Notice Me

its been a really long time since i posted a story on here, been really busy. but now i am back! and with a brane new story.

its an edward and bella story (of course) edward is a big time jocky and the most popular guy in school, hes alil conceited and shallow.

bella is a no one, except for her only friend mike she basically is a loner.

she has been in love with edward for 6 years but he doesnt know she exists.

can bella reach up outta of her shell and be finally noticed?

can edward drop his player ways and finally notice a kindred spirt in bella?

heres the intro

I see you

in a crowd, but you never see me

i see your warm smile, your perfect face.

your glowing green eyes.

i see you.

but you dont see me

you never do

i would be standing by the lockers, you would pass right by.

to your buddies and her standing by

oh how i want to feel your warm touch on my skin

to feel your warm breath upon my neck.

oh how i want you to desparently

notice me.

*whatcha think? should i continue?* let me know :)

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Permalink Reply by Elizabeth on June 28, 2010 at 7:09pm

PLease Continue I Love it
Love Elizabeth

Permalink Reply by DeLaney Coats on June 28, 2010 at 11:35pm

love it please continue

Permalink Reply by M!R@ND@ on June 29, 2010 at 10:39am

sounds good!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by evermore Sweet on June 30, 2010 at 4:20pm

this is going to be really good. i hope bella does somthing kinda crazy to get out of her shell but is still her as well

Permalink Reply by star on June 30, 2010 at 4:33pm

it sounds really good....cant wait for more

Permalink Reply by §♥Heather♥§ on June 30, 2010 at 4:53pm

Oh I honestly think you should continue this. It sounds great!

Permalink Reply by Mandiberry on June 30, 2010 at 9:22pm

I like this! Continue please...keep me updated?

Permalink Reply by daZzLEr priNcesS on July 1, 2010 at 9:05am

continue please

Permalink Reply by maria on July 4, 2010 at 4:52pm

PLZZZ PLZZZZ PLZZZZ PLZZZZ PLZZZZZ PLZZZZ
WRITE IT
IT SOUNDS SOOOOOOO GREAT!!!
PLZZZZZ
:)
maria,