New Moon: The Messengers

Bella is forced to move with her mother, Phil, and her three-year-old brother, Ben, to a sunflower farm in North Dakota. The house may seem normal to the adults but the child knows of the lurking demons roaming the perimeter. While the beautiful yellow fields offer a charming welcoming, they soon begin to realise that they are not alone when Bella and her younger brother, Ben, see actions beyond the abnormal that are apparently oblivious to the adult eye. As the roaming spirits grow increasingly violent, the parents are starting to question the case. As Bella has to go through the horror-film-like reality while trying to convince her parents of the surronding threats, Alice sees unexpeted visions a day before the reality. The only problem is that Alice does not see who is living the horror as she is the person in her visions. As Alice tries to figure out her visions, Bella does her best to not fail her promises to both Edward and Ben while she deals with more of the unnatural from her haunted farm.....

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*********New Moon: A Past Promise**********

New Moon: A Past Promise (or NM:APP) is my first fanfiction story. Sadly, I have much going on and have decided to end it on Bella's P.O.V. I don't think I will continue with another part anytime soon, so that's why it says 'the end... for now...'

What if Bella had a friend Edward never knew about? What if Bella had already be promised immortality? What if that promise was fulfilled? What if Alice saw two very familiar-looking vampires snarling at each other in the woods with two strangers on the side? What if the werewolves had interrupted? What if Alice thought Bella was dead? What if Edward believed her? What if Bella had to race to Italy?.... Or die trying....

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*********The FreeRoamer's Clan**********

This story is about the FreeRoamer's Clan which is a vampire coven in the 'Make Your Own Vampires Clan' group. You can learn a little about Kate, Blake, and Bella on the page. They were the first three in the clan. You may join if you wish.

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Part 1: Bella's P.O.V.

I never win. Especially since the day my life left me.
I only have one reason left to live: my brother.

I stubbornly stayed quiet but mentally moaned as I saw the sign saying North Dakota 5 miles.
If it weren't for my brother I wouldn't have come.
When Renee came to give me the news that I was moving with them I was appalled.
She knew me too well when she reminded me of my brother needing a friend while we lived out in the country.
I sighed and gave in too easily.
I'm sure I would've thrown a tantrum or something if it wasn't for Ben. And maybe moving would get my mind of things, some specific things.
I think that's the other reason that nobody has mentioned. Go figure!
I was staring out the window with nothing but pure hatred when Phil interrupted my thoughts.
"Here we are!" Phil said as we turned into a driveway with some decrepit old house at the end.
Why was I forced to move here? So people wouldn't hear me screaming in the middle of the night? It just makes no sense!
This place looked as if it was a haunted house. I'm sure the quietness will add to the tension.
"Yay!" I tried to sound enthusiastic but it came out more sarcastic. Renee turned on me.
"I think a change will be good for you. Now, stop moping and give the house a chance. Will you promise me to give it a chance?"
"Fine," I sighed.
She then turned to Ben who was waking up from his nap.
"Do you like our new house?" She crooned. It disgusted me. What was so good about this junkyard? I swear one bad storm could wash away the whole property.
My brother just glanced from her and the house over and over again. He doesn't speak. He was in a horrible car accident a year or two ago and since then hasn't spoken one word.
"Honey, can you get him? We have to unload the car."
"Yeah, I got him," I answered as I unbuckled his seatbelt. It seemed as if he was trying to point at something but it could've been about the house or the sunflowers.
As we walked through the door of our new house, my instinct told me to run away. I ignored it.

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Do you like 'New Moon: The Messengers?')

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Permalink Reply by Mrs.Andrea Cullen on April 7, 2010 at 7:49pm

You should post the next chapter thing:) soon haha Cant wait

Permalink Reply by DSiuser(aka newmooniegirl#1:) on May 12, 2010 at 8:38pm

cant wait for more

Permalink Reply by Vocaloid Lover! on May 15, 2010 at 4:26pm

when r u going to update?!?

Permalink Reply by ☽ღaLiCeCrAzIeღ☾ on May 15, 2010 at 9:54pm

hopefully reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreally soon> hate school not so much me!!! =(

Permalink Reply by ☽ღaLiCeCrAzIeღ☾ on June 1, 2010 at 8:40pm

Part 14: Bella’s P.O.V.

It took me a minute to realize I wasn’t dead. I wanted to be. That, or for all of what’s happened to me to have just been one never-ending nightmare.

When my senses and feelings started to come back to me I didn’t show them. I didn’t open my eyes. I didn’t jerk awake like others sometimes do. I didn’t move anywhere or even stretch myself. I don’t know why, but I just laid there. Maybe it was for the fact that for the short time in my life, I wasn’t stressing, worrying, or trying to figure something out. I just lay there, and was extrememely gracious for the time. It was just me, and for once, I was happy.

In fact, I was too happy. In fact, it was weird and abnormal to me. Nevertheless, I didn’t care. I didn’t even know where I was. I thought maybe I had made it to heaven. No. I thought I was in heaven. That all the happiness couldn’t be real, especially since I didn’t deserve it.

