. There stood Jake... I stopped screaming,
and sighed with relief.
"What's wrong with you?" he asked, pulling me up. I fixed my hair quickly, and forced a laugh.
"Oh my god, Jake. I didn't know it was you.. I thought you were a... uh squirrel." I replied, hugging
him. He looked at me, confused. "Your scared of squirrels?" he asked, I pulled away and nodded
my head. "They really terrify me." I added. He continued to look at me, I gulped... I don't think
I was convincing him.
"Bella, last year you ate a squirrel." he said, and I smiled nervously. "That's when it all started." I
replied, he still looked at me. "Bella, what's really going on? Why were you running? Is something
after you?" he asked, now sounding concerned... "No. Jake. I promise you, I'm fine." I said, finally
he sighed... "Okay. Why don't I take you home, In case you get jumped by a family of squirrels."
he joked, and I laughed... but he didn't. I could tell as we walked home, that he still wasn't convinced...
* * *
There he was... He just stood there. I looked so serious, more serious than I've ever seen him.
"Were leaving." he said, and then all the memories flashed back. Him kissing me on my
forhead, him walking away. Me running after him, after he left. Me screaming, and not being
able to find him. Me laying down in the rain... Me curled up into a ball, in the woods lost.
Then I sat up, screaming from my bed. "NOOO!!!" I screamed, then stopped when I realized
what I was doing... I thought I saw Edward, so I closed my eyes and when I opened my eyes he
was gone... I sighed, and felt so stupid... "No Bella! Stop it! Your not going to be stupid again."
I told myself, and to my surprise, I started to sob... I just couldn't take it...
'Maybe I should'nt go over there...' I thought, 'NO! I need to, or I won't be able to fight Victoria'
... 'I can't die... Not when I have so much to live for...' ... I sighed, and layed back down...
"What is wrong with you..." I asked myself, hitting myself on my forhead. The image of Edward
kissing me on my forhead played in my head, and I shuttered... "No... Your going to be strong. He's
with someone else, so you have to get over him." I whispered to myself, then froze...
I just realized, I admitted everything... I was still in love with Edward. I thought I was over him, but
seeing him again, made me realize everything... So now I had 3 problems. Victoria was after me,
to kill me. I am still in love with Edward... And Edward already has fallen for someone else, named
Doesn't it get better & better by day...
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