The Twilight Saga

By:Mona [she is awesome!] also read her fanifc :) (top one)

I do not own any of the characters but a few that come later on in the story. This is my first fanfiction :D so don't be to harsh *First chapter is a little boring but it will get better! Trust me!*


Chapter 1 (BPOV)

"There's a bit of a complication," he told me, his voice carefully unworried. "I'm going to take Seth and try to straighten it out. I won't be far, but I won't listen, either. I know you don't want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go."
Only at the very end did the pain break into his voice.
I didn't want to hurt him but i didn't want to be unhappy either. I knew what I wanted and what I needed.
"Okay," I whispered
He looked at me with sadness in his eyes, and then disappeared into the forest with Seth at his side.
I forgot Jacob was waiting for me at the begining of the trees; I couldn't read his expression.
"Bella, can you hurry this up," he said in a dull voice. "I have some where to be,"
"Jake, I don't know how to say this but, im deeply in love with you," I whispered.
"What?" His voice broke.
I just told him im deeply in love with him and all he can say is what. I hope he heard me right.
"Your..your..in love with me?"
"Yes, Jacob Black, I'm in love with you!"
"I can't believe this but, what about Edward?"
"I love him but, I want to marry you,"
"Prove it,"
I walked closer and closer towards him. We were breathing hard and he wanted me to prove to him that I wanted him not Edward so i closed the gap. My arm was around his neck and pulling on his hair. My lips were moving with his and i didn't want it to stop but he pulled away.
"Point proven," His voice was full of excitement. "Well, I have to go,"
"No, don't go!"
"I don't want to miss the fun"
"Please, be careful,"
"Dont worry I will" He blinked
"I love you, Jake,"
"I love you, Bella,"
I don't know how im going to brake it to Edward. I need to hold back the tears or I will make it worse. How am i supose to tell him with out being to harsh. A voice broke my concentration.
"Bella" Edward choked out.

Cliffhanger :)

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I don't know how im going to brake it to Edward. I need to hold back the tears or I will make it worse. How am i supose to tell him with out being to harsh. A voice broke my concentration.
"Bella" Edward choked out.

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Chapter 2 (EPOV)

"Bella"
"Edward, I have something to tell you" croaked Bella.
"Yes, what is it?"
"I don't want to be with you, I want Jake"
I cant believe she chose Jacob over me. She was my everything, she can't do this to me. What would i be with out her. She made me feel human and not like the monster I am. If I can cry I would of drowned in my own tears.
"Bella, you can't do this to me"
"Im so sorry Edward, but didn't you want me to live a normal and happy life"
"yes, but,"
"And didn't you say Jake was a better choice for me"
"yes, but,"
"Edward, please stop making it harder then it is"
"Okay Bella, if that's what you want"
"Goodbye Edward"
I couldn't control myself any longer. I blocked out everyones thoughts. I ran for what felt like years and I destroyed everthing in sight. I knew she was to good for me I just didn't want to admit it. I felt like a stubborn little boy, I wanted to glue his head to a toilet seat and sit on it and hope Bella would leave him. Bella telling me that she didn't want me felt worse then being tranformed into a vampire. I would always love Isabella Swan.
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* I dedicate this chapter to Mona (she is super awesome) *
* Sorry it's so short *
u dedicated it to me awwww :D :D


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This is awesome!!!I LOVE it.
updates pleaase Ash. :)
Im chelsie by the way :)

If you have time please read my FF..only 1 chap so far..
http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/devoti...
thanks i'll read it!
Its brilliant :)

No problem,, an dthankyouu!
ohhhhhhhh, me likey
i wonder what will happen next
you have a great start,
so keep up the good work
and keep me updated!
and post soon
xoxo
Thanks and no problem
wow..this is a really good story :]...i cant believe bella told edward that!!! anyways,please keep me updated :)
awsome!!! This is sad and happy and.....MORE!!!!
lols
GREAT! keep me posted! It kinda moves really fast though...
yeah i knoo

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