I still hadn’t opened my eyes. I just laid there, listening to what was around me. I had a soft ringing in my ears. I heard soft, low murmurs close yet far away, as if in another room. I heard and felt the rise and fall of my chest breathing. I heard a beeping sound near my head, keeping rhythm to my heartbeats that, for once, were going their normal speed.

I felt a soft sheet lay over top of me, covering my toes to my chest with my arms lying beside me. I felt a few wide but thin bracelets around my arms near my wrists, with wires poking my skin. But what really caught my attention were the scars I felt all up and down my body and across my face. The cuts from sharp, claw-like fingers that had pierced my bare skin, all aching as if on fire.

I don’t know what caused my instincts to be on such high alert, but I jerked awake when I felt hands touch my wrist. The touch was so soft, so smooth, yet so cold, so hard. My eyes shot open to bright lights reflecting back. All but one had been a white light until I realized the bright red light didn’t last long. The touch, along with the red light had lasted barely a second and then disappeared so quietly I must’ve imagined it.

I heard a door open and footsteps walk in. I felt eyes boring into my skull. I heard the footsteps walk around my legs, stopping near my head and shoulders as a middle-aged woman came into view. At first I had no idea who it was, even when a man came to stand next to her, grabbing her free hand. I noticed her right arm supporting a small child, fixed on her right hip. When I looked into the boy’s eyes, all of the events and memories rushed back into my head, and the nice, quiet, peaceful, numb feeling was pushed out.

My mouth opened and shut. I hadn’t any idea of what to say to them. I didn’t even know where I left them. I remembered hearing far away voices while in the dark, but only then did I realize they were the voices when finding me.

The door opened again and another pair of feet stopped short of mine. I slowly sat up; avoiding all of the eye contact I was receiving. I noticed the man, the doctor, was already speaking.

“-ember what we talked about earlier. She’s fine now but for later on. Keep in mind any odd behaviors and such. You neve-”

I zoned out as Phil helped me stand up. I stretched and looked at my arms and legs and froze. It didn’t make any sense. I felt flames eating the cuts that didn’t appear any more than a couple big ugly bruises on each limb.

I looked up at the doctor who was staring at me as he spoke. “She looks fine so you all can leave if you’d like as long as all of the paperwork is finished an-”

I didn’t need to hear anymore. I was already up and walking towards the door.

It was such a nice, quiet car ride home from the hospital until they started talking.

“You’re kidding me! You’re absolutely freakin’ kidding me! You think I did this to myself?!” I all but shrieked.

“The doctor said your cuts looked self-inflicted. I’m wor-”

I cut him off. “Why do you think I would do this to myself?! You really believe I’d do this,” I pointed to my aching bruise-looking cuts, “to myself?!” Phil wasn’t making any sense!

“What happened to trying, Bells? I thought you were gonna give this a chance. But there ya go again, always trying to get your way no matter what the price.”

I stared at the two of them for a moment, utterly stunned. Then I practically begged.

“Why won’t you guys believe me? Wh-” Renee cut me off.

“HOW CAN WE, BELLA?! Huh?! How am I supposed to believe you?! I want to, I really do! But are you listening to yourself?! I can’t!”

We were pulling up next to the house when I couldn’t take anymore. I threw open the car door with no intention of looking back but did. I leaned my head inside the car door for the last word.

“You guys never believe me. You guys never listen to me,” I hissed. “And we’re supposed to act like we’re some big, happy family?” I asked, incredulous. “No. I can’t do that.”

I slammed the door shut and sprinted into the house to my room, utterly ignoring Renee’s choking sob calling my name.

“Bella!” and Phil’s “just let her go.”

Alice’s P.O.V.

I found Emmett in the living room on the couch. I didn’t wait for him to say anything.

“Where’s Edward?”

I had another vision while on my way here. It wasn’t the full episode. Wasn’t clear. Wasn’t colorful. This one was short, quick, fast, and dark. But it was enough for me to figure it out, at least when I saw Renee’s face. I had no time to lose. I had to be in North Dakota this evening.

“It’s nice to see you too, Alice. And you, Jazz. Ya kno-”

“Where is Edward?!” It was as if Jasper had read my mind.

“Geese. Chill. They’re all out hunting. Give the man a break. He finally doesn’t look like a zombie anymore.”

Emmett making jokes in this extrememely tense situation was beginning to make my vision tint red. Before I realized what had happened, Jasper and I had Emmett crushed up against the wall, molding his massive frame into the décor.

“Listen, Emmett,” I hissed. “As soon as Edward gets back have him call me while he’s on his way to North Dakota. Meanwhile, Jasper and I will be flying like a bat outa hell to North Dakota to save Bella and her family’s lives from multiple causes all happening tonight. You can let Edward know that for us ‘cause we have no time to lose. See ya, Emmett.”

And just like that we were gone.

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