sounds great! please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sounds great can't wait for more!!!
The tears fell to the floor forming a little puddle. I have been crying for what seemed like decades but really it has been 2 hours. I curled up on my side and cryed even harder. My life was over, 'he' was the first person I trusted my life with and now he threw it all away. School is making my life even worse. I always imagine his family walking threw those doors and sitting down at their table. I have tried emailing Alice or Emmett and even Rosalie but all their adresses are disabled. Jacob has come and visited me From time to time but when I wouldn't answer his calls he stopped coming. The same with all my other friends Angela called me 3 times last week I just watched the phone ring. Jessica called 5 times after the fifth she never called back. What I mostly do all day is sitting in my room crying. Sometimes I think that this was all a dream, maybe Edward didn't exsist at all? Maybe none of this was real ? Maybe if I try and pinch myself or something maybe I will wake up back in Phoenix. But when I do pinch my self I open my eyes and I am still in my room feeling this pain... Charlie walked into my room
I just nodded he sighed
" Bella, are you okay?? I heard you crying and I -"
" Im Okay Dad can you just give me some alone time please ?"
I said cutting him off
" Sure Bells just er.... never mind"
He said and closed the door .......
sorry guys this is all I have ♥
I feel the pain in the writing - which is a good thing - looking forward to more.
I like the detail of each friends number of phone calls it made it more real.
thanks and I know my Chapter 1 sucks maybe I will redo it but thanks for reading!!
Keep going its really awesome!!!
love the update! update agan soon please!
Thanks and I wasnt really sure about the phone calls but I decided maybe I should put it in :